Date: Dec 18, 2016 8:47 pm Title: Chapter 4
Excellent!! And funny. Brian and Mel finally getting cordial to each other.
I could only imagine Brian's reaction when Justin wasn't focused on what they were doing. It's worse than falling asleep during foreplay.
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2016 5:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
It's wonderful that Mel and Lindz are getting along, makes for a nice change. Ted is the voice of reason and I'm loving him in this. I love Emmett and how he is here. You might have to put an anti-Michael label on this story because he's so much fun to fuck with.
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2016 4:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
Like that Mel called Ted. Why isn't she considering Ted? Love that Ted called Brian for all the reasons you listed. Then there the talk Brian and Justin had. Perfect.
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2016 4:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! Love your descriptions of each character and seeing where they are. Then you get to the meat of your story which I like. Now you leave us with Mel wanting Justin to father a child with her? That's a storyline I can get behind.
Date: Dec 18, 2016 2:19 pm Title: Chapter 3
So, Lindsay is going to support that idea; maybe she's growing up or because she knows she would have to see Brian more often.
Deb and Michael are going to be painful if they think the same way.
Date: Dec 18, 2016 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I would have loved to see Justin's face while opening the boxes.
Mel's request could be fun to follow.
Great beginning!
Date: Dec 18, 2016 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 2
I hope, if they go with this project, Linsday won't use the baby to blackmail Justin the way she did with Brian.