[Report This]Date: Jun 17, 2018 9:48 am Title: Chapter 35: Thursday, December 7th
Cat and mouse chase was going on in the whole chapter...lol...who is seducing who .??..they both were comfortable together ..it was like burglary never happened ...lovely.
Superb chapter...thank u for sharing.
Author's Response:
It's a mutual seduction. :D Will Brian triumph over Justin's resolve not to give in and have sex with his former lover? It seems inevitable... but, then again, this is Tricky Business. :D
We're enjoying the boys' togetherness as much as you are, and are trying to gently nudge them even closer.
Thanks for reviewing, Navneet. A teaser should be up soon in the FanDoc.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jun 17, 2018 1:24 am Title: Chapter 35: Thursday, December 7th
GGreat update. Funny and full of sexual tension. I hot the feeling though that Justin was just dreaming of Brian being there in the end.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing, Sherry. :)
The sexual tension is always there between the two men, and it's ramping up on both sides. How long will Justin's resolve not to jump into bed with Brian last?
You're correct that Justin was dreaming of Brian in the last scene. He may have wished otherwise, though; we certainly did. :D
We're working on the next chapter and will soon post a teaser in the FanDoc.
~ KaBrynn
[Report This]Date: Jun 16, 2018 9:55 pm Title: Chapter 35: Thursday, December 7th
Tell me that last part was not a dream. Did someone help Vic out with the sno? What is Ted going to do about Michael. Deb is so delusional about her son. Where is BOB?
Author's Response:
Soz, no can do - it was a dream.
Since Vic was busy preparing the meatballs for dinner, it's safe to assume that either Michael or Debbie shoveled the snow, likely Debbie since she doesn't mention Michael stopping by. Proud mother that she is, she'd bring it up.
We'll have to see how Ted acts around Michael. Yes, the fallout from your prize is still happening, Phyllis. :)
Yoo-hoo, BOB, where are you...
Thanks for reviewing! We hope to have a teaser for the next chapter up soon.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jun 05, 2018 3:28 am Title: Chapter 34: Wednesday, December 6th
Bummer, am caught up. Want more as soon ad possible.
Author's Response:
We're working on it, Sherry! Have you checked out the teaser in the FanDoc? Feel free to leave comments in the FanDoc - it's there for our readers - and to share your opinions in the discussion section. :)
Many thanks for all the reviews. :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jun 05, 2018 3:25 am Title: Chapter 34: Wednesday, December 6th
Ok. First, why is Brian being a complete idiot in every facet of his life? Awkward at the gym, the diner, even at Deb's. The only time he was himself was when he was talking to Justin out back behind the diner?
How much longer is Dr. Dave going to put up with Michael and his gross childish ways? And what's with Brian letting him get away with verbally bashing Justin? That fool should never see a comic book made by him and Justin. NEVER! Isn't worth Justin's time.
Sydney is a riot. Beginning to like her. Love the way she handles Dixon. Getting really tired of that asshole too.
Almost caught up.
Author's Response:
Brian's still a stud, and his usual sarcastic self, but he's missing the blond boy he foolishly threw out of the loft (even if he did think he had good cause at the time) and it's affecting his behavior. And no one's so perfect that they don't have awkward moments, Brian included; we're sharing some of the ones CowLip would've excised. :D Plus, with Ted meeting the hunky professor and developing some self-confidence much earlier than canon, he's more than able to hold his own with Brian. We're proud of our favorite brunet for actually talking to Justin and issuing an apology - that's progress! :)
Dr Dave is completely enamored with Michael, and Brian quite likes it that way - the doc keeps his childhood friend occupied. We'll have to see whether Brian will take Michael to task or not; he's so used to Michael criticizing Justin that he tends to ignore it. You probably don't have much to worry about as far as Justin creating a comic book with Michael; he has neither the time nor the interest.
Sydney seems to be growing on everyone. :D We love the way she keeps wrong-footing Dixon. :D
It's horrid to be caught up with a WIP and waiting for the next chapter. :( We'll try to have a new installment for you soon. :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jun 02, 2018 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 30: Friday, December 1st
Operation twat retrieval! 😄 Love it!
Author's Response:
Brian is very clever with naming this campaign. :) Thank you for commenting. :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jun 02, 2018 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 29: Thursday, November 30th
I'm with jazzepoet...way too slow on the romance front for me; however, I must commend the authors as I don't think I've ever read a fic in this fandom where spelling, grammar, and punctuation were as nigh on perfect! Even the proper use of blonde/blond, brunette/brunet. Now if we could just refrain from using bicep rather than the proper biceps. And yes, I know bicep is considered a derivative according to the dictionary, but really, biceps is the proper terminology.
