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Reviewer: DollyMama79 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2023 11:29 am Title: Chapter 3 - That Was Then...This Is Now

The cliff is high in this one.

Reviewer: DollyMama79 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2023 11:16 am Title: Chapter 2 - On the Streets of New York City

These guys are always doing what they think is best for the other. Brian giving Justin up for his own good then being miserable. Justin letting go of Brian because he thinks this is what Brian really wants being miserable. Neither happy.

Reviewer: Nanna Nat Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 06, 2020 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Strolling Down The Avenue

Great read. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2019 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Last Stop

Love it



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: TrueIllusion Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2018 3:08 am Title: Chapter 14 - Last Stop

Loved this so much! Such a great read. When I got to the accident, I was all like, wait, no, this can’t happen this close to the end! Glad I can breathe now. ;)



Author's Response:

thank you so much, and I am thrilled that you enjoyed the story!'

happy reading!

Charle

Reviewer: nickknack Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2018 10:18 am Title: Chapter 14 - Last Stop

Beautiful story. I would love to hear the story of their family together if you ever decide to revisit this story.



Author's Response:

so glad you like the story - thanks for letting me know!

 

Charle

Reviewer: qafqueenbee Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2018 12:04 am Title: Chapter 14 - Last Stop

I enjoyed the story, will there be a sequeal.

 

 

 

 

laf

 



Author's Response:

Thank you laf. Im so glad you liked it. No current plans for a sequel, but one never knows. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2018 11:48 am Title: Chapter 14 - Last Stop

Great story! Thank you for sharing it with us!



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it! Thank you for the reviews!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2018 11:30 am Title: Chapter 13 - Declaration of Faith

Yeah, Mickey is out and Justin is back in.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2018 11:20 am Title: Chapter 12 - Deafening Hush

Whoa, that's brutal and maybe the only way for Justin to "see" that Brian is serious about his request.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2018 11:05 am Title: Chapter 11 - Preposterously Quixotic

Brian is going really far to get Justin back. The socks were funny, but I thought it was because Justin was always cold.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2018 10:00 am Title: Chapter 10 - Be The Change You Want To See

Justin is right as Brian, once more, called the shots five years ago and tries to do the same now. Tough choice!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2018 9:39 am Title: Chapter 9 - Everything Old Is… New Again

Thanks to Ted, the actual best friend of Brian. Where is Daphne when we need her; she could talk Justin into listening to what Brian has to say.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2018 9:01 am Title: Chapter 8 - To Have Loved and Lost

This is not good at all; Justin is escaping the potential pain and Brian is getting wasted.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2018 3:56 am Title: Chapter 7 - Flame Rekindled

Whoa, what a reunification: that was hot, intense and sensual!

The only weird point is the shampoo: how cheap shampoo could end up in Brian's bathroom?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2018 9:35 pm Title: Chapter 6 - It's Only Time

Expected, yes, but the heat and the need for the other is very palpable.



Author's Response:

I'm enjoying your commentary - hope you are enjoying the story!

Hapy Reading!

Charle

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2018 6:38 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Coming...And Going

Ryan alone will not tip Justin. The last name would have though.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2018 6:15 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Two Ships...Passing

Sent: that a sense that couldn't be used in the series, but I'm sure it was a huge part of their attraction.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2018 5:54 pm Title: Chapter 3 - That Was Then...This Is Now

Pain management: Brian's forte, but it's not effective anymore.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2018 5:34 pm Title: Chapter 2 - On the Streets of New York City

Why did Brian push Justin over a cliff once more?

A beach cottage? That could be a great way to escape with Brian.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2018 5:17 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Strolling Down The Avenue

Great beginning! Brian is still a stud and also a very lonely one.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2018 1:45 am Title: Chapter 14 - Last Stop

WONDERFUL,  Thank you for my happy ending.  Such a good story and you are correct, you have to overcome the bad to appreciate the good.  Used a few more tissues, but that always lets me know just how much I am into the story.  Great writing.  Hope you will write something else for us.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. It is always so exciting when someone really enjoys my story, and tears means it hit the heart, just like Justin's art. Thanks again for the great reviews. 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2018 7:54 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Coming...And Going

Ok, I am running out of tissues.  I hadn't planned to review before the end, but I am an emotional mess and just wanted you to know how powerful your writing comes across.  Thank you for this amazing story.  Off to the next chapter.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2018 2:50 am Title: Chapter 1 - Strolling Down The Avenue

Great start to a new story.  As usual, I may not review again until I finish the story.  I get so involved in reading that I have to keep going.  Can't wait to see where you go next with it.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the read - can't wait to see what you think of the story by the end!

Happy Reading!

Charle

Reviewer: Juditka Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2018 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Last Stop

I'm so happy to have read this beautiful story. I really liked.



Author's Response:

thank you so much - I'm glad you liked it!

Charle

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