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Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2019 5:05 pm Title: CHAPTER 27: MIAMI HAPPENINGS

The link between Brian and Justin is tightening and they are getting closer by the minute. Justin is very assertive and it couldn't happen at a better time.

Brian may need some time to acknowledge his "new" family and I hope Mel will help him.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2019 8:26 pm Title: CHAPTER 26: DUN, DUN, DUH, DUNG, DUMBBBB…

Whoa! What a heavy and dense chapter!

Lindsay is in a very bad situation: she might be out of jail, but for how much longer?

Joan is living in the land of delusion: she will have a hard wake-up call soon enough.

I love this "That trilogy of twatery is to be avoided at all costs. And if you add Lindsay into the mix, you have a circle of cunt-ery"!

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2019 1:04 pm Title: CHAPTER 28: RELEASING THE CAGED BIRDS

Hmm, another great update. Thank you! Those little fingers of yours aren't getting any rest... but that's okay... we are reaping the REWARDS!

Lindsay, Lindsay... you will NEVER be, or NEVER were in contention to being Mrs B.A. Kinney. Get that through your head. Also, if Gardner was smart... he'd realize the ONLY reason Lindsay would want to be Mistress of the Manor, is because of the hefty bank account and clout attached to it. At least he has her in the guest house. but if Gardner thinks his WASP wife won't have proof of infidelities... he's an even bigger idiot.

Michael. Is. An. Idiot. Does he NOT realize that you are NOT supposed to speak the truth to your counselor if you are trying to get them to being your boyfriend? Even if it's under false pretensions. The way Ben spoke to Michael, maybe he's taking Cynthia's words to heart. But WHY did he bail Michael out in the first place? That part just doesn't make sense to me. Where was Deb?

If Michael thinks he is so much better for Brian because he was there during the years he was abused... well, that's a good reason not to be. He has a hard time seeing the Brian that is an adult, capable of love, and not the detached boy that didn't want to be close to anyone. Brian doesn't want sympathy or hero worship.

And is it Justin Taylor's fault Emmett and Ted are no longer speaking to him?  HOW can he place that blame at Justin's feet? It sounds to me that Justin, Emmett and Ted should ALSO get restraining orders. Along with Mel and one for Gus. Yeah... I don't trust the little bastard.

Brian and Justin need one against Lindsay, too.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2019 10:26 am Title: CHAPTER 28: RELEASING THE CAGED BIRDS

thanks for update

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2019 4:21 am Title: CHAPTER 28: RELEASING THE CAGED BIRDS

Once over the obsession with show, one see how vain, immature is Micheal, Lindsay and Deb characters are. Can not get over their pathetic attempt to interfere between Brian & Justin.

Absolutely No Mercy or Pity whatever gonna happen to Moron Micheal & Lunatic Lindsay (worst excuses for friends ever). Brian, Justin are better without them. Wonderful written.

Hugs ðŸ™‚

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2019 3:37 am Title: CHAPTER 28: RELEASING THE CAGED BIRDS

Oh Gardner is going to find out in excruciating detail that when you think with your dick you lose brain cells and they come with a hefty price tag.

Lindsay is about to learn that being the mystery of occasional bedmate isn't fun when all your dirty laundry is aired for every to read it watch to their heart's content.

Michael thinks (Ha Funny) that Justin is like Lindsay but if have her really took the time to get to know Justin he would see that Justin doesn't want everything handed to him,he wants to earn his way and find fulfillment in being a success as an artist not the wife of a successful man.

Lindsay like Michael wants Brian to take care of her while Brian wants a lover, partner, friend and some day husband who is his equal in intellect and drive to succeed.

Brian will screw a beautiful moron but he will never see them as his equal as his best friends Michael and Lindsay should know that but they are too wrapped up in the desire to admit the truth.

What the Hell does Michael know about being an abused child he grew up loved with Debbie and Vic, seeing a few bruises doesn't mean he has one iota what life is like for an abused, unwanted child.

Ben would be smart to walk away before his IQ starts to drop.

Yes can't wait for Brian, Justin, Mel and the kids to get back to drop their enemies in the garbage where they belong.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2019 3:34 am Title: CHAPTER 28: RELEASING THE CAGED BIRDS

Sadly Lindsay and Michael think they are entitled to things that they aren't.  Even people pointing the truth out doesn't work.

