[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2022 4:54 pm Title: Chapter 3: Revelations, Part 2 (aka Initiations, Part 2)
I love everything about this. How hot is possessive Brian? My ONLY criticism, and my gosh, it is so small, is just how often they call each other stud and twat. I think they do call each other that, but that is just me being a fussy bugger haha.
Thank you for writing this.
Author's Response:
Justin certainly doesn't seem to mind possessive Brian :P
I welcome concrit! This tale was intentionally over the top (duh), but I may have overdone it with stud and twat. If I ever go in to polish the story (I have made other edits to fix typos and broken links), I'll have a look-see.
~ Karynn
[Report This]Date: Jun 16, 2017 5:22 am Title: Chapter 3: Revelations, Part 2 (aka Initiations, Part 2)
Load shooting contests, rocket launchers, cum everywhere and blowies that last for an entire chapter. Whew!!
and let us not forget, Justin is the one with self control...lol
Saje
Author's Response:
More laughter and lots of sexual prowess on display. Such talented men!
Justin learned from the master. :D
Thanks for another review, Saje.
~Karynn
Date: Jan 22, 2017 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 3: Revelations, Part 2 (aka Initiations, Part 2)
can't get enough of Jealous/Possessive Brian... he isn't fooling many and especially not Justin... love it!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're continuing to enjoy this story, Kathy. :)
Justin really has been on to Brian since day one and is pretty clever at dealing with his jealous and possessive stud. <3
Thanks for reviewing!
~Karynn
Date: Jan 16, 2017 3:47 pm Title: Chapter 3: Revelations, Part 2 (aka Initiations, Part 2)
I think my fave part is the 'Mormon Sperm Catapult'! Lolol! Great job! TAG
Author's Response:
True has mad skills! LOL
Thanks for reviewing - glad you enjoyed reading the chapter again. :)
~Karynn
Date: Jan 16, 2017 8:13 am Title: Chapter 3: Revelations, Part 2 (aka Initiations, Part 2)
What a HOT, BURNING chapter!!! Funny as well. Poor Brian, acting like a teen, not in control as usual.
Cold shower highly needed...
I can't wait for the main event!
Author's Response:
The heat index certainly has been rising in this story! Chuffed that you enjoyed the humor too. :D
That blond has a habit of discombobulating Brian and making him lose control. The boys are taking their own sweet time in guiding True to the main event, but it will be worth the wait.
I hope that cold shower helped . . . provided that you really wanted it to. ;)
Thanks for the wonderful review! It started my morning off just right.
~Karynn