I also know I'm probably beating a dead horse and I know it's been stated that the British-isms add color/character to the story, but honestly, as an American reader it just yanks me right out of the U.S. QAF headspace every time I see a "whilst", "anyroad", "cuppa", etc. That being said...I'm not the owner of the story and you must proceed however you see fit, but it is disconcerting to say the least.
Over all it's an entertaining story! 😎
Author's Response:
Thank you for your exhaustive review. We are terribly chuffed that you are enjoying our story and appreciate our grammar. :) We shall indeed proceed as we were. :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jun 02, 2018 1:27 pm Title: Chapter 19: Monday, November 20th
I know I haven't commented lately, but it's better to just keep reading.
What I did want to comment in is that I like the way Brian's and Ted's friendship is developing and that I really like the idea of Ted and Ben. Although I like stories where Ben and Emmett hook up, Ted and Ben is good too. Never u understood what Ben saw in Michael.
Author's Response:
No worries. It's hard to stop and comment when one is engrossed in a story. It's more fun to move on to the next chapter. :)
We're made up that you're enjoying the devloping friendship between Brian and Ted. Ted's self-confidence is increasing ever since meeting Ben. :) There seems to be a consensus among our readers that Ted and Ben make a good couple - they actually have a lot in common.
The relationship between Ben and Michael was weird. Maybe it was a case of opposites attracting and Ben wanting to serve as a mentor to his partner.
At the rate you're reading, you'll soon catch up with us. Many thanks for all the reviews. :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jun 01, 2018 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 34: Wednesday, December 6th
I adore how you girls write Emmett and his friendship with Justin. Em was probably my favorite character on the show, after Justin of course! The imagery of the pair of them doing damage with stilettos had me snickering *Side note - I have learned!! No coffee in sight!!* out loud, and hoping that the intended victim was Michael. lol!!
Loved the toll that Justin had to pay, and the fact that Brian was pouting afterward due to Justin's lack of reaction. But his reaction to Michael/David was mirrored by me...ugh. Seriously? I almost revisited my dinner, girls!
I really liked the conversation between Brian and Justin out the back - I liked the honesty between them, and the fact that they (read - Justin) wants to take it slow.
Now onto the fun stuff!!
I'm ambidextrous, uh, I mean versatile.
LMAO!!! Seriously? I don't know what made me laugh more during this - Justin's stumbling, or Briand and Emmett trying not to laugh.
And he wasn't jealous. Absolutely not.
Liar, liar, Prada on fire.
Some people should've been ejaculated into a pillow.
LMAO! *Side note - Ty told a kid he was fighting with a couple of weeks ago that considering she didn't believe in abortion, that his mother should have swallowed. I told him about this line, and he pissed himself laughing and said to tell you that he'll have to remember that one.*
*Second side note - Ty said to tell you, Karynn, that he agrees with you on the fact that having man-flu as a teen gave him the right to flake it on the couch, and because of that firm agreement he agrees with me on you and Brynn moving to Oz. He doesn't care that we'd spend our time laughing our asses off - he just likes the fact that you were in his corner!!*
I adore my prize girls - and I can't wait to see what Emmett has to say to Brian about BOB. Love to you both. xxx
Author's Response:
We figured by this point that we didn't need to provide humor warnings - liquids and reading do not mix! :D :D
Em's a wonderful character: flamboyant, tough as nails, and a genuinely caring friend. It's often hilarious, how he dispenses his folksy pearls of wisdom. If he can convince Justin and Ted to wear those lethal stilettos, will he be able to teach them all by himself, or will he enlist help - and, if so, whose?
A mere 365,548 words after the opening sex scene in chapter one, we reached a real-time kiss. Gosh, that was fast. :P
We probably should have added a chapter warning for atrocious table manners and a cringe-worthy PDA, but most of our readers did get a heads-up with the second teaser on FB. :D And the pet names, well, Michael and David are simply out of control, lol.
We're proud of Brian for finally issuing an apology to Justin. And both men communicated - wow! Even if Brian gets part of what he wants, it may not be quite as he expects. (Was that a vague enough hint?)
It was a total blast to work your reward into this chapter, and utterly irresistible to resurrect awkward, 'ambidextrous' Justin from the pilot episode. The questions from the girls really threw him for a loop. :P
Liar, liar, Prada on fire. :D :D We foresee that working its way into a future chapter. It's so Em.
