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Reviewer: DollyMama79 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2023 9:33 pm Title: Chapter 2

Ok so chapter 1 is the same section repeated three times.

I love the writing and can not wait for more.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2021 8:40 pm Title: Chapter 19

I am so happy that Brian and Joan's relationship is getting better by the day. She really does seem like she's changing, and for the better. Craig on the other hand? I can't see him seeing the light of day no matter what. He sees what he wants and no one can change his mind, though I think Susan is getting sick and tired of him...

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2018 3:28 pm Title: Chapter 19

Ha ha ha, I love the end! Craig is going to be nuts!!!

I also love how Brian is dealing with Justin at the beginning: he is so attuned to Justin's moods that he knows how to handle them and how to protect him from potential witnesses.



Author's Response: Glad you liked the ending. Brian has learned how to deal with Justin, and vice versa.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2018 9:00 pm Title: Chapter 18

The end is hilarious even if the context is sad: well done Susan!



Author's Response: Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2018 7:27 pm Title: Chapter 17

Ha ha ha, the frog is back! I could imagine Brian running towards the water with Bree on his heels with the beast!

Brian is lucky and has a wonderful life: never say never, something amazing could happen when a twink is onto you.



Author's Response: Exactly, and Brian lucked out.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2018 6:44 pm Title: Chapter 16

Brian is going to add "lesbian whisperer" to his business card; if only that would work with Mel.



Author's Response: LOL Good idea.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2018 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 15

Brian in Birkenstock? Really? On his sexy feet? No, no, no, that can't be right.

Craig is painful: how did he do to get a new wife? I understand he must have had some appeal when he was young, but he isn't like a fine wine; he is so boring, whining, ...



Author's Response: The mystery of how Craig married Susan is not revealed.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2018 5:02 pm Title: Chapter 14

Oh no, Craig and Brian in the same town! Sounds like a drama is shaping.



Author's Response: Could be. lol

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2018 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 13

For now Bree is letting go of the dogs; I'm wondering how long she will last and how Brian is going to deal with it.



Author's Response: Bree doesn't give up easily.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2018 3:14 pm Title: Chapter 12

After Disney, Brian got the twain! Yeepee!



Author's Response: LOL

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2018 2:53 pm Title: Chapter 11

Rocky meeting with the family! Poor Bree who was too excited and didn't eat much.



Author's Response: Family meetings can be rocky.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2018 2:30 pm Title: Chapter 10

All the gossips are hilarious!

Brian should stop worrying about his age. As Justin says "he is sex on legs", and what legs!



Author's Response: LOL Yes, sex on legs. Glad you liked the gossips.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2018 6:59 am Title: Chapter 9

I love the way you write sex scenes and this one was inspired.

Justin is sneaky when he wants something; borderline liar. Epcot seems to be amazing to visit.



Author's Response: Thanks again.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2018 6:23 am Title: Chapter 8

The Brian and Justin show is always entertaining and hot as hell, public or private!

Justin refusing a shower: they must have had quite hard hours deep into the day!

nb: the chapter is doubled



Author's Response: Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2018 7:13 pm Title: Chapter 7

Brian playing Bingo: that's a view I would love to see!

Justin wondering if he might not be as gay as he thinks he was: yeah, right; as if his life with Brian would let anybody wondering. He should remember what he told the psy he saw with Jennifer ("I like dick,...").



Author's Response: Upside down world! lol

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2018 7:19 pm Title: Chapter 6

Crisis averted! Well done! It's always easier when they talk about what is bothering them.



Author's Response: They are starting to learn that.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2018 6:53 pm Title: Chapter 5

What started like a dare and a good / funny sex course ended in a sour mood. Is Brian afraid of Justin wanting to top more often because they both enjoyed their super new dildo? It's not by avoiding the subject that it will get better; another relapse of "asshole Brian"? Is he afraid it's going to bite him in the ass (no pun intended)?



Author's Response: I think that's exactly what he thinks may happen. Brian likes to be the one in control.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2018 9:00 pm Title: Chapter 4

What is Craig planning for Brian? As if it would end his misery.

Brian seems to have some stud relapses: Justin doesn't deserve that, even after Ethan's episode.



Author's Response: Brian is not perfect, and Craig is horrible.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2018 8:48 pm Title: Chapter 3

Brian+sun+black Speedo is recipe for wet dreams.

Justin is very funny playing in the pool.

The dykes and their dogs: pitiful and not that rare for humans to consider pets as kids.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2018 8:39 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love Brian's kind of vacation, especially his plan.

For one moment I thought that Simon was after Justin, but he seems interested in new friends.

The flash back with Craig is showing that he is more and more in presence of Justin from afar. Not good for Brian's mood nor Justin's.



Author's Response: I'd love to go on vacation with Brian.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 25, 2018 7:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Brian is really worried that Bree could forget him; as if it could be possible with the deep connection they have.

Justin and his sunscreen: first he was worried he wouldn't be able to use it and then, upset because he was covered with it; it didn't stop a twink to come and talk to him about his sugary Daddy.



Author's Response: Brian's insecurity resurfaces.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2018 9:39 am Title: Chapter 19

That is going to be an interesting wedding. 



Author's Response: Let's hope so.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2018 9:29 am Title: Chapter 18

They all handled Craig beautifully. But I don't think there is a chance of reconciliation. Joan's hatred was founded in her religion and she managed to look past that at least partially. Craig is just an ass. 



Author's Response: You got that right.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2018 9:18 am Title: Chapter 17

Their vacation sounds like so much fun. It's sad that it has to end soon. I would have loved to see Brian first look at the big frog. 



Author's Response: All vacations end eventually.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2018 9:24 pm Title: Chapter 16

If he has nightmares about his dad seeing him again will be really bad. Brian and his lesbians make me lol. 



Author's Response: I like Brian ad his lesbians too. LOL

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