Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2016 4:05 pm Title: Chapter 21

Happy to see Ben finally wanting to move on, not just physically, but emotionally... it was NEVER his fault with Michael... just glad he finally sees it, and at least has some fun with Ryder!

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2016 4:23 am Title: Chapter 21

YES Ben!! Grab that CLUE and Ditch the Mitch!! Michael wasn't worth the effort it takes to tear off a piece of toilet paper let alone trying to build a life with. I feel sorry for Ben that it took years instead of mere hours for him to get the fact that Michael is a spolied rotten little troll who lives in his head and has absolutely no heart. I'm happy that Mel has gotten the same clue about Lindsay. 

Every chapter I like Ryder more and more. He's down-to-earth and so genuine that even children with severe trust issues flock to him. I hope he becomes Ben's knight in shining armor too. He's already doing a wonderful job with Jenny and Gus. 

I really appreciated Brian's talk with Ben. While they both understand Michael, it is taken from different perspectives- both scorned and hurt in their own ways by the thoughtless actions of a whiny weasal out to take everything and give back nothing. I think Brian telling Ben what made him fall for Justin also shed a little more light on why Ben isn't feeling remorse. Again, Michael isn't worth the price of a number 2 pencil. Brian's reaction to Justin bussing Mark on the cheek was incredibly funny. If I was Justin, I probably would have done the same thing and promised a lap dance for later since Mark managed to prevent DUMBelina and TweedleleDUMB's entry to the club. HA! Let the FUN begin!!!! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle