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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 6:07 pm Title: PART 2

What surprises? I want to know. I'm glad Justin got access to his trust fund. It will make his life soooo much easier. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 4:35 pm Title: PART 1

I like the thought of nobody knowing about the two of them being together. Michael will be pissed when he finds out. Your new and improved Brian seems like a great and genuine guy. 

Reviewer: sandid Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2017 4:52 am Title: PART 11

I can't remember if I left a comment or not when I finished my binge read of this fic.  Moments ago I read the last chapter over.  I was in a hurry to finish and be out the door this morning.  I'm glad I did.  It good to savor the words.

This was a fun and intersting take on my boys.  Thank you.  I loved it all.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2017 6:41 am Title: PART 11

Ack.  How wicked can one person get and I'm so disappointed with Ted.  He knew and never said a word.  I wouldn't mind reading a epilogue where we find out what happened with Rage and if Michael ever paid Brian and Justin back.  Also if Ted was forgiven or left out in the cold with Michael. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2017 6:30 am Title: PART 10

I'm worried about what Michael is up to.  At least Gus is happy and Mel and Lindsay have said he could be there for Thanksgiving.  I love Sally.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2017 6:13 am Title: PART 9

Michael and a comic book.  I'm glad that Justin decided not to draw it.  From what I can tell Claudia is a perfect choice.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2017 6:01 am Title: PART 8

Nice new car.  It's a shame that Ted is favoring Michael, but better then letting Michael have no one in his corner.  Glad that Emmett is on Justin's side.  I'm really concerned about what Michael wants to talk about.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2017 5:37 am Title: PART 7

The fixing of Gus' room sounds amazing.  So Michael came to dinner, he wasn't perfect but better than expected.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2017 5:21 am Title: PART 6

I'm so glad that Emmett and Ted took it well.  That could have gotten ugly.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2017 5:09 am Title: PART 5

Telling Debbie wasn't as bad as Brian expected.  Telling Jennifer went smoothly for Justin.  As long as they got pictures.  lol.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2017 4:55 am Title: PART 4

He finally had that talk with Michael and I'm not sure how Michael's going to go.  Hopefully Emmett will be able to control him.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2017 4:33 am Title: PART 3

They got married, they got married.  Plus they had a big talk about Mikey.  Can't wait to see that conversation.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2017 4:32 am Title: PART 2

How wise of them not to eat at the Diner.  It's great that Craig's control was of Justin's trust was overturned.  Now they can enjoy their trip to London with a stopover in Vermont.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2017 4:30 am Title: PART 1

It's good that the two of them are still communicating and not apart like some people think.

Reviewer: nickknack Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2017 9:39 am Title: PART 11

Awesome, I loved this. As usual Mikey is a complete and utter shit, definitely not my definition of a best friend! Can't wait to read Ambush🙂

Reviewer: 7Wildwaysup Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2016 4:52 am Title: PART 11

That was great, I know I've read it before but it was even better the second time through... Now on to part two! Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2016 5:27 pm Title: PART 11

Great ending... Loved all of it, but disappointed in Teddy... 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2016 5:19 pm Title: PART 10

glad Mel didn't really fight that hard... but still wary of Michael!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2016 5:07 pm Title: PART 9

What is Michael up to?  I do not trust him in the least

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2016 4:59 pm Title: PART 8

i don't trust Mikey either :(  

 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2016 4:48 pm Title: PART 7

I'm glad Ted wont break Michael's confidence, but I hope that doesn't mean he would chose Mikey over the others

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2016 4:16 pm Title: PART 6

I hope that Ted and Em get to stay friends with Brian and Justin, because I do see Mikey making them chose

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2016 4:06 pm Title: PART 5

it's getting easier for Brian to tell it, and he really doesn't seem to really cringe at the M word, just out of habit, not from actual feelings I think :) 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2016 3:57 pm Title: PART 4

Mikey doesn't get it because he DOESN'T WANT to get it... if he plays clueless long enough (ok, he is also dumb at times) he thinks he'll just get his way

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2016 3:47 pm Title: PART 3

I like that Brian even keeps ALMOST slipping up and calling it a marriage and honeymoon LOL

Brian would NEVER choose Mikey over Justin... he just made a commitment to Justin

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