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Reviewer: Sweetcheeks76 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2019 3:18 am Title: Chapter 90 - ...And Going Away

Loving it and Can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2019 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 90 - ...And Going Away

another great story.  Loved it

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2018 5:08 am Title: Chapter 90 - ...And Going Away

Was this reposted because the sequel is coming or by mistake? I was looking forward to "Thief of Food and Hearts".

Still enjoyed the ending ecen if both Dr. Dave and Lindsay are delusional.



Author's Response:

Hello, this story won the reader's choice for April 2018, so chuffed! Thief of Food and Hearts is coming back just too a break for Easter.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2017 1:38 pm Title: Chapter 90 - ...And Going Away

Great story. Love your original characters. Thanks for writing. TAG

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2017 9:26 pm Title: Chapter 90 - ...And Going Away

Nooooo. This can't end here. I need more.

Author's Response:

A sequel is coming.   So glad you liked it!

MissMerlot

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 90 - ...And Going Away

OMFG. I can't imagine what a child born of the bitch and the weasel could be like. Dr. Douchebag is a fucking rapist. I hope you are planning on starting on the sequel soon. This is amazing.

~Lorie



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, after I finish my two new ones then I'll get back to it.  Dr Douchebag gets his and then some.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 7:28 pm Title: Chapter 90 - ...And Going Away

Ha ha ha, Lindsey is pregnant from Michael! Poor kid!!!

The good doctor David will sure have some fun with Lindsey's mind while she will be trying to have some fun with his body.

As for Nancy, she will find out that the seedy hotel wasn't that bad.

Thank you for this long, funny, hot and wonderful story!

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2017 4:32 pm Title: Chapter 90 - ...And Going Away

Man alive! 3 chapters in 1 go. I now know why we haven't seen you in awhile. Between these 3 and the 2 others in ROTS, it's amazing you've had time to even breathe! 

I'm really glad you're going to make this into a 2 parter (at least) There is much to happen in the next part it seems!

WOW! I didn't see David coming at all. I hope that Lynette is able to withstand his eventual confrontation. She'll have family surrounding her mind you, but it will definitely be a very tough situation. He gets off on fear, so am praying she'll overcome that and then knock him down a few (or a lot) of pegs! He's certainly pulling out all the stops with regards to Lindsey.

the very idea of Lindsey and Michael reproducing is......(I threw up a pit at the notion) The mixing of the DNA..UGH! 

Nancy is going to the slammer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YEAH BABY!!!!!!!!! I really can't help but laugh my freaking ass off about that. Couldn't happen to a better roach. 

what an ending! Man o man...looking forward to what comes next. Don't stress though!! Keep it so you continue to enjoy the writing, not so it becomes a chore. Whether the updates come once a week, every other day, once very couple weeks...what ever. 

thank you sooooooo much for sharing your talent with all of us!! 

Cheers,

Elaine

 

 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2017 7:15 am Title: Chapter 90 - ...And Going Away

Wow. Way to end it.

Reviewer: Lorna Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2017 5:10 am Title: Chapter 90 - ...And Going Away

Great story and can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2017 3:16 am Title: Chapter 90 - ...And Going Away

OMG, What a surprised ending.  David Cameron and Linz and what does he have on Lynette?

Can't wait to sequel, thanks for sharing!

JoAnn

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2017 1:23 am Title: Chapter 90 - ...And Going Away

Another fantastic ending.  I couldn't get over Lindsay having Michael's baby?  Gag.  At least the poor little girl won't be dealing with Lindsay.  So much went on in this chapter and I'm dying to see what you have planned for putting Cameron in his place.



Author's Response:

Thank you so happy you enjoyed it, they will be back like I said.   And a little hint the putting in his place comes via our favourite sub!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2017 12:28 am Title: Chapter 90 - ...And Going Away

You ended it just wear it needed to be so the second part will be quite a thrill especially with all the revelations concerning Lynnette, Nancy, Lindsay and Cameron.

I knew Lynnette was not Ronald's daughter but I do wonder who her real father is?

So David Cameron was the one who raped Lynnette and he is planning his revenge to get back at her, Slick and Lionel?

Deb is going to put Lindsay six feet under when she finds out Lindsay gave away her grandchild, I hope that baby is placed with a loving family and despite her birth parents she grows up strong, kind, thoughtful, considerate and able to destroy anyone who tries to hurt her but fiercely loyal to her family and friends basically I hope she grows up to be like Slick lol (Wouldn't it be funny if one of the new members adopts this baby? dun dun dun dun! ;))

I see Andrea and Sophie staying off radar but not fully out of the game.

Hope Nancy enjoys jail and all the new friends she is about to make :)

Sorry to see it end but love the ride *Big Hugs* Awesome As Usual!!

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