The quote, "Some people should’ve been ejaculated into a pillow." gives you an idea of how our writing process works. Brynn heard the quote somewhere (have to check where, could be a good source for more material) and shared it with Karynn. Karynn immediately saw the possibilities, and the wheels started turning as to how it might fit into your reward. She was thinking of Brian possibly spouting the line, but then Brynn mentioned that it also sounded like Sydney. All that remained was to find the right spot. :D Can't wait to hear how it goes when Ty uses that quote!
Karynn may appear in Oz sooner than you'd expect. :) Brynn can join us when she completes her master's program. Oz will never be the same... and Ty may regret his decision, lol.
As Karynn was reading your reviews, ideas about what Emmett might say to Brian in regard to Bobby Boy started to germinate. :D Working on incorporating them now.
Thanks for the laughter-inducing comments, Kerri! We also know to avoid beverages when reading your reviews. :P
~ KaBrynn
Date: May 31, 2018 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 11: Sunday, November 12th
Brian's back home, yay for him. What's going in with his insurance claim?
That Babe Ruth card can probably pay off Deb's mortgage.. They really should look into that.
Telling Tracy that Michael's gay wasn't for Brian to do. I don't think this party is going to go as Brian plans. What Michael really wants for his birthday or any other time is Brian's dick up his ass. He'll never get that present. Ha!
Author's Response:
Brian has escaped the munchers' house! :D :D The insurance company is waiting for the police to clear Brian in regard to the burglary before they will proceed.
The signed baseball card would make a dent in Deb's mortgage, although it probably wouldn't be enough pay it off. There'd still be the debt she and Vic racked up with the trip to Italy, though. In any case, it's far more important to both of them to follow through with the promise they made to Justin in regard to any attic finds. Vic and Deb are pretty darned incredible. :)
No, it's not Brian's place to approach Tracy and tell her Michael's gay, but he's convinced himself he's doing so for his friend, which is partly true. He's doing it for himself too, of course. You're so right that Michael's not going to get the present he most wants! :P
Thanks for the wonderful review, Sherry. :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: May 31, 2018 1:24 pm Title: Chapter 10: Veterans Day, Saturday, November 11th
Brian's feeling no pain but at least he knows his limits
Justin is really enjoying staying with Vic and Deb. Gonna be bummed if he ever moves in with Brian again. He likes doing family things, Brian of course doesn't.
I don't understand why Justin doesn't heed the concern of everyone in reference to his dancing at the club. They all only want the best for him.
Author's Response:
A good time was had by Army-Navy and Brian. :D Our favorite brunet may discover the next morning that he didn't know his limits quite as well as he thought. :D
There's no immediate likelihood that Justin will return to the loft. We suspect that if that does happen, Justin will still make sure to spend plenty of time with his adopted family. :) And Brian may not despise family things quite as much as he professes.
Hmm... Justin and Brian are both very stubborn men, often to their detriment. Justin is bound and determined to amass as much money as possible to repay Brian for the burgled goods, all without Brian learning what he's doing.
Thanks for another insightful review, Sherry!
~ KaBrynn
Date: May 30, 2018 2:20 pm Title: Chapter 9: Friday, November 10th
If you work for Smythe Justin beware. I smell danger ahead.
Author's Response:
The good news is that Smythe is a far better person than the Sap - we couldn't stand to let that creep invade our story. Since we diverged well beffore his first appearance in canon, we waved our magic wand and * poof * he was gone. :)
This doesn't mean that Justin shouldn't be careful. Smythe will be looking to promote his business through Justin.
Thanks for reviewing, Sherry.
~ KaBrynn
Date: May 30, 2018 2:11 am Title: Chapter 8: Thursday, November 9th
Normal everyday life. Why not, once in a while.
Author's Response:
We suppose it is an ordinary day by the boys' standard. :)
Thanks for leaving a comment, Sherry.
~ KaBrynn
Date: May 29, 2018 9:51 pm Title: Chapter 7: Wednesday, November 8th
Wonder if Brian's bad mood has more to do with being without Justin than being robbed. Hmmm.
Jennifer better get her head out of her ass if she wants anything more to do with Justin. Right now he's having the time of his life outside of school.
Author's Response:
Poor Brian - he's not about to acknowledge that missing Justin might be at the root of his bad mood. :D
Jennifer's concerned with the wrong things, at least for now. She'd better be careful if she doesn't want to irreparably damage her relationship with her son. Justin's building a new family and she could be left behind...
