[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2017 1:53 pm Title: Chapter 13: PROGRESS Part 1
It's good to have this back. Love how Jennifer and the girls let Craig know things aren't okay with them. Michael seems to think he can get back in with Brian. I hope not.
Date: Sep 16, 2017 12:09 pm Title: SIDEBAR CHAPTER FIVE: JUSTIN HAD IT RIGHT Part 2
💕💕💕💕Thanks for the update. Patiently (?) waiting for more. Love your stories💕💕💕💕
Date: Sep 16, 2017 10:21 am Title: SIDEBAR CHAPTER FIVE: JUSTIN HAD IT RIGHT Part 2
Whoa! Bravo Shavonne! That was a master entrapment and Dixon felt straight into it. What a nasty person. I hope he will find some horny Bubba very soon!
Date: Sep 16, 2017 10:04 am Title: SIDEBAR CHAPTER FOUR: JUSTIN HAD IT RIGHT Part 1
What a good laugh at the end! I could only imagine this bigot working at the Big Q!
The rest of the chapter is full of revelations, scary facts. It's great that they have affidavits to backup what Justin has to endure and that the court couldn't trust without witness' confirmations.
The positive thing is that Mel might have a second chance with the DA.
Date: Sep 16, 2017 8:37 am Title: Chapter 13: PROGRESS Part 1
When I saw the new chapter I checked where I stopped commenting and it seems I missed the last 2 chapters, which is a pity as it's a great one: Craig being punched and kicked down!
It's also the birth of Kinnetik and the rebirth of Justin (at least, the beginning).
Date: Jul 04, 2017 11:29 pm Title: SIDEBAR CHAPTER FOUR: JUSTIN HAD IT RIGHT Part 1
reading this makes me wish that justin got more jusyice than he did in the show
Date: Jun 19, 2017 8:16 pm Title: SIDEBAR CHAPTER FOUR: JUSTIN HAD IT RIGHT Part 1
That was intense though I must say. I'm a sucker for court drama, so this definitely wetted my appetite. Perkins is going down! Serves the asshole right. Mind you, it's nothing compared to what's going to happen to Dixon and Craig. Again soooooooo deserving of whatever happens to them!
Thank goodness Mel has this covered. Dispite her past feelings for Brian, she adores Justin and will do everything in her power to have everyone her deserves it pay a high price.
Impressed with the input of teh affidavits. the screws are tightening. Quite brave of those to come forward. I knew Hobbs had it all planned out, but this information certainly makes it clear to all. Man alive!!!
For prev chapter...Heart was breaking for Justin! Oh man. He's trying so hard, but he's getting slammed right and left. He'll get through it though I have no doubt. he has too many people supporting and loving him.
OMG!!!!!! that scene with Craig...THAT WAS THE BEST EVER!!!!!!!!!!!! Woohoooooooo! Absolutely brilliant! Oh how I wish we were able to actually see it. No way my imagination did it justice!
Michael is soooooooo screwed! He's goingto lose his job. for some unknown reason he seems to think that simply apolgzing will make everything alright with Brian. We know it won't thankfully, but it's kind of fun to watch his dilusions. lol
I was SO happy to see an update to this!
thank you!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jun 19, 2017 1:43 pm Title: SIDEBAR CHAPTER FOUR: JUSTIN HAD IT RIGHT Part 1
Wow! Love it, how it's all coming together...question though, all this conversation: Is this taking place with just the few of them in court, before the judge & whoever else is going to be present, attend? Is this just 'casual' conversation without being sworn in? It seemed offical yet not...was I reading it correctly?
Author's Response:
Good morning Shine! There is definitely dialogue before the witnesses come into the room, just as there would be in any other meeting. But once the witnesses arrive, it's all very official. I tried to stick with civil litigation protocol as much as I could. I always tend to write what I know and research what I don't, so you all can get a full picture of what's happening. So with a deposition, there is first the written statement of events from each party, then a sworn-in testimony which is visually recorded and is meant to confirm or elaborate on what the written testimony revealed. The Judge's ruling (which does occur in front of the judge) hands out the penalty to the defendent, if there is one. With Perkins, St. James had already paid their part of the asked for amount, which was 200 grand- the full amount of Justin's tuition all four years he attended St. James Academy. The rest is owed by Dixon and Perkins per the stipulation in the document, which is 50 grand each. So, St. James paid $100,000.