Reviewer: DavidR Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2019 1:50 am Title: CHAPTER 27: MIAMI HAPPENINGS

Hi,

There are so many issues and wondering what happens from here.  I think it is best to just say how much I am enjoying this story.  You are amazing. 

I don’t see a solution to Peter and John.  Like Brian, there is no way they be raised by Joan. Is there anyone we know who does have some biologically connection to them who can help? How about contacting their father?  Could he change giving up his rights to the State and have his rights given to Brian?  I wonder, but I will just have to wait and see what happens.  Where does Gus wind up? 

Thanks again for the story.  I could go on for many screens.

DavidR

 



Author's Response:

HUGS, My Darling David! And thank you for the compliment. It's always great to know that the work I've put into creating these stories and situations is appreciated, but moreso that you are enjoying it. To set your mind at ease, I will tell you that there is a viable solution to the John and Peter situation, but it's going to take time to set it up first. It's definitely going to surprise you. We can all agree that Joan Kinney is certainly NOT in the running for mother of the year! Besides, she will have her own situation to deal with, and sooner than she thinks. As for Gus, currently he is safe and sound with Mel, Brian, Justin and Daphne. And with the trouble Miss 'Plans' is in, I doubt he'll be returning to Lindsay's care...ever!

More soon to come!

Happy Reading!

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2019 8:03 am Title: CHAPTER 26: DUN, DUN, DUH, DUNG, DUMBBBB…

Some clarifications first:  First paragraph:

but he had an awesome amount of respect for her aunt and uncle. (is George Leda's uncle? but how could Nathan have respect for Virginia?)

Rod nodded as he looked through the thorough investigative reports. (RON - right?)

he did recognize two of the blonde women, a brunette, (I'm assuming Jennifer, Cynthia, and WHO?)

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You know how foolish and uncomfortable I would have been if I had been Nathan? Here he is standing in a room full of strangers, RON and Lynette, and having his affair with Nancy - while she was Ron's wife - brought out in ful blooming color.  Let's just hope he takes into account all the warnings and information he was given. He rules that baby goes back to Lindsay, or drops any hints of what was discussed at George's with any of these women, he can kiss his bench goodbye. Besides, he's a judge in a court of law, (I know it would never be the case of Ron and Nancy) but he could be named in an alienation of affection lawsuit if Ron wanted to get nasty. Why sully his hands with an ugly, loose woman like that???

HOLY HELL IN A HANDBASKET!!!  Joan Kinney is off her rocker!! Talk about a disciple of the devil!  That woman wouldn't know God and Christianity if it bit her in the ass! She gives good Christian mother's a bad name. She preaches God, and does the work of the devil.

Couldn't Lindsay be charged with attempted felony theft at the bank? It was bad enough she was trying to move money from her and Melanie's account, but she was trying to move money from BRIAN'S account. Or would Brian have to press charges???

Isn't there a special place for someone like Lindsay that harbors all these illusions??? Only woman Brian made love to, when Brian and her got married, wedding trousseau (isn't she aware all those clothes would be outdated), stay at her parents' home, Alienation of Affection filed against Justin.... this woman is crazy insane! And the last straw was: all the fault of that blond, husband-stealing bastard named Justin Taylor! Okay, she left "crazy insane" someplace 100 mikes back. But why press your luck with a cabbie calling the police for non payment??? I would think refusal to pay a cabbie driver would get you a call to the police versus a restaurant.

I'm so looking forward to Craig's first day on the farm. Maybe Fred has pigs...

Mikey, Mikey, Mikey...  so the clunk on the head appeared to have done some temporary forgetfulness. He can remember the stupid article and following Emmett, but he can't remember screeching and then hitting his head. Nice type of amnesia. And his loose mouth won't shut up... I hope he talks that way to the judge.  I really liked this one: He still couldn’t help but feel that everything that was happening to him was all Justin’s fault. If it wasn’t for him, the guys would have forgiven him by now. That was the way it had always been; the way it should always be! YOU’RE LYING! BRIAN WOULD NEVER DO THAT TO ME!

BTW... is there a writing class that teaches how to write delusional???

Love this ongoing saga. Can't wait to see what the next chapter will bring,

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

Hi Cathy,

 

Leda's aunt has passed and now her uncle is moving to London to be with his son. Leda isn't related to George, although their families are both well-known and well-respected within Elite society. That is how Nathan knows Jennifer (blonde), Lynette (blonde), Constance (red with blonde highlights), AND Marcie (brunette). 

