[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2020 12:54 am Title: Chapter 21: HUSTLING AND SHUFFLING
Just reading this again. Lindsay doesn't even know about Justin's money from the Taylor electronics sale or the mistresses condos does she (about $12/13 mil?). Can't wait till she eventually finds out, she might spontaneously combust!
Take care
Deb L
Date: Feb 15, 2020 12:50 am Title: Chapter 21: HUSTLING AND SHUFFLING
Oh oh oh you know what this means. Melanie is biologically related to Gus. Can't wait for Lindsey to find out. Tippy
Date: Feb 15, 2020 12:50 am Title: Chapter 21: HUSTLING AND SHUFFLING
Oh oh oh you know what this means. Melanie is biologically related to Gus. Can't wait for Lindsey to find out. Tippy
Date: Oct 14, 2018 5:09 pm Title: Chapter 21: HUSTLING AND SHUFFLING
Okay, let me get this out of the way first... Gardner and Lindsay having sex? EWWWW! LOL! Brain bleach please! A very LARGE bottle! LOL!
Well, now I feel better! Whew!
Love what you did with your plot bunny! Brian and Mel are twins!!! And Brian fainted! OMG! I can't wait to find out what happens when he wakes up and then when Justin and the others find out!
*HUGS*
Deb
[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2018 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 21: HUSTLING AND SHUFFLING
Please finish this wonderful story please
[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2018 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 21: HUSTLING AND SHUFFLING
Please finish this wonderful story please
Author's Response:
Hi Amy! Thanks so much for reading my story. I have every intention of writing on it again very VERY soon. I'm reworking my writing schedule after a short absence due to surgery back in May. You can certainly look forward to an update soon!
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Sep 16, 2018 11:41 am Title: Chapter 21: HUSTLING AND SHUFFLING
OMG! I just caught up on the story... and you just managed to kill my usually long rambling! I'm speechless! I really hope you will now update this soon! It's been four months, so I can about imagine the readers that were reading it at the time it was posted are really looking forward to one.
TWINS! I know it's always referred to Mel being Brian in female form. But TWINS! Holy Mother Of God! If Ima knew Brian's name, why didn't they ever contact him? How were they separated? Gave one up for adoption? Stolen as a Baby? Is that why Jack beat him, knowing he wasn't his? SO MANY QUESTIONS! Then with Brian fainting... My shock turned into giggles. Too bad Justin hadn't gone with them. Brian might need him now, to help ground him. I'm so glad Brian and Mel have made peace with each other prior to this. Lindsay is going to be so upset! Speaking of Lindsay, who is gonna get screwed over? Lindsay or Gardner? Good thing Marcie and Cynthia are around, and Jennifer, Constance and George are around the corner.
I know Ethan is suppose to enter this story, but after everything B/J have been through together, starting the business together, legally raising the nephews together, JUST HOW? I cringe thinking of getting to that part.
Hope to see an update soon. I liked the way you formatted this story with sidebars.
Hugs, Cathy
Date: Jun 27, 2018 8:16 am Title: Chapter 21: HUSTLING AND SHUFFLING
Omg what!! Now that is a real twist and one that will spin everything another way
Date: May 20, 2018 8:42 pm Title: Chapter 21: HUSTLING AND SHUFFLING
WHAT? WTF as Brian would tell if he wasn't on the ground. That's so unexpected and weird. Sure they act the same way, but twins?
Gardner and Lindsay: this is so awful; they are preparing something really damaging for Brian, but Cynthia is keeping an eagle eye on the place.
Date: May 20, 2018 8:07 am Title: Chapter 21: HUSTLING AND SHUFFLING
Whst the hell. You can not end with that.
Date: May 19, 2018 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 21: HUSTLING AND SHUFFLING
OMG! Twins! You have left me speechless! All I can say is this is such a great fic and this chapter has a lot going but that final revelation... priceless!!!! I love it!
*HUGS*
Deb
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2018 9:10 pm Title: Chapter 21: HUSTLING AND SHUFFLING
Wow. First we have Lindsay and Gardner thinking they're going to pull a fast one. Then Jen and Gardner's exwife, did we learn about the son that Gardner pushed away? Things are moving on with Cynthia and Marcie working to foil Lindsay and Gardner's plot. Next you top it off with learning that Mel and Brian are twins! The story behind that should be really good.
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2018 7:42 pm Title: Chapter 21: HUSTLING AND SHUFFLING
What a Way To Bury The Lead With Another Cliffhanger!!! <Applause>
Did Joan steal Brian from the hospital?
Lindsay is going to be so pissed when she finds out she had her brother in law's son, of course no one tell her until after she signs away her parental rights <smirks>
Lindsay must have learned negotiating from Mommy, no ever told her not to spread her legs to get ahead?
I don't think Lindsay has fully grasped what actually working means and that the client has the final say on designs and that no one waits for her to draw a straight line while twirling her hair, and I don't think Gardner has thought about what having Lindsay working for him will entail, she will be whining more than Michael (Is That Possible??) and complaining more too (Seriously Is That Even Possible???)
Wonder what George is going to do with those photos of Kip and his Uncle??
Did Constances by any chance come into her marriage with more money than Gardner and did her money help with his purchase of Ryder Advertising and his subsequent sexual harassment payments?
Perhaps Constances would like to have her money back with interest? <evil smirk>
Sounds like Mel might be getting her Happiness Back thanks to Leda ;)
Michael in the gutter is an experience he should really get use to lol
Fantastic, Surprising Update!!
Hope The Next Chapter Will Be Up Soon <Begs on knees> Please