Date: Oct 18, 2017 7:20 am Title: Chapter 24: Saturday, November 25th
Now I’m starting to wonder why a homicide detective is investigating a burglary too... TAG
Author's Response:
Good. We've piqued your curiousity. :D
Thanks for commenting, TAG.
~ KaBrynn
[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2017 5:27 am Title: Chapter 24: Saturday, November 25th
Mikey and dave are sooo soo soo...i have no words..lols.
I cant wait for this..in em's words.."I want to be a fly on the wall when Brian finds out just who his competition is."...Thank u soo much ladies for the splendid chapter..lots of love to u guys.
Author's Response:
We don't have any words to describe Michael and Dr Dave either. :D
Brian may have a bit of a queen-out when he finds out what's going on with his competition. :D
Thanks for leaving a second review on this chapter, Navneet!
~ KaBrynn
[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2017 5:24 am Title: Chapter 24: Saturday, November 25th
WOW...i mean WOW...That was one unexpected start of the chapter...my god...how could brian be soo stupid to let go something soo precious and beautiful ..?? They were soo beautiful together...he made big mistake..stubborn ass*** ...please let justin turn down brian with that stupid idea of being sex buddies...seriously he is soo egoistic to come with that dumb thoughts. Gosh ..this story is going soo awesome...when em said my baby brians reaction was priceless...HE IS NOT YOURS..lols..i love a jealous Brian ...make him more envious in coming chapters..wink wink...great job guys ...that was one memorable chapter...lol..i will look forward to see Brian's and justin's conversations the most ...more then the cops discovery.
Author's Response:
We're so chuffed by your enthusiam for our story and your wonderful reviews, Navneet. :)
Brian may be coming to his senses in regard to Justin, but *cough* he's not quite there yet. We'll have to see how Justin responds to Brian's proposal... if the adman can every get him alone for a moment. :D
Yes, haha, the stud who doesn't do jealousy... Who really believes that line?
Thanks so much for all the lovely compliments about this chapter. :) We're working diligently on the next chapter and the story as a whole.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Sep 28, 2017 5:47 pm Title: Chapter 24: Saturday, November 25th
What a dream! Hot and sticky, just like we hope for their next reunion; it will be as historical as in the series!
Michael and David are nauseating with their pet names.
Ted is very perceptive and a great friend; Brian should consider changing his BFF.
Emmett is trying to get more gossips: I hope he won't find out it was Brian who was assaulted; maybe he wouldn't say anything, but I'm not sure he could keep it for himself.
Can't wait to see if Justin gave "Kinnetik" as Brian's agency's name.
Author's Response:
We're chuffed you enjoyed that opening scene, Claire. We got just a little worked up writing it. :D
Michael and Dr Dave keep coming up with new endearments; it's enough to make us vom as we note them down.
Brian may be acquiring a new best friend without quite realizing it. :)
Emmett is probably much better at being close-mouthed than one might think.
We're also waiting for the big reveal of the name for Brian's new agency; it's most annoying that Brian didn't share. :D
Thanks for reviewing! :) We're working diligently on the next chapter.
~ KaBrynn
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2017 3:05 pm Title: Chapter 24: Saturday, November 25th
That was an hot sex scene ! Justin needs to sleep ! I like Ted becomming friend with Brian !
Great chapter ! Thank you for the update
Author's Response:
We thought we'd open the chapter with a bang. :D We're chuffed that you enjoyed it, Marie-france.
It's hard to tell when that lack of sleep will catch up with Justin and what will happen then. The lad's definitely burning the candle at both ends.
It's great fun to write Ted and Brian's developing friendship.
Thanks for reviewing. :) We're working on the next chapter now.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Sep 28, 2017 2:42 pm Title: Chapter 24: Saturday, November 25th
Wow poor Justin needs some serious sleep. When will he get some? Justin remembering having sex on the table with Brian...hot! Boy do they love to tease each other! The diner stuff was funny yet tense for Brian at the same time. I thought Ted would be intuitive enough to figure it out and of course Justin came up with the perfect name for Brian's firm, can't wait til he thanks him properly. Dr Dave & Michael are making everyone sick...me too! Yuck! I'm glad Ted went over Brian's for some therapy 101. Ted's such a good friend. Looking forward to the next morning at the diner for B/J's conversation. Love these long chapters!
Author's Response:
We're chuffed that you enjoyed the latest installment, Glo. :)
Justin's definitely burning the candle at both ends; we'll have to see how long he can keep that up.
Brian and Justin have a competitive streak a mile wide, but they both won at the end of that opening scene, we think. :D
Dr Dave and Michael keep insistently whispering pet names in our ears; it's a challenge not to hurl all over the keyboard.
We're glad you're enjoying the lengthy chapters; we sometimes like to treat our readers to two chapters in one - or, in the case of the Thanksgiving feast, a novella that was four chapters long.
Back to diligently working on the next chapter...
~ KaBrynn
Date: Sep 28, 2017 3:00 am Title: Chapter 24: Saturday, November 25th
darn- not the first to review- great sex scene - love the playfullness between Brian and Justin
gag every time another pet name comes up between Michael and Dr Dave - and I just hate that Brian or anyone is not putting Michael in his place when he just blasts Justin with all that mean spirit.
Liked that Ted talked to Brian- now Brian has to get over himself and talk to Justin
We're made up that our readers want to be the first to review. :D The two of us had fun writing that opening scene competition between Justin and Brian; both men won in the end. :D Imagine having Dr Dave and Michael whisper those pet names into your ear - we can't escape! LOL We're doing our best to nudge Brian toward Justin. Thanks for commenting, Sandy. :) We're writing away on the next chapter. ~ KaBrynn
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2017 2:41 am Title: Chapter 24: Saturday, November 25th
This is one long and fantastic chapter. Poor Justin needs some sleep. David and Michael? Horror. Teddy being Brian's friend, fantastic. Love, love, love it. PS I would have left a review on AO3 but my password isn't working. <frown>
Author's Response:
We're chuffed by your comments, Phyllis. Thanks for again being the first to review! :)
We fear Justin may be short of sleep for some time, what with his jam-packed schedule. Surely something will have to give...
Every time David or Michael pipes up with one of those pet names, we cringe.
We're drinking in all your praise and selfishing hoping your password problems on AO3 are resolved soon. We like being spoiled by reviews on two sites. :D
We're working away on the next chapter and will have it up as soon as possible.
~ KaBrynn