Date: May 09, 2017 7:28 pm Title: Chapter 90 - ...And Going Away
Ha ha ha, Lindsey is pregnant from Michael! Poor kid!!!
The good doctor David will sure have some fun with Lindsey's mind while she will be trying to have some fun with his body.
As for Nancy, she will find out that the seedy hotel wasn't that bad.
Thank you for this long, funny, hot and wonderful story!
Date: May 08, 2017 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 89 - Coming Together...
Ha ha ha, the spanking of Lindsey!!! Hilarious!
As for Michael, he had problems with his tummy, now he has problems with his balls. More reasons to go to the medic office.
The WASP is back with her "friends", for how long?
Date: May 08, 2017 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 88 - Revelations
The edging was super Hot! Another step for Brian.
Nancy was almost back to the police station; she is as mean as Lindsey.
Date: May 08, 2017 4:32 pm Title: Chapter 90 - ...And Going Away
Man alive! 3 chapters in 1 go. I now know why we haven't seen you in awhile. Between these 3 and the 2 others in ROTS, it's amazing you've had time to even breathe!
I'm really glad you're going to make this into a 2 parter (at least) There is much to happen in the next part it seems!
WOW! I didn't see David coming at all. I hope that Lynette is able to withstand his eventual confrontation. She'll have family surrounding her mind you, but it will definitely be a very tough situation. He gets off on fear, so am praying she'll overcome that and then knock him down a few (or a lot) of pegs! He's certainly pulling out all the stops with regards to Lindsey.
the very idea of Lindsey and Michael reproducing is......(I threw up a pit at the notion) The mixing of the DNA..UGH!
Nancy is going to the slammer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YEAH BABY!!!!!!!!! I really can't help but laugh my freaking ass off about that. Couldn't happen to a better roach.
what an ending! Man o man...looking forward to what comes next. Don't stress though!! Keep it so you continue to enjoy the writing, not so it becomes a chore. Whether the updates come once a week, every other day, once very couple weeks...what ever.
thank you sooooooo much for sharing your talent with all of us!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: May 08, 2017 7:15 am Title: Chapter 90 - ...And Going Away
Wow. Way to end it.
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2017 5:10 am Title: Chapter 90 - ...And Going Away
Great story and can't wait to read more
Date: May 08, 2017 3:16 am Title: Chapter 90 - ...And Going Away
OMG, What a surprised ending. David Cameron and Linz and what does he have on Lynette?
Can't wait to sequel, thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2017 1:23 am Title: Chapter 90 - ...And Going Away
Another fantastic ending. I couldn't get over Lindsay having Michael's baby? Gag. At least the poor little girl won't be dealing with Lindsay. So much went on in this chapter and I'm dying to see what you have planned for putting Cameron in his place.
Author's Response:
Thank you so happy you enjoyed it, they will be back like I said. And a little hint the putting in his place comes via our favourite sub!
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2017 1:14 am Title: Chapter 89 - Coming Together...
Nancy's got problems no lawyer and Lionel will soon be on her case. Justin is turning things upside down looking for his RV. Michael got a tummy ache and Lindsey got a spanking. tut tut.
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2017 1:05 am Title: Chapter 88 - Revelations
This was just as good reading the second time. I see Nancy hasn't learned anything from her time spent in jail and she making a return visit. Lynette and Oliver have put her in her place. Now we learn that Grim and Twinkle have brought back a surprise for Brian and Justin.
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2017 12:28 am Title: Chapter 90 - ...And Going Away
You ended it just wear it needed to be so the second part will be quite a thrill especially with all the revelations concerning Lynnette, Nancy, Lindsay and Cameron.
I knew Lynnette was not Ronald's daughter but I do wonder who her real father is?
So David Cameron was the one who raped Lynnette and he is planning his revenge to get back at her, Slick and Lionel?
Deb is going to put Lindsay six feet under when she finds out Lindsay gave away her grandchild, I hope that baby is placed with a loving family and despite her birth parents she grows up strong, kind, thoughtful, considerate and able to destroy anyone who tries to hurt her but fiercely loyal to her family and friends basically I hope she grows up to be like Slick lol (Wouldn't it be funny if one of the new members adopts this baby? dun dun dun dun! ;))
I see Andrea and Sophie staying off radar but not fully out of the game.
Hope Nancy enjoys jail and all the new friends she is about to make :)
Sorry to see it end but love the ride *Big Hugs* Awesome As Usual!!
