Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2017 6:55 pm Title: Chapter 14

I also hope Mel is serious. It would be best for Gus and Jenny. 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 14

First off.No boundaries for Ryder! Nope! None!! Let the man go for broke! Far too enjoyable! HAHHA!

Now there's Mel. OK...comingin through the bedroom window....WAY too creepy for words! while I'm thrilled that she's finally seeing herself for the selfish C-word that she is, I'm just hopig that the damage that she's already done is fixable. How far is she willing to go on order to make amends? Glad she spoke with Ben, even more so that Ben is there out of concern for the kids, adn isn't taking anything Mel says or does at face value. Whatever happens, he's going to protect the kids. Period. A bit nervous as to what's going to happen next. while I certainly hope she's being honest adn intends to get her shit together, I also hope that Jenny is able to stay at Britin with Gus. Brian adn Justin will fight tooth adn nail to keep Gus withthem, but they really don't have a leg tostand on when it comes to Jenny. 

Eager to see where all those goes.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 2:47 pm Title: Chapter 14

Ryder is a pisser!!! LMAO! I enjoy his character so much! I'm glad that Justin's words to Mel, coupled with Dusty and Ben's, have seemingly made a difference in how Mel thinks and processes her actions in regards to the treatment of the kids. Perhaps with Ben's advice and assistance, Mel will be able to find her way back to happy so that she can become an effective parent instead of the emotionally-abusive one she's been. As for her personally, I think she needs to take a page out of Ben's book and leave Lindsay. She has to see that all of her emotional baggage begins and ends with the harridan. At least she's recognizing that Brian has done nothing to encourage Michael or Lindsay in their delusions. That's a start, I suppose. Do I trust her fully? A snowball chance of becoming an icicle in hell has a greater probability but I remain cautiously hopeful that she means every single words she's saying.

As for Ryder's joke on Michael last chapter...OMG!!! OMFG!!!! ROFLMAO!!!! That!! THAT was EPIC!!!! Michael and Superman underroos standing in the middle of the Diner was classic!! Drew's reaction had me hiccuping with both horror and laughter by turns. That will be gossip fodder for the Queens of Liberty for many years to come! And Blake.... WHOO, a forceful Ted and equally forceful Blake are just freaking HOT! The crowbar..... Now THAT was a man after my own heart right there!

Thoroughly enjoying this story Star!!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 6:00 am Title: Chapter 14

Yes!  Mel's seen the light.