Sorry, I made a typing error on Ron, but you are correct there... I'll fix it soon.

 

As for Michael, he often has selective memory, especially during his uber-idiot, sanctimonious tirades in which he's quick to point out other's flaws while negating his own. So it would stand to reason that in the case of Brian and Melanie being twins, his mind would rebel at the idea and therefore push that fact as far deep into his subconscious until he has no other choice than to face the reality.   

 

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2019 4:59 am Title: CHAPTER 25: A MEETING OF THE MINDS (Part 2) and the ETERNALLY MINDLESS

FINALLY - I'm getting around to this. I just reread the two previous chapters before this to get "recaught up" and get into the "Groove".

I enjoyed the 'meeting of the minds' conversation. They all really have Brian and Justin's back. I'm still curious how Ron was aware of Brian and Mel being siblings. Also, what all Hank has in that report, and if he will be able to shine any light as to WHY Nancy wanted the info and if she has had him do this previously. How very stupid of her to tell Hank Ron would pay him. She won't be able to even find a body to help warm her bed when Ron gets through with her.

As far as Lindsay getting off without seeing a judge, (correct me if I'm wrong)... but CPS has all the information along with the hospital. So, do they not have all the info about the case so that if they contacted the DA, Lindsay could be brought in on all the charges again?  What about the bank officials that witnessed the arrest? What about the arresting officer? Just because she was let go from jail, doesn't mean that aren't witnesses to the crime committed. I AM looking forward to the fools who helped getting theirs, though.

And pray tell, more good news regarding Claire??? OUCH!!!

And Michael, I remember commenting to you that let's hope he has amnesia when he wakes up!!  Screetching Indeed!!  I hope he's going to a jail cell for a while!

Do you have a picture of how Shavonne would look? Just curious as how you see her in your mind's eye.

It's so good to be back!!!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2019 3:49 pm Title: CHAPTER 27: MIAMI HAPPENINGS

❤ Justin is a keeper. Love the way he never let Brian feel any less (In Qaf, after Stockwell, during Cancer). Lindsay, Micheal, Joan, (Deb too) are total fool, if they think "Justin is a kid" . Proven yet so far, Justin don't kid when it comes to Brian. Its good see Brian and Mel banterings along real family.

Curious, what Syke left for Brian? what will happen Next? Also in Pitts. But More likely The Delusional Twins (M&L) Rolling on their As***.

ThankYou, for update. Hugs ðŸ’•

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2019 11:07 am Title: CHAPTER 27: MIAMI HAPPENINGS

WOW what a story, love it

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2019 1:12 pm Title: CHAPTER 27: MIAMI HAPPENINGS

Justin's 1500 SAT is never more evident than now.  He sees a problem and works out the solution methodically.  It's obvious that their is more to this story then is known at the moment.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2019 3:16 am Title: CHAPTER 27: MIAMI HAPPENINGS

Yes Joan and Lindsay are cut from the same cloth they see those around them as tools to use to get their way and when they are of no further use them they are discarded like a used tissue.

It not just avarice and greed that runs through their veins it is the need to be seen as the Alpha Female the desire, they feel if they are in control of the strings then they can make their puppets dance to any tube they choose.

If course Brian always had the the power to severe the ties so they browbeat him to submission something Michael and Debbie enjoyed because it guaranteed that Brian would never look deeper and figure out that he should've tossed them in a volcano years ago.

Melanie (When she is being Bitchy to Brian she is Mel) is seeing that her behavior towards Brian in the past was wrong not just because he is her twin but because she is finally opening her eyes (Slowly) to see that she was used, abused and manipulated by a Cow with Armani, Prada Dreams but is barely above White Trash even in the Wasp Nest.

Brian and Melanie have quite a new road to build and rebuild to find their own peace.

Justin is being subtle by pointing out what was always there concerning Lindsay, Michael, Deb but he is not going to fight to get them to see the truth and admit that they were abused, the is a battle he will stand by to fight but the power they were Allowed to take Brian and Melanie must take back.

Mendel is going to fight to make sure his nephew and niece are protected and strong enough together to fight back, they are giving him the strength to not give up just yet.

