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Date: Sep 24, 2018 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 10

Craig and Brian, meeting once again: it's becoming frequent; that's not good for their tension!

Joan is starting to feel Brian's power.



Author's Response: Craig and Brian near each other is never a good thing.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 6:08 pm Title: Chapter 9

So, Katerina does speak English and doesn't want to go back to her country: is she gay and doesn't want to be married by obligation?



Author's Response: You could be right.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 5:51 pm Title: Chapter 8

This chapter is hilarious: I took a few of the best quotes, then the running joke with Emmett barging in.

"What is it, kiddo, you leave your favorite butt plug behind?"
"Why is everyone interested in my cock?"
"Maybe because it has its own zip code"
"Bri, I think my gerbil jumped ship and is doing a tango in your brain. What's going on in there?"
"It's not before eight; it's eight-thirty."



Author's Response: So glad you liked the banter.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 5:29 pm Title: Chapter 7

I loved this quote "Now get your sanctimonious ass out of here before I kick it so hard you'll be able to shit through your mouth"! I hope Craig won't sue Brian for shoving his foot up his tight ass.

Brian's idea of school for Bree is genius; well, to paraphrase him, he doesn't have bad ideas.



Author's Response: Glad you liked that quote, and Brian only has good ideas.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 4:31 pm Title: Chapter 6

What is the story behind "Squirt"? I don't remember well, even if I just read the story where she was born.

Brian and Joan are getting to know each other and it might take some time for them to feel comfortable. At least, some jokes are a hit. If only Joan could understand that Brian loves taking care of his family, she would let him indulge her.



Author's Response: "Squirt" came from the first time they changed Bree's diaper and she squirted them. Also she is very petite, so "Squirt" fits that way too.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 4:15 pm Title: Chapter 5

Two new members of the family. It seems that they are legitimate without a hidden agenda.



Author's Response: Perhaps.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2018 7:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Joan has a lot to think about; she learned and saw so many things during the week-end that she must think she had a dream; and yet, she was sober.



Author's Response: It will not be easy for Joan.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2018 8:02 pm Title: Chapter 10

Another addition to the family. I like that. It's good to see how they take care of each other. 



Author's Response: That's one of the constants in our story.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2018 7:41 pm Title: Chapter 9

Interesting development. But why can't she go home?



Author's Response: Hmm, ;)

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2018 5:44 pm Title: Chapter 8

What is it? You and your cliffhangers are evil. 



Author's Response: LOL We are.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2018 5:00 pm Title: Chapter 7

I don't even know why Craig cares. But Brian's reaction was great. 



Author's Response: Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2018 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 6

It makes me warm inside that Brian and Joan are getting along so well. 



Author's Response: It is a fitting ending if it works out.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2018 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 5

JP sounds sincere. But it's good that Brian and Jennifer are cautious. 



Author's Response: They don't want anybody hurt.

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Date: Feb 15, 2018 8:15 am Title: Chapter 4

Joan's fight with herself must be really hard. You can't expect someone to change so much over night. 

More kids for Patrick? This is getting more interesting with every chapter. 



Author's Response: Joan is struggling. Old ways die hard, as I have said before.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2018 8:01 am Title: Chapter 3

Probably the only kid in the world that stops crying because it is allowed to help in the garden. I hated it as a kid. 



Author's Response: LOL Bree is certainly different.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 14, 2018 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 2

I really do hope JP just wants some information. 



Author's Response: That will soon be revealed.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 14, 2018 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

The biggest question is what does the new guy want? 

Im glad Joan can see the good in Brian. Finally. 



Author's Response: It took Joan a long time.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2017 8:13 pm Title: Chapter 10

I am so glad that they were able to help Katerina.  It's a shame that I can't remember if JP ever showed up again in these tales.  He'd be very happy for everything that Kat accomplished.



Author's Response: Yes he would.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2017 6:01 pm Title: Chapter 9

I know, I know.  Jumping up and down and waving my hand.  But I'll wait for later chapters to prove I'm right.



Author's Response: That's a deal.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2017 5:41 pm Title: Chapter 8

Sigh.  Michael is such a negative nelly, as in nelly bottom.  As for Deb I keep expecting Sister Mary Katherin, you don't know her, to show up and ask Debra Ann Grasi if she always talks like that in front of the children and rapping her knuckles with a ruler.  What is it that Brian knows?



Author's Response: That would be interesting to see Debbie and the sister.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2017 4:36 pm Title: Chapter 7

They should have called the cops the moment Craig pushed JP.   It's no surprise that Katerina looks like Molly.  It's Kismet.  Bree and chool, so cute.



Author's Response: Our family likes to settle things themselves,not with the police.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2017 4:12 pm Title: Chapter 6

I'd love the recipe of JP's Frittatas.  Perhaps Joan is coming around?



Author's Response: I'd like that recipe too.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2017 4:03 pm Title: Chapter 5

Yes they could be brothers.  At least John thinks so.  Loving this particular adaptation of the Sunshine files.



Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2017 2:35 pm Title: Chapter 4

Sadly if Joan does not see the light she could end up a lonely and bitter woman.  I think JP and Justin are two peas in a pod.



Author's Response: This may be Joan's last chance.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2017 5:00 am Title: Chapter 3

First Joan teaches Briana about SEX shocking.  Looks like JP and Justin will settle things nicely.  And Briana gets to Gar-gar.



Author's Response: Brianna will always love her gar-gar.

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