Thanks for commenting. :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: May 29, 2018 6:52 pm Title: Chapter 6: Tuesday, November 7th
Nice to see ya Marty. Kip a friggin' idiot.
Man these two need their heads smacked together.
Michael needs to get a life and his own place. Good for Em for putting his foot down. If he'd sell that shit he could buy a loft near Brian. Ha!
Author's Response:
We agree - Marty and Kip deserve each other.
Can you imagine being surrounded by that much comic book memorabilia (outside of a shop, that is)? Emmett had to put up with it to some extent since he moved into Michael's apartment, but still... We can't blame canon Dr Dave for being horrified when Michael moved in, although he should have been willing to compromise, if he really wanted it to be 'their' place.
Ssh! Don't give Michael ideas! Brian would have to move. :P
Thanks for the humorous comments. :D
~ KaBrynn
Date: May 29, 2018 4:34 pm Title: Chapter 5: Monday, November 6th - Part 2
Communication! Maybe if Brian knew Justin was working so he could try and pay Brian back something, although it would never be enough, it may help with his attitude.
How many times was Mikey dropped on his head? What a fucking idiot. Could never understand that friendship.
Living with Vic and Deb is good for Justin. A sense of belonging to a family again.
Author's Response:
Brian's gotten himself into a pickle - can't stop caring about Justin no matter what. He's not nearly over his mad, though, since he's convinced Justin is at fault for the burglary. And our favorite blond doesn't want to reveal his efforts to make restitution, especially after Brian has again shot him down. Two stubborn men... sigh.
The friendship between Brian and Michael is just bizarre, not to mention codependent and toxic. I thought it was too bad in canon that Michael didn't stay in Portland, at least for a couple of years, or that Brian didn't move to New York (with Justin joining him, of course). With some distance, they might have gained perspective and built a healthier friendship.
Justin has found a loving, accepting family with Vic and Deb. :)
Thanks for reviewing, Sherry!
~ KaBrynn
Date: May 29, 2018 2:27 pm Title: Chapter 4: Monday, November 6th - Part 1
A few more months Justin, just hang in there. Fuck Hobbs and the teachers.
Go Cynthia! Make Brian think about Justin and then ruin his orgasm. Serves him right. Ha!
Author's Response:
Thank goodness Justin has Daphne on his side - that's what a best friend should be like. :) Frau Rose, the English teacher cum librarian, is in his corner too. :)
We still chuckle when we read the scene where Cynthia cockblocked Brian. Blondes rule! :D
Thanks for continung to comment as you read, Sherry.
~ KaBrynn
Date: May 28, 2018 8:11 pm Title: Chapter 34: Wednesday, December 6th
This was well worth the wait and while parts were definitely ick worthy, we were warned, so I was able to braase myself for it. Was still gross though imagining some of it. David and Michael were never a pair I like much anyway. But good lordy....they way they are togther in this..............yish...gives one shivers. Had to laugh at the gang's reaction though. I could absolutely envision their looks of cpomplete horror. Gave me a few giggles.
Will Brian actually get info from Emmett or will Ems keep pulling his strings.
REALLY glad that brian made a few truthful confessions to Justin. It was a bit like pulling teeth, but was great to finally have it happen.
Brain was definitely hunorous in this chapter. With Ems, Ted and even cynthia giving him a hard time at the gym, and Ted and emmett continuing it at the diner, it made for some great chuckle worthy moments. It's nice seeing Brian not always on top of his game. Seeing him at a disadvantage. All his attempts at getting Justin back have been to no avail until this chapter. He still has a way to go, but I can see it starting to happen. Perhaps he's finally going to understand that he shouldn't be taking Justin or anyone else for granted.
Michael....I couldn't believe waht he was saying! Man...what an asshole! Accusing Justin of being behind the robbery!! Never mind everything else he said. I hope Brian at some point really goes off on him! It's going to be a much relished scene when it happens. (it will happen right???) How long is Dave going to put up with Michael's shenanigans? Is he that much of a pantsy that he doesn't see michael's attitude for jealousy and simply wanting Brian for himself? Ugh....
Anyway. great chapter!
