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Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2021 6:46 pm Title: PART 11

Great story!! I'm glad that Brian finally figured out the truth about Michael and cut him out!! The rest of the family isn't too happy with him either.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2021 6:27 pm Title: PART 11

Loved the story!! And as soon as Justin started picking up signals in the comic, he new something was up, but just couldn't put his finger on it. But I am glad that it was Brian that figured it out, told him off in front of everyone and even punched him out. What was even better was no one came to his defense or even asked if he was okay. But either way, both Brian and Justin are both finished with him.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2019 5:53 pm Title: PART 11

Love it

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2018 1:50 am Title: PART 11

Not surprised Michael would do that to Brian and Justin but Ted is an idiot to help him in anyway and not warn Brian and Justin.

Even in this story Mel can't help being a Bitch she doesn't care that Gus can see and hear the way she treats Brian.

Brian was way to lenient with all of them and should've put them in their place years ago, especially Michael that little rodent.

Reviewer: qafqueenbee Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2017 2:01 pm Title: PART 11

Enjoyrd the story.

 

 

 

lah

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2017 6:15 pm Title: PART 11

What a jealous and mean friend...

At least, Brian knows Justin was right.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2017 9:31 am Title: PART 11

I knew he was up to something but I never expected it to be that bad. What did he think Brian would do? Congratulate him and say it was a great idea? Dumb fuckwit. 

Reviewer: sandid Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2017 4:52 am Title: PART 11

I can't remember if I left a comment or not when I finished my binge read of this fic.  Moments ago I read the last chapter over.  I was in a hurry to finish and be out the door this morning.  I'm glad I did.  It good to savor the words.

This was a fun and intersting take on my boys.  Thank you.  I loved it all.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2017 6:41 am Title: PART 11

Ack.  How wicked can one person get and I'm so disappointed with Ted.  He knew and never said a word.  I wouldn't mind reading a epilogue where we find out what happened with Rage and if Michael ever paid Brian and Justin back.  Also if Ted was forgiven or left out in the cold with Michael. 

Reviewer: nickknack Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2017 9:39 am Title: PART 11

Awesome, I loved this. As usual Mikey is a complete and utter shit, definitely not my definition of a best friend! Can't wait to read Ambush🙂

Reviewer: 7Wildwaysup Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2016 4:52 am Title: PART 11

That was great, I know I've read it before but it was even better the second time through... Now on to part two! Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2016 5:27 pm Title: PART 11

Great ending... Loved all of it, but disappointed in Teddy... 

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