In this case, and taking a little creative license to make it all even more compelling, Dixon's testimony is also going to bring a new character to the mix. Then the key witnesses are up afterward. That's definitely going to be FUN for me to write! It really is like watching the show, how it possibly would have been done but for time and effort, in my head.
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Apr 22, 2017 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 12: DISCLOSURE
Ok, I'm all caught up again! Next chapter, please. TAG
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2017 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 8- LOCKED UP
Love how strong Vic is here. TAG
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2017 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 7: CONSEQUENCES
Really enjoying Operation Justin's Justice. Lol. TAG
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2017 5:50 pm Title: Chapter 6: THOUGHT-PROVOKING CONVERSATIONS
Grrrrrr, Lindsey . . . TAG
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2017 6:42 am Title: Chapter 4: EYES WIDE OPEN
Can't believe you're writing Michael in such a non-negative light. Lol. Now, Lindsey on the other hand is being a total shrew. We so need to get rid of her. TAG
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2017 5:03 am Title: Chapter 3: SQUARE ONE
Grrrr - hate Stockwell so much! Glad to see that the lawyers are gonna pursue a civil suit against Hobbs though - that was always one of my biggest pet peeves with the show. It's a no brainer case - especially after Hobbs confesses to the criminal case. After that, the only real question is damages - ie how much $ Justin can collect. He wouldn't have to worry about Craig paying for college or anything else ever again. Oops, better put my lawyer hat away and go back to reading. Lol. TAG
Date: Apr 16, 2017 3:54 am Title: Chapter 2: WHAT DREAMS MAY COME
I've got my 'Justice Warrior' hat on today, which means I liked your chapter but I would have had Daphne get much tougher with her speech. *sigh* I just hate injustice. I just hate that we still live in a world where idiots think what something like Hobbs did is at all okay. I just finished watching footage of the Alt-right attacks on the Tax March in Berkeley and the instigators there were spouting the same shit as Hobbs said in this TV series that's 20 yrs old. How can this STILL be happening? How can we stop this? We all need to be Daphne and speak up. Damn it! . . . Okay, rant over. Sorry about that. Great chapter. Apparently it got me really riled up. TAG
[Report This]Date: Apr 15, 2017 7:10 am Title: Chapter 1: HOW DID YOU GET HERE?
I have to read this over cause I got lost. But that means you'll get all new reviews too - we'll both be winners that way! TAG
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2017 6:15 am Title: Chapter 12: DISCLOSURE
It's time for another law suit. This time with Michael's name on it.
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2017 6:00 am Title: Chapter 11: RECOGNITION, Tantrums and T-R-O-U-B-L-E with a Capital T
So Kip is related to Bellweather? Will wonders never cease. Go Ted!
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2017 5:47 am Title: SIDEBAR CHAPTER THREE: The PINCH HITTER
Hearing Bryces testimonie was heartbreaking. Now we have Ted in jail? The story behind that has to be good.
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2017 5:33 am Title: SIDEBAR CHAPTER TWO: NEW FRIENDS AND OLD FOES
So an old 'friend' of Mel's is coming in on the case. Daphne is probably one of their best witnesses.
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2017 5:14 am Title: Chapter 10- THE RETURN
Love how Jennifer set Lindsay straight, not that she listened. Wonder what happens to Michael once everyone he's talked dirt about find out. Hopefully Ben will see that Cynthia is right about Michael.
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2017 3:36 am Title: SIDEBAR CHAPTER ONE- Preparing for Battle
I just love the way this is going. PitBull Mel has the DA by the horns.
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2017 3:25 am Title: Chapter 9- CARVING A NEW PATH
David may find he's well out of it. If Brian wasn't upset with Michael before when he finds out what Mikey has said to the press will be the final straw.
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2017 2:47 am Title: Chapter 8- LOCKED UP
Between Deb and Michael I don't know who is worse. At least it looks like Vic's gotten through to her.
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2017 2:29 am Title: Chapter 7: CONSEQUENCES
Justin is going to be one rich fag. And Lindsay better not try anything, because Brian will be on her case. Love how helpful Ted and Emmett are being. Michael on the other hand is in for trouble of his own.