Cheers
Elaine
Author's Response:
Wow! Thanks for the long review, Elaine. :)
The second teaser on Facebook did provide most of our readers with a bit of a heads-up about those nausea-inducing moments. The gang needs cast-iron stomachs and loads of humor to cope with all those mawkish endearments, Michael's atrocious table manners, and Dr Dave slobbering all over his boyfriend. The only thing worse is having to write it. :P
Emmett can be quite close-lipped when it concerns his friends, so we'll have to see if Brian has any success winkling information about BOB out of him. The brunet stud may have to suffer a while longer. :D
We're made up that you're enjoying the way Brian's friends hold their own and somtimes come out on top. :P Not even Brian can seem perfect and be in control all the time, and in this story, his friends are ever more on to him. We're proud of Brian - both for the progress he's made in forging deeper friendship and, especially, for actually managing to utter the words, "I'm sorry." You're right, he still has a ways to go, but he's taken a big step in the right direction.
Michael does actually complain in canon that Justin should be in prison. It's in regard to his swiping Brian's credit card, not the burglary, but it works here too. Jealous Michael was such a shit to Justin for most of season one (and some in later seasons - the old 'best friend' excuse).
Dr. Dave is totally enamored with Michael. At least he's pretty much over his jealousy of Brian, since Brian supports his relationship with Michael. We'll have to see what Brian does in regard to Michael... he's still figuring it out, we suspect.
We're working on the next chapter now. :) A teaser is up in the FanDoc.
~ KaBrynn
Date: May 28, 2018 7:39 pm Title: Chapter 3: Sunday, November 5th - Part 2
Gus is against him forgetting Justin. His dreams are against him. The world and blond twinks who can't give a decent blow job are against it. Only michael. Geeze. Poor guy.
Doesn't he know not to tempt fate like he did by kicking Justin out? Ha!
Author's Response:
Your comments on this chapter have us giggling. :D You'd think Brian would realize fate was conspiring against him, right? But, alas, it can't be that simple for the stud.
Thanks for reviewing, Sherry. :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: May 28, 2018 5:04 pm Title: Chapter 2: Sunday, November 5th - Part 1
Justin was lucky Jed was there to look out for him. Who knows what would have happened. I'm certain they'll meet again.
I hated how Brian's selfishness showed it's ugly head when his things were stolen. Not a thought or care as to what could happen to Justin. Lindsay drove that point home and hebdesrtvef to feel unsettled by it.
If the diner had been busy Justin would have missed out on both a job and a place to stay. Funny how Deb and Daphne know Justin's eating habits. Ha!
"Second Hand Job", bet it has almost all of Brian's stolen items inside. Marvella seems to pop up everywhere.
Author's Response:
Justin's encounter with Jed was indeed fortuitous - and the impetus behind our responsible Justin. :)
Not that we agree with the way Brian acted toward Justin, but in the guy's defense, he was feeling very vulnerable after the burglary - all the possessions he'd acquired through hard work gone and his personal space violated. Plus, he's clueless that he's in a relationship with Justin.
Justin and his bottomless stomach! :D Both will feature in the story again.
That's an interesting theory about Second Hand Job and Brian's stolen goods. We'll have to see how that plays out...
Thanks for reviewing chapter by chapter, Sherry. We're enjoying revisiting the beginnings of our story via your comments. :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: May 28, 2018 3:23 pm Title: Chapter 1: Saturday, November 4th, 2000
I'm just starting this so there will be a skew of reviews.
Justin did lock up. Michael's the one who let the thieves in. Why else was he so close to the loft when Brian got there. Brian was at work when Justin told Cynthia to tell Brian. Why was Mikey around so early in the day?
Yeah, can just picture Brian staying with Em and Mikey till he could get back into the loft. He'd shoot himself first.
Author's Response:
We're made up that you're reading our story, Sherry. :) Feel free to bury us under a mountain of reviews - we can take it. :D It may take us a while to respond, but we'll do our best.
That Michael is responsible for the burglary is a popular theory. That storyline is still playing out, so we'll have so see what develops.
Yeah, Brian would probably have to off himself if he took Michael up on his offer. :D But will the alternative be much better?
~ KaBrynn
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2018 7:38 am Title: Chapter 34: Wednesday, December 6th
Thank you for the update ! The chapter is amazing!! Mickey is idiot and David well I have no words:: Finally Brian says sorry and admitte his feelings. He is so jealous . I love the girls they are the devil and Brian listens every word. Is Emmett going to talk to him about Bob ? it could be so funny!!! Later ladies.
Author's Response:
Michael and David do tend to leave us speechless... :P
We're proud of the brunet stud. He actually apologised and admitted to having feelings - major progress! But, not, he doesn't do jealousy. Nuh-uh. Riiight, Brian. Keep telling yourself that.