Date: May 07, 2017 7:40 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Cold
Apologies, I posted the wrong chapters, hope to post the correct ones later today. MissMerlot
Date: May 01, 2017 5:22 pm Title: Chapter 87 - Taming of the Shrew and 'that' Movie
*gigglegigglesnort* Oh my mind's eye is great when you are so descriptive. I have in my head a mix of Kris Jenner (older of course) and Estelle Gette. LOL. Her ultimate demise from the nest was excellent and will now be considered a social pariha!! Absolutely perfect and so well deserved. She just kept digging herself in to deeper and deeper holes. Enjoyed it thoroughly.
Dear lordy...what a scene between B&J! I mean WOWZAS! Hot as all hell.
Looking froward to even more of this!
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2017 5:46 pm Title: Chapter 87 - Taming of the Shrew and 'that' Movie
Man That Was Better Than Anything I Could Imagine!! lol
Nancy is about to learn that the court's don't take kindly to bribery and it is never good to lie about a lawyer who has more power than you.
And that being kicked out of the Cool Kids Circle makes for a very lonely life.
Ronald is moving past his dismal life with Nancy and embracing that he can be happy, Lynnette and Oliver are moving forward aswell without Nancy and Lindsay trying to inflict their snobbery on everything.
Brian and Justin as usual were Way Too Hot for my poor kindle lol
Can't wait for Lindsay to find out about Mommy and for more of Nancy's high end stupidity
Nancy Wears A Wig!!!! roflmao
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2017 11:03 am Title: Chapter 87 - Taming of the Shrew and 'that' Movie
You did good with Nancy. I feel sorry for Oliver. Brian and Justin had such interesting times.
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2017 10:42 am Title: Chapter 86 - First Date and Being Strong
Thank you, thank you. You gave us Nancy on a plate. Oliver is being more than generous to even talk with her. Love the Fred Astaire.
Date: Apr 29, 2017 9:11 am Title: Chapter 87 - Taming of the Shrew and 'that' Movie
I forgot to write that the scene with Brian and Justin was hot as hell!!! They are so playful and sensual. I just hope they don't take the salted one for the next part!
Date: Apr 29, 2017 8:57 am Title: Chapter 87 - Taming of the Shrew and 'that' Movie
The down fall of the harridan is so much fun! I can't wait to see how she will try to get back to the WASP nest after that.
This movie ("Le dernier tango à Paris")! It was such a scandal when it was out in 1972 and it still gets emotional reactions as the director admitted in 2013 that the actress was not aware of what would be shot and it destroyed her. He wanted her to react as a girl/woman, not as an actress. It was simulated, yet she couldn't handle it afterwards. It was supposed to be Brandon and the director's idea, but Brandon was already dead when the director stated that.
Date: Apr 29, 2017 7:40 am Title: Chapter 86 - First Date and Being Strong
Ronald is slowly coming out of his shell and it's nice to read.
The spanking and what followed were really hot!
The beginning of the public humiliation for Nancy was amazing: she is in for a huge fall down the WASP nest... So good!!!
Date: Apr 29, 2017 7:20 am Title: Chapter 87 - Taming of the Shrew and 'that' Movie
I am so loving the wasp knock down. Thankyou so much for another great chapter. And now I want some home made bread and butter.
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2017 8:35 pm Title: Chapter 85 - Blame Game
As performances go Lindsay needs to work on her acting no one fell for it and taking her to the hospital was a waste of time.
Gus was Hilarious and I loved everything he said to Nancy.
Michael is going to be yelling for GOD, his Mama, the holy ghost and the devil himself before it is over with.
Lindsay might want to get her lungs ready because she might be in a shouting mood to.
Wonder what Nancy is going to do now?
Author's Response:
Yep Gus was a pistol a chip off the Kinney block...as for Nancy, well, I hope you enjoy what happens.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2017 8:30 pm Title: Chapter 85 - Blame Game
I am so surprised the judge didn't note that Nancy admitted to trying to bribe Slick. Isn't that something that she could be charged with? Love Gus taking on the old lady.
Author's Response:
Patience dear one...hope you enjoy.
MissMerlot
Date: Apr 25, 2017 7:54 pm Title: Chapter 85 - Blame Game
That was so funny. The end with Justin and Brian was sweet.
Date: Apr 25, 2017 6:59 pm Title: Chapter 85 - Blame Game
Thank you lovely for another great chapter. I am going to miss this when it is finished. As always thank you for dedication to making your readers happy.
Author's Response:
You are more than welcome, I have loved writing this one. Sending you huge hugs
Nicole
Date: Apr 25, 2017 5:56 pm Title: Chapter 85 - Blame Game
“Pussy paradise” and the rest of Gus' verbal explosion was so funny! Then, the family trying to find out who said what first was also hilarious.