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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2017 9:43 pm Title: Chapter 60 - Babylon, Suspicions, Howdy Neighbour and Voyeurism

Oh yeah. That's what's creepy. These are sooooo nuts. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 4:22 pm Title: Chapter 60 - Babylon, Suspicions, Howdy Neighbour and Voyeurism

Brain bleach please!!! Michael and Lindsay at Babylon is a traumatic image for my imagination, but so hilarious! As the butler-subs idea. How do you come up with such ideas? Excellent!

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2017 7:20 am Title: Chapter 60 - Babylon, Suspicions, Howdy Neighbour and Voyeurism

Can't stop laughing from the stupidness of those two😅😅😅That's what you called a bachelor party,totally a blast...!!!💥💥💥

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 7:02 pm Title: Chapter 60 - Babylon, Suspicions, Howdy Neighbour and Voyeurism

I nearly threw up in my mouth a bit at the internal visual I had of Michael in the thong and mesh top. Can we all just say Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeew!! Pretty sure Lindsey had teh same reaction as well. lol. Ugh...

The idea of having Justin upstairs! Hilarious! Omgoodness. that is going to be torture for M&L! Going to be most entertaining trying to not cross paths. I almost have an old black adn white silent movie style going through my head. ;) 

The entire scene at Babylon was great! Again, very entertaining. I love how I can visualize everything in my head when you write it. Michael is being his tyical suspicious self. rightfully so  mind you, but that's besides the point. Lindsey is to the point of having had enough of it. His behavior is going to get them into even more hot water I'd imagine. But...the piece de resisence...being cast as Grim and Twinkle's subs...BWAHAHAHAHA! and the whole mix up. then, on top of it all, getting put in their places by Claire. My she covers herself well doesn't she.

Last but not least...Michael listening in on B&J. Ugh! at least he was called on that as well.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 1:41 am Title: Chapter 60 - Babylon, Suspicions, Howdy Neighbour and Voyeurism

Ewwww Michael was getting off on listening to Brian and Justin have sex!!

Disgusting Little Troll!!!

Ha! I love that they were humiliated at Grim and Twinkle's Stag-Do Michael and Lindsay are so stupid they make termites look like geniuses.

I bet everyone was cracking up at their humiliation and their outfits.

Claire is very good at playing Michael and Lindsay off each other I especially like when she makes both of them look very foolish.

Slick taking the upstairs apartment and turning it into a studio for Justin is a good idea simply because it will drive them crazy to have to leave and not come back until Justin is gone, but knowing that Justin is up there creating masterpieces will drive Lindsay completely batty :)

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 1:38 am Title: Chapter 60 - Babylon, Suspicions, Howdy Neighbour and Voyeurism

Looks like Grim and his twink had a fabulous batchlor party.  Now Justin has his studio and a place for Brian over the gruesome twosomes apartment.  Can't wait to find out what you have planned.

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