Taking the next few days to gather enough protection to go back to Pittsburgh fortified to look at the enemies and go "Is That The Best You Got?" is what they need because this fight is going to get uglier .

And out of everyone looking to destroy Brian, Justin and Melanie Lindsay is to be the one they have to be the one they most have to prepare for cause she will kill to win.

I do wonder what Skye has waiting for Brian?

And what The TK Army has to keep the others occupied?

What is Deb up to now?

Thanks For the Update Really Made My Night😃😃

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2019 8:34 am Title: CHAPTER 26: DUN, DUN, DUH, DUNG, DUMBBBB…

I'm really excited to see how Brian and Melanie react to this incredible news. And the others too.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2019 8:01 pm Title: CHAPTER 26: DUN, DUN, DUH, DUNG, DUMBBBB…

Wonderful update!! ✨

Glad there will lawsuit on Mikey's whiny mouth, his screeching. I Don't know how Brian, Justin and others ever stand him in Qaf. Micheal just hides so behind double faced lies. Emmett is infact a beautiful example of Proud Queen. Micheal should take lessen how to be Mature. More imp. from Justin & Brian.

"Trinity of Twatry" lol. Emett right, Baby is genius. Suberb! writing. Enjoyed it. Hugs❤

& Whatever Carl thinks, hope it works out. Curious that How will Lindsay & Micheal & Joan (twerking Dumba*** trio) will react of knowing Brian & Justin being Out of their reach with Mel, Gus, Peter, John.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2019 12:42 am Title: CHAPTER 26: DUN, DUN, DUH, DUNG, DUMBBBB…

Love how you manage to get everyone into this chapter along with wonderful information.  Though I do miss finding out what's going on with Brian and Melanie as well as the kids.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2019 10:58 pm Title: CHAPTER 26: DUN, DUN, DUH, DUNG, DUMBBBB…

I do hope Lindsay does try to use Justin for Alienation of Affection cause it will look good in the press when she is charged for Attempted Murder and Accessory Before the Fact, Child Endangerment, Stalking and Blackmail plus a host of others now that she is about to be arrested again.

Carl would be smart to.get this arrest in tropical and on video.

whomever helped Vance and Lindsay better have an excellent lawyer in retainer because they will pay.

Joan should stop dreaming and just go back to her bottle because when Brian and the courts get through with he she won't have to worry about praying for her children's sins cause hers will be quite legendary.

Nathan being told therewith about his whore/sister will protect him from the games Lindsay and Nancy will try to play, time for The Peterson Women to learn that being a Whore doesn't benefit the Whore and being Vile means eventually the tables Always turn back on you 3xs worser.

Craig is going to get quite some exercise which might protect him in prison for five seconds lol

Brian, Justin and Melanie are going to be quite surprised when they find out what is going on in Pittsburgh, of course by the time they get back their Army will be ready to arm them for battle.

Lindsay and Michael keep forgetting that Brian doesn't do anything he doesn't want to do and the fact that he doesn't want to do them is Hilarious to everyone else watching the show from the sidelines.

Thanks For the Wonderful Long Chapter just what I needed today😄

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2019 4:52 pm Title: CHAPTER 25: A MEETING OF THE MINDS (Part 2) and the ETERNALLY MINDLESS

Very dense chapter! Thank you for the update!

Ron and Leda are quite good when dealing with the Peterson "ladies".

Lindsay's next hours/days are going to be busy and bumpy.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2019 1:30 am Title: CHAPTER 25: A MEETING OF THE MINDS (Part 2) and the ETERNALLY MINDLESS

Well it looks like Brian and Justin's Squad will soon have the information and people they need to take on the F Squad.

Whomever helped Gardner get Lindsay out of jail and not going through the proper channels are going to wish they had called in sick because they are about to learn what it means to be Screwed Without Lube or Mercy.

Yeah Lindsay would try to play all soft sweet apologetic then when that doesn't work she is running to the police playing concern mother.

Having her and Nancy scrambling with their cohorts to save themselves should keep them out of everyone's hair for a little while which gives The T-K Squad time to get everything read for the next round of stupidity.

Wonder what Joan is going to do without Brian's money or Claire to hide behind?

Michael in jail is good but his mouth wired shut and his fingers broken would be better lol

When Brian, Justin and Melanie get back they will have quite a fight on their hands and the ammunition to win.

