Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 9:09 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Unwanted/Wanted

The perfect first time for Brian. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2017 7:17 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Unwanted/Wanted

So many things are happening in this chapter!

Drunken Mel is funny, even if it was not entirely real.

Another treason from Lindsey and Micheal and this one hurt Bran more than the previous one. Happy that Justin didn't let him shutdown. At least, Brian has ammunition for his petition.

The silly part was silly and Brian did let himself go and that was the goal.

As for the end, it was not fake, and really hot, short, but it was quite obvious they wouldn't last. Can't wait for the next time!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2017 7:37 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Unwanted/Wanted

Michael interrupted Daphne and Hunter? No wonder she wants to kick his Ass! 

As much as everyone would love to see Daphne kick Michael's Ass up and down Liberty Avenue,  he would use her so fast it wouldn't be worth the effort, Damn shame to because if anyone deserves to be beaten it is Michael.

I felt so bad for Brian his so called best friends have just broken heart, thankfully Justin was there to hold him and ease the pain a silly day is just what Brian needed to forget about the two idiots.

Slick as usual took care of The Gruesome Twosome and now Lindsay has to rush back to Canada to get her stuff and to get a lawyer because Brian is not kidding about getting custody of his son.

Can't wait to see what happens next? :)

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2017 1:04 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Unwanted/Wanted

I just love Slick! She anticipates what anyone in her family needs... also, that final scene... I think I need a cigarette and a cold shower after that!!!!!

Author's Response:

So did B&J...though their shower would most likely be round two!!!

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2017 8:24 am Title: Chapter 28 - Unwanted/Wanted

That was HOT😗😗😗😗But i need more😥😥hehehe demanding much,but i just can't get enough when it comes to our boys😍😍

I hope Gus would be granted to stay with his father full time,poor kid always put in the middle bcoz of his mothers craziness and delusional life..!!
Lindsay and Michael really deserve each other,they're so selfish and impertinent people...

So close Michael have his head off by Daphne,if only they let her go maybe the whiny brat can have a clue of what's happening around him!!
And I love Slick for moving things so quick. ..Lindsay thought it's bullshit,well take your own shit bcoz you don't have a home now...!!

Ilove it,Thanks for sharing!