Date: Jan 29, 2017 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 13
I'm glad to see everybody's relationships developing so well. I just hope Michael doesn't fuck up his.
Date: Jan 07, 2017 9:23 pm Title: Chapter 13
Ok, I think I'm leaning towards NYC being the place to be
Love Blake distracting Ted from inane Michael!
[Report This]Date: Dec 30, 2016 3:04 am Title: Chapter 13
Brian and Justin talking about the time Justin stayed with Michael and Ben is big. I'm glad that Justin is willing to sell Britin. I love how Justin says the house isn't his home that Brian is. The only one that moving away wasn't an answer for was Michael. Why does he think that because it didn't work for him it won't work for anyone else? I can understand why Ben isn't pleased with him, he's got a one track mind. Ted gives him wonderful advice and he's not listening. Perhaps Jennifer should go up to see Mel and Linds. It certainly seem that there will be problems if they go to Pittsburgh.
Date: Dec 28, 2016 4:06 pm Title: Chapter 13
I'll begin this review by pointing out that Deb and Michael need chops to their throats!! I mean, REALLY?!! They just have to have an opinion about what everyone else is doing with their lives and all major decisions MUST be run by them, whether it affects them directly or not? Their collective nosiness disturbs me in ways that even I- a writer- cannot express adequately enough. For Deb to go running to Jen with not only the fact that Justin and Mel decided to have a baby but to whine and complain that Michael's childish, over-bearing ass was NOT wanted as a sperm donor again was not only idiotic but spiteful as well.
As for Captain Loudmouth, how is he an authority on anything? Really, Sir? REALLY?! He's as big a baby as JR except that his mealy-mouthed behind is out of diapers. Michael runs to Mommy every time things don't go his way to 'tattle' on the rest of the group. Personally, I'm glad that Brian and Justin are finding ways to work things out for themselves and now I also see the wisdom of Melanie using the bombing as an excuse to escape the Nosy Novotnys. Deb may mean well but Michael is a manipulating, controlling know-nothing who needs to concentrate on his own life instead of fixating and trying to manuever the others into positions where his needs will always be met. Why can't he take care of Deb by himself? Or why does he feel that he has the right to tell anyone- including his mother- where to live? This little..... LAWD HAM TURKEY! He's such a scared, selfish and self-absorbed shit! GROW UP MICHAEL!!!
If Brian and Justin are going to be selling Britin and staying in New York, might I suggest either Brookville, which is located in Nassau County on Long Island or Briarcliff Manor which is in Westchester County. Both are about 30 minutes from NYC (Briarcliff to the North; Brookville is Southeast) and have landscapes similar to Britin's although maybe not quite as vast. Perhaps Lindsay and Melanie would fall in love with the area as much as Brian and Justin will. One thing will be certain though... Michael and Debbie will NOT be able to just pop over for a visit (which is in reality an unwanted intervention).
I really feel for Ben and Carl..SMH!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Dec 28, 2016 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 13
You bring up two important points for me a) why would Justin go to Mikey? Well, he wouldn't that was a major flaw b) what did Mikey do to help Brian after Justin left? Nothing. The same thing he always did. He never helped Brian beyond S1.
You shouldn't run from people you should face them down explain your position and move forward. However growing up with giant brothers I also know you pick your battles. All that's to say Deb and Mikey are really annoying to make them sell a house and move.
I like the happy Lesbians.
Date: Dec 28, 2016 8:14 am Title: Chapter 13
Michael thinks he's the expert when it comes to relationship?Really comparing what happen to him with David to the others,without realizing that even from the beginning of his relationship with the Dr is already going down bcoz he always put his feelings first for Brian than his partner no wonder it didn't last..It's like he doesn't care if everyone is happy or not as long he is that's all that matter to him..Grow up Michael!!
Can't wait for the next chapter..