 

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2019 11:21 pm Title: CHAPTER 25: A MEETING OF THE MINDS (Part 2) and the ETERNALLY MINDLESS

please don't keep us waiting too long before u update!!!

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2018 9:41 am Title: CHAPTER 24: A MEETING OF THE MINDS

FINALLY ... I got caught up on this. I have been so busy what with the holiday, my mother's birthday, WRITING, (yes, believe it or not, my first story), that this kind of got forgotten. Remembering I had a couple WIP's to catch up on, I went searching through the stories.  Anyways.......

This was a good update. We learned of the inner-workings of the futher staff of Kinnetik, and their plans for Gardner. I always get a kick when Todd is brought into a story. I haven't read many with him, but the reaction is always the same. Backroom Todd? *smirk*

So Nancy's little plan to have the P.I. get information about Brian and Mel, is going to blow up in her face. I wonder if she didn't have the money to pay for the files, or if Hanks wasn't able to get ahold of Nancy, so he called Ron instead. Regardless, Nancy doesn't get the information, but Ron will. Because I have no doubt that Ron will pay for them, if only to see what Nancy wanted. And just HOW did Ron know about Mel and Brian?

We haven't heard from Michael since he fell and hit his head on the table, (that was such a shame - NOT) I gotta wonder how he's faring. Hopefully with his head connecting with the table it's caused memory failure.

Is it 5:00 yet? Has Lindsay made it home? If not, she may be dumpster diving to have a change of clothes.

Will we get the lowdown on how Rudyard is faring at the farm? I laugh just at the thought of that. I wonder who will come up with the most dreadful chores he can do. Molly or Fred?

Thanks for all your updates you give us.

HUGS ~ Cathy

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2018 6:06 pm Title: CHAPTER 24: A MEETING OF THE MINDS

Hanks can be paid for the information he has collected and get a bonus to give Nancy false information, I am sure everyone in that room would be willing to pay for him to go on vacation in style to get their hands on what he has gathered for Turnstile Nancy.

It would be a good idea to lead Nancy, Lindsay, Gardner and their cohorts on a merry chase  that ends with their destruction.

Sounds like Brian and Justin have very loyal people willing to follow them to Unimaginable Heights of Success.

Lynette is making plans to be more than a socialite she is going to be a better mother and wife than Nancy, plus a better daughter, mother and woman than Nancy or Lindsay could ever be on a good day.

Perhaps The Hobbs Family want Brian and Justin to take it all?

Brian and Justin have quite an Army watching the backs, fronts and sides together they will be Unstoppable.

Thanks for the Update:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2018 1:03 pm Title: CHAPTER 24: A MEETING OF THE MINDS

Always nice to see more on this.  So much going on.  Looking forward to more soon.

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Date: Oct 23, 2018 11:19 am Title: CHAPTER 23: HISTORY, MISERY AND COMPANY Part 2

Ahhh... I finally got it. I think where I got screwed up was when you inserted "They miscalculated how determined Kevin Kinney and Jacob Levine were to see their wills fulfilled. For Jack's father's part, he made sure to see his choice found a way to drug Jack. Joan's father was almost desperate to see his daughter married off." To me, I interpreted it as Kevin and Jacob were best friends, wanting to see Jack and Joan married. I really thank you for taking the time with this.

It seems strange that when Jacob found out Melanie was pregnant and had died, he didn't set out to find Mendel and Frayda to at least see what the sex of Melanie's child was. I'm also surprised Jack didn't leave Joan when he realized she was farther along than when he supposedly slept her after he was drugged, knowing the child couldn't be his. The 70's weren't that outdated that he couldn't get away with divorce. Or even just abandon Joan. What did he have to lose? He had already lost his inheritance of the shipping business, so why not leave and go out on his own? Why be straddled with a wife whom he didn't love, and a child who wasn't his? As far as Brian goes, I would think Jack would have loved him more than anything, being he was Melanie's child, who he genuinely loved. Although I suppose when Jack was drunk, all he could see was how much Brian resembled Melanie, and hated him for what he had lost with Melanie. When Mendel and Frayda explained to Jack in the hospital about the baby, did they leave out the fact that there were actually two babies?

And, what happens to John and Peter now? Now that Brian knows the truth about them, and knows they are not blood-related? Will he still want to keep them?

Cathy

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