[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2022 5:55 pm Title: Chapter 6: Exodus, Part 2 (aka Aftermath, Part 2)
Aw yay everyone lives happily and hornily ever after :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the trail of comments on this porny romp <3 You've made my weekend!
This tale was one of my earliest efforts and was the first non-RPS story I wrote. (RPS isn't to everyone's taste; it's still weird to me that I started with that). I don't know if I'll ever expand this universe, as was my original intention, but I'm satisfied as is.
~ Karynn
Date: Jan 26, 2019 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 6: Exodus, Part 2 (aka Aftermath, Part 2)
kinky but good one
Author's Response:
Kinky can be good, right? :P
Thanks for leaving a note. :) It's great to get a comment on one of my older stories.
~ Karynn
[Report This]Date: Jun 16, 2017 5:59 am Title: Chapter 6: Exodus, Part 2 (aka Aftermath, Part 2)
lovely morning after with Daphne and 'quickie' shower sex. Cracked up with the FN Easter Egg and the brunch and the hand off to Todd.
Way to go on this very porny and tongue in cheek story. Love when humor finds a way into a plot without being forced. You handled it well here with drunk True Sin and pouty Brian and other examples to numerous to name.
Very well done and looking forward to more.
Saje
Author's Response:
Funny how those FN Easter Eggs keep cropping up. ;D
Thank you so much for the lovely compliments! I'm not sure I could write a story without humor - maybe I need to challenge myself.
Many, many thanks for all the comments. Now I'm averaging slightly more than 4 per chapter - makes this review whore very happy!
~Karynn
Date: Feb 08, 2017 8:44 pm Title: Chapter 6: Exodus, Part 2 (aka Aftermath, Part 2)
To answer your question: nothing specific, but I love stories with Daphne and Emmett, and Gus as well. Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your input, Claire. :)
I can promise plenty of Gus, Daphne, Emmett, and other canon characters in the story which will precede IRBIH in the same universe. I haven't yet started writing that fic, which will start immediately post 5.13, although I have reams of notes, lol. Some of the plot threads in IRBIH may be introduced in that longer fic. Drama, romance, some porn - of course, family/friends, a dash of angst...
I'm not sure whether the sequel to IRBIH will merge the two stories or if it will be more of a porny stand-alone. At the moment, IRBIH is a porny interlude in the universe I'm creating. ;)
~Karynn
Date: Feb 07, 2017 7:02 pm Title: Chapter 6: Exodus, Part 2 (aka Aftermath, Part 2)
Hot and funny. Great ingredients for a wonderful story.
I hope you will continue to write as you let us think you will.
Thank you for sharing!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing! "Hot and funny" - just what I was aiming for, so I'm glad it worked. :)
Anything in particular that you'd like to see in a sequel? Let me know!
~Karynn
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2017 10:44 am Title: Chapter 6: Exodus, Part 2 (aka Aftermath, Part 2)
Very amusing and a relief that our boys did not stray too far from their "relationship" rules. Gotta feel sorry for Daphne though, all these hot men and never a hetero or even bi man amongst them lol.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that you enjoyed the hilarity of this porny tale!
Our boys belong together and they're getting better at communicating their needs to each other. As long as they agree, no rules are broken, just stretched a tad, lol.
Daphne's getting a lot of satisfaction from her men while she waits for the right hetero or bi guy. He has to turn up sooner or later, right? Maybe in a sequel... ;)
Thanks for commenting!
~Karynn
Date: Feb 05, 2017 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 6: Exodus, Part 2 (aka Aftermath, Part 2)
LOVE this story and would love to delve more into this universe... and Dick In is SO not 100% hetero lol
Who wouldn't grow a crush on either Brian or Justin (in my case, both!!!), so I feel for Tru, but I'm glad Daphne caught it before it gets out of control
Deb will help set him on the right path as well!!!
more please!!!!
Author's Response:
You're review has made my day, Kathy! *doing a happy dance*
Dick In is definitely slip-sliding away on that Kinsey scale. Makes me think of a funny quote from a novel I read not long ago (not QaF, amazingly enough). Paraphrased from that story: Mormons wanting blow jobs are like coffee shops - one on every corner. (That quote could well appear in a sequel to IRBIH if the author gives permission.)
I also have the tiniest of crushes on both Justin and Brian. ;) Daphne to the rescue of all three men!
Any dangling plot threads in particular that you'd like me to follow up on? There are quite a few of them, lol. You can let me know in another review, on FB, in Hangouts, or by email.
Date: Feb 05, 2017 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 6: Exodus, Part 2 (aka Aftermath, Part 2)
Congrats on finishing an epic porn read! Lol! TAG
Author's Response:
Thank you for the five dildos up rating! I couldn't aspire to more. :D
You're wonderful - not only serving as a super-beta but also reviewing faithfully.
~Karynn