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Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2018 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 11: Sunday, November 12th

Brian's back home, yay for him. What's going in with his insurance claim?

That Babe Ruth card can probably pay off Deb's mortgage.. They really should look into that.

Telling Tracy that Michael's gay wasn't for Brian to do. I don't think this party is going to go as Brian plans. What Michael really wants for his birthday or any other time is Brian's dick up his ass. He'll never get that present. Ha!



Author's Response:

Brian has escaped the munchers' house! :D :D The insurance company is waiting for the police to clear Brian in regard to the burglary before they will proceed.

The signed baseball card would make a dent in Deb's mortgage, although it probably wouldn't be enough pay it off. There'd still be the debt she and Vic racked up with the trip to Italy, though. In any case, it's far more important to both of them to follow through with the promise they made to Justin in regard to any attic finds. Vic and Deb are pretty darned incredible. :)

No, it's not Brian's place to approach Tracy and tell her Michael's gay, but he's convinced himself he's doing so for his friend, which is partly true. He's doing it for himself too, of course. You're so right that Michael's not going to get the present he most wants! :P

Thanks for the wonderful review, Sherry. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2017 5:53 pm Title: Chapter 11: Sunday, November 12th

Well, at least Brian's back in his loft now. Hopefully, things will get back to normal soon. TAG



Author's Response:

We do hope 'normal' includes a certain blond. :)

Thanks for reviewing, TAG.

~Karynn & Brynn

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2017 3:34 am Title: Chapter 11: Sunday, November 12th

It's good that Brian is back home.  You gotta wonder how someone managed to take everything out of the loft and nobody see anything.  I hope this time they catch the crooks.  Brian needs to get his head out of his ass and get back with Sunshine.



Author's Response:

If anyone can catch the burglars, it's detectives Horvath and Wen. That female detective certainly intimidated the heck out of Brian. 

Be patient with our favorite brunet. He's starting to come around... we think. Considering it has only been nine days, including the day of the robbery, since our story started, he's making remarkable progress.

Thanks for reviewing, Phyllis!

~KaBrynn

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2017 2:57 am Title: Chapter 11: Sunday, November 12th

Omg those sex scenes were so hot, especially the one of Brian in the shower with the dildo...holy crap! Wicked seductive & sultry...yum yum yum. Love that their fantasizing about each other. We need these boys back together pronto! 



Author's Response:

Brynn should really become an M/M erotic fiction author, don't you think? I was melting while reading - when I wasn't laughing uproariously, that is. :D

We keep dropping unsubtle hints to Brian, but the brunet is a wee bit stubborn. But, just think of all the progress he's made in merely nine days since our story started. Then you won't mind waiting for the boys to reunite, right? *running and hiding from the rotten tomatoes*

Thanks for reviewing, Glo! We're working on chapter twelve now. :)

~Karynn & Brynn

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2017 2:09 am Title: Chapter 11: Sunday, November 12th

Ok.... so the stud is back to his precious Loft... good for him... i am wondering when he will realize that something is missing other then his furniture. How is he going to replace that important part of his home and life. He can get back the materialistic things but not the most important thing or person whom he is missing so badly...but so damn stubborn to admit even to himself. Sigh.....Amazing going... keep it up guys... i love this fic....

Thank u....❤



Author's Response:

Thanks for another wonderful review, Navneet. We're made up by all your comments. :)

Brian asks that you take his childhood into consideration - his material possessions are an indicator of how far he's come, and that he's left Jack and Joan behind. We haven't given up hope that he'll figure out just what essential item is missing, given enough time. Including the day of the burglary, it has been only nine days since our story began.

We're working on chapter twelve now.

~Brynn & Karynn

Reviewer: DarkandLovely Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2017 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 11: Sunday, November 12th

That was HOT!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, LaChelle. Brian and Justin - even when they're not together, it has to be hot, right? :D

More in a week.

~Karynn & Brynn

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2017 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 11: Sunday, November 12th

It's funny how Brian and Justin have the same fantasy about the glass dildo; did they use it just before the burglary (it was in the dishwasher after all). I could imagine the faces of the cops seeing it!

Gus is adorable and always happy to see Justin.

Brian with "whatshername": what does he expect from her? Be the straight friend Michael could talk to? It will be difficult for her as she hoped to be more. Let's see if she comes. He's out of his element at the Big Q and maybe still drugged out, so this was not his best pitch.

At least he has a new bed and he won't wake up to a nasty diaper!

I hope he will see the pictures of Justin and Gus.



Author's Response:

Thank you for being the first to review the longest chapter to date, Claire. We're chuffed that you enjoyed it so much!

It does seem that both boys are enamored of Brian's favourite dildo. I wonder if Justin has a preferred toy when he's on the receiving end. It would seem the boys did use that dildo just before the burglary. We'll leave that scene to your imagination. :D

Brynn writes good cop, doesn't she? She's made up that you enjoyed that scene.

We can never have too much Gus! He and Justin have so much fun together.

We'll have to see what develops with Mikey's 'girlfriend' from the Big Q. Our out-of-his depth stud refuses to think about that any further, much less talk about it. Brian still feeling the aftereffects of that Veterans Day party more than twenty-four hours later? Impossible! Shame on you! he says. :D One teensy joint earlier the same day obviously didn't count.

You're right, at least Brian is back in his loft, although it will take quite a while for it to feel like 'home' again. Will he realize one essential element is missing? Somehow, we think Brian may get tasked with diaper duty in the future...

Brian is quite observant, even when he pretends not to be. We too are waiting to see whether he acknoledges those photos.

As usual, we're already working on the next chapter. :)

~KaBrynn

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