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Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2021 7:55 pm Title: Chapter 20

The plot thickens!!! This was a great chapter, and definitely an eye opener for Joan!! She really got an up close and personal look into Brian and Justin's life and everyone included in their family and, if I'm not mistaken, may have even had a revelation. Could she actually be coming around? I sure hope so!!

Reviewer: PlumKrazi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2019 7:50 pm Title: Chapter 17

I love your storytelling. You have a beautiful imagination. I am currently re-reading this series. I loved it the first time and still find it as beautiful the second time. However, you are waaaay too forgiving when it comes to Michael, Melanie, Lindsay, Joan, and Craig. I think Joan and Craig deserved the attitudes the family had towards them. They asked for it with their behavior and belittling of their children. I don't feel that Joan has any right to expect Brian to pay for anything regarding her. As far as Michael, Melanie, and Lindsay are concerned, I'd tell them to kiss my ass and mean it. Brian is not responsible for their bills, their choices, or JR. JR is a wonderful child and we all know Brian and Justin will look out for her future anyway because she is family and they love her. But Mel and Lindz have no right to try to force their hands when they chose Michael as the father. They knew he wouldn't be able to provide for her when they asked him to be the father. Their choice, their consequences. And if anybody talked to my spouse or myself in such a denigrating way, their would be no friendship after the first three warnings were ignored. 

 

Reviewer: sunnygirl95 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2019 6:35 am Title: Chapter 17

really love this story, but in the future will the fact that JR is not Justin and Brian's daughter be adressed? I mena ralistically, she would not be treated the same because ther is a difference, and also the fact that the relationship between Brian and Mel, and also Brian and Micheal arent good.  



Author's Response: That may be an issue from time to time. The fact that she is Gus' sister is more important to them.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2018 5:31 am Title: Chapter 17

Mel and Lindsey are creedy bitches.



Author's Response: You could say that.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2018 6:00 pm Title: Chapter 20

A cliffhanger! And Craig is being an ass as usual.

It's great for Brian and his mother to have this opportunity to have a new beginning.



Author's Response: Craig never changes.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2018 5:41 pm Title: Chapter 19

Chapter heavy on emotions! Is the end a new beginning for Brian and Joan?



Author's Response: That's very possible.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2018 5:19 pm Title: Chapter 18

Finally, everything went well, except Emmett's queening out; at least, it made Brian laugh so hard that he forgot his bad thoughts.



Author's Response: Emmett is always helpful ;)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2018 5:01 pm Title: Chapter 17

The munchers are greedy and mean bitches!!! I hate them! How dare they ask Brian to provide for JR when Mel made it clear that she didn't want Brian as the father of the second child. He is only good to help the kids they decided to have without thinking at the cost of said kids. Talk about irresponsibility.

Daphne is to come: good news!

Jennifer and Craig: she must feel so stupid for keeping her marriage afloat for so long.



Author's Response: The munchers never seem to hesitate to ask for money.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2018 1:14 pm Title: Chapter 16

Wonderful family life!



Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2018 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 15

Sydney is a great human being, a rock for Justin, after Brian of course.

The name of the cottage(s) is a wonderful idea and tribute to Edna.



Author's Response: Glad you like the name.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2018 11:47 am Title: Chapter 14

Brian can smirk all he wants in front of Father Tom, he can't speak in front of dear Mother Joan. It shows how deep he is wounded and how afraid he is that Bree would turn against him one day. He is lucky to have found Justin and his brother.



Author's Response: Brian still has some deep wounds.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2018 11:01 am Title: Chapter 13

Emmett barging in early morning and the frog: 2 of my favorite running jokes of this story/saga.



Author's Response: Thanks very much.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2018 6:59 am Title: Chapter 12

Justin has been tricked big time!



Author's Response: You think so.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2018 6:44 am Title: Chapter 11

Maybe Lacy finally sees that Justin is out of her reach, for so many reasons.



Author's Response: Obviously he is.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2018 6:25 am Title: Chapter 10

Genetic's wonder.



Author's Response: lol

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2018 6:12 am Title: Chapter 9

Even if Gus understands Brian/Bree relationship, he must feels bad sometimes.

Joan is snaking her way back in Brian's life via people she didn't want to consider.



Author's Response: I don't know about Gus feeling bad. He had a pretty good childhood in this story.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2018 5:51 am Title: Chapter 8

Key discussion between father and son. Gus might be disappointed with Lacy as she is fascinated by Justin.



Author's Response: We'll see.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2018 5:29 am Title: Chapter 7

A hidden child: I bet they are going to go after her.



Author's Response: You think so?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2018 5:10 am Title: Chapter 6

I'm wondering how Lacy could pass for a boy while hustling; if it was only for BJ I could understand, but if it was not, how could she hide that she was a girl?



Author's Response: I guess it depends what the john wants her to do.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2018 1:36 am Title: Chapter 5

The end is hilarious: the frog and Brian stopping swearing just in time.



Author's Response: Those frogs keep popping up in our stories. lol

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2018 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 4

Oh, Patrick did drop the bomb!



Author's Response: LOL

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2018 8:04 am Title: Chapter 3

Joan on hunting mode can't get good results.



Author's Response: Probably not. lol

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2018 7:36 am Title: Chapter 2

Oh, the kids saw them and they better tell their husbands before it's outed.



Author's Response: We'll see.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2018 6:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

I hope Justin won't have a nightmare and John won't have to deal with that.



Author's Response: That would be scary for both of them, but I'm sure John would handle it.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 14, 2018 9:29 pm Title: Chapter 20

OMG You can't leave it at that. I wanted to go to bed. 

I really do hope this is a new beginning for Brian and Joan. 



Author's Response: LOL Hope you get some sleep.

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