We had such fun planning the girls' interrogation of Justin, with Brian hanging on every word. :D
Emmett can be surprisingly close-mouthed at times, so we don't know whether Brian will succeed in winkling any info about BOB out of him. Stay tuned for the next chapter...
Thanks so much for the fun review, Marie-france. :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: May 27, 2018 12:05 am Title: Chapter 34: Wednesday, December 6th
At least Brian is being honest with Justin about his feeling, sort of. My goodness if he didn't have Ted and Emmett helping him he would get nowhere.
Author's Response:
Major progress for our favourite brunet, right? Brian has trouble admitting he has feelings - even to himself, poor guy.
Thanks so much for leaving a comment. :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: May 26, 2018 7:46 pm Title: Chapter 34: Wednesday, December 6th
Michael is disgusting when he talks and eats; David isn't better with the pet's names; eww...!
Brian did dare telling Justin some important facts: good for him even if it doesn't get him what he wants the most: getting laid with Justin.
The questions' game is a dangerous one with girls like Daphne and Sydney; it was hilarious on their table and also on Brian's; the way he wanted to hear what was said and try to get Sydney to ask something for him. At least, he heard about "the face of God".
The parking karma is still angry with Brian.
Author's Response:
Oops! We forgot to add a warning to keep all food and drink away from computers and electronic reading devices. :D Fortunately, none of our readers seems to have hurled, despite Michael and David's best efforts. :D
Apologizing was a big step for Brian, right? We're proud of our favourite brunet. :) Will he figure out how to lure Justin back to his bed? It's hard to imagine things progressing as smoothly as the stud would like.
We're made up that you enjoyed the girls' interrogation of Justin. The lad held up remarkably well, although he probably passed out the moment he got home, falling onto his bed fully clothed.
Brian's plotting how to steal his parking karma back from Teddy. :P
Thanks for being such a faithful reader and reviewer, Claire. :) The teaser for the next chapter is up in the FanDoc.
~ KaBrynn
Date: May 26, 2018 11:37 am Title: Chapter 34: Wednesday, December 6th
Now why was everyone saying Brian was gaining weight? Impossible! And I have to say...all that Crazy English...every time I came across one, I was like....what? huh? It was messing with my flow lol
Now that's a little progess for the boys! Yes! A flaming hot kiss...thank you Emmett was a nice start. So glad they actually got to talk some too. Although yes, Brian should have definitely defended Justin when 'shit for brains' opened his mouth. What an asshole! Plus he's a pig while he eats.
"Christ! I'm sorry I kicked you out okay?" Finally!!! I bet Justin was stunned! Working at Deb's table? So everyone & his brother can walk through & bother them? That should be fun...not! lol
Loved Kiki's line....that little howler monkey....perfect description! You gotta use that one more! lmao Adding Zen Ben was a nice, welcomed touch. And the girls drilling Justin about his sex life, hysterical! Of course Brian AND Emmett were eavesdropping, loved the knowing looks and winks Em kept giving Brian. That BOB, can't wait til Brian finds out it's a toy! hahaha
Nice that Brian ran into, quite literally, his two saviors, Donald & Raymond. Maybe they could meet again sometime and Brian could learn a few 'moves' to better handle himself.
Fabulous chapter! Now how about a little sexy time or at least another hot memory of Justin topping!
Author's Response:
Brian's been freaking out all on his own about gaining weight. Love handles and a whole extra pound. Yikes! And then Emmett had to go and bring up Aunt Lula's prized sow for the second time... :P
Didn't you know that Pittsburgh is a very cosmopolitan city with a limitless supply of good-looking fags, including British expats? The expats have a hidden agenda - infiltrate the Pittsburghers' American English and turn it back into proper English. :D
Progress at last! After the opening sex scene in chapter one, it took a mere 365,648 words for us to reach a real-time kiss. Maybe that was too fast? * scratches head *
Brian cautions you not to expect too much of him all at once. This self-awareness shit is a royal pain! he complains.
We will take note of your appreciation of the 'little howler monkey' moniker. :D
Yeah... BOB is gonna be quite the surprise when Brian finds out. It makes us chuckle just thinking about it. :P
Thanks for the amazing review, Glo, and making us laugh in return. :D You've highlighted pretty much all of our favorite parts of the chapter.
We'll see what we can do to comply with your wish for another sex scene... Have you asked for that before? * scratches head again *
If you haven't checked yet (very unlikely) there's a teaser for the next chapter in the FanDoc.
~ KaBrynn