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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2017 11:49 am Title: Chapter 2 - Faint

I'm glad Justin found Brian. Maybe he can help him. Where does the scar come from?

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2017 6:40 am Title: Chapter 2 - Faint

That was fast! Lol. TAG

Reviewer: LucretiaSeeks Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2017 3:49 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Faint

Hey there, Nicole! I'm just beginning this epic of yours, and I'm snagged from the outset. I just *love* that first kiss scene - I don't know when I've been moved more. I'm looking forward to the journey!



Author's Response:

Hey there!  Nice to see you!  It was tprather sweet wasn't it.  Hope you enjoy as it goes on.  Nicole xx

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2017 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Faint

Immediate attraction, with little and soft first contacts.

Funny how Justin thinks aloud. 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2016 2:22 am Title: Chapter 2 - Faint

I love that there is instant connection between them.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Faint

Gotta LOVE Slick! She gives the real deal, straight no chaser! And she's a grease monkey YAY!! I definitely love strong and unorthodox female characters. Brian and Justin seem to just be drawn to each other like magnets and that can only bode well for them. But like Slick said, how is Brian going to keep it from Stalker er.... Michael?

Looking forward to seeing this play out! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Faint

Things are looking up for Justin.  What does the scent of almonds mean.  Like Slick and I think Brian is getting involved with Justin and what does Mikey have to do with anything?

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 9:16 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Faint

I love it😍😍😍Hoping it's the beginning of their knowing each other..But i'm curious though of Justin's story behind of why&how he became homeless or what happen to his family..Can't wait for the next chapter..😙😙😙

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 8:37 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Faint

And the drama starts lol



Author's Response:

Oh yes!

Stay with me, I hope.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BritinLover Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 7:49 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Faint

Are Brian and Michael together



Author's Response:

God no!  How could you, why would I...traumatised!

Going off to have restorative glass of beam...a large one!

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 7:42 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Faint

Ugh...whatever part of brian's anatomy that may "have risen to the occassion" would've certainly deflated at the mere mention of Michael. Keeping it from Michael is a good idea for the moment. My immediate reaction was "Who gives a shit what Michael thinks"?!, but in reality, he'd be simply horrible to Justin, and he's simply not emotionally equiped to handle the abuse form such an asshole at the moment. Hopefully Slick will be able to keep him around for the time being. She'll definitely look after him. Deb, Hunter and the like will want to know how is he as well. Hopefully Justin will take whoever up on any offer of assistance. That heh won't let any sense of pride get in the way. Looking forward to finding out why he's homeless. I suppose his asshole father had much to do with it.

Brian is definitely still a bit of an asshole, but once he realised Justin's perdicament, he softened up. (emotionally...apparently not physically. hehe) That kiss was HOT!

Another great chapter. I love starting new stories. I love anticipating each and every chapter. I love that you are so good at posting regularly. Thank you for that!!

Cheers,

Elaine

 

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