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Reviewer: Qaf_Freak Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2018 10:37 am Title: Chapter 34: Wednesday, December 6th

I always love reading the next instalment. Cant wait for the next one 😁



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting and letting us know you're reading - it's great to have you on board. :)

We're working on the next chapter now. If you haven't checked yet, a teaser is available in the FanDoc. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2018 6:41 am Title: Chapter 34: Wednesday, December 6th

Let me say this first....THANK YOU VERY MUCH LADIES...FINALLY ...you guys stopped torturing us with ur teasers...finally a update...what a freaking update it was....ABSOFUCKINGLUTLY AMAZING.. Mikey is nasty and an idiot ..and also FINALLY brian admitted his feelings and said sorry...Brian is super jealous from Bobby boy lololololol..i loved how justin handled everyone and talked to brian too...at last...they are on same page now...lets see where u evil ladies take this now.

Spectacular Chapter...Superb Writing...splendid work.

Enjoyed it a lot..lots of love to u wonderful ladies...xoxo.



Author's Response:

Tease? Us? What are you talking about? :D The ultimate tease: After the opening sex scene in chapter one, it took a mere 365,648 words for us to reach a real-time kiss. * patting selves on the back and cackling happily *

Brian is finally starting to get it together, huh? Don't expect too much of him too soon; it's inch by laborious inch. :P Now he just has to get Justin over to the loft... and get rid of that BOB fucker. What evil person came up with BOB... hmm...

We love your reviews. You always make us laugh, Navneet, as you altnerately cheer and curse us, lolol.

In case you haven't discovered it yet, the teaser for the next chapter is available in the FanDoc.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2018 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 34: Wednesday, December 6th

I wonder what brought up the exercising of Kinnetik?  Love the diner parts, especially when Mikey showed up and everyones stomach more or less turned with his eating habits.  Justin's two study mates were live wires this chapter.  Will Emmett tell what he knows about Bob?  I kind of wish he would, Brian has had a hard time of it after all.



Author's Response:

You were the first to review our new chapter - thanks, Phyllis! :)

Brian decided to drag Ted and Cynthia to the gym with him in chapter 31, when he started to freak out that he was developing love handles and that there wasn't enough time in the day for an essential exercise routine. :D He figrued they could use a workout too. :D His 'generosity' backfired just a tad.

Everyone who's commented on this chapter seems to be fighting off Mikey-induced nausea. :P Soz, we just had to share.

Emmett can be surprisingly close-lipped when it matters most. We'll have to see what kind of persuasion Brian can bring to bear.

A teaser for the next chapter is up in the FanDoc, and we'll post the new chapter as soon as possible.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2018 5:10 pm Title: Chapter 33: Monday, December 4th

What a chapter!!! Great job!

Poor Brian: you are so mean with him, mocking him with his inability to use his coffee maker and his brand new microwave, making him fall and have a near-miss in front of the bank, making him witness Justin kissing another guy, having a bad hair due to a solo session, having another person stealing his parking karma... Apart his new acquisition, he doesn't have lots to be grateful for and he is still waiting for Justin to come back and "release" him.

Justin one the other hand is doing well and is getting closer to Carl who id getting really close to Debbie. The scene at Debbie's was delightful. Carl is fitting well in this family. I hope Wen will like Justin's drawings.

I have one request: could it be possible to have more frequent updates, but smaller?



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for being such a faithful reader, Claire. :) We appeciate your comments.

You caught us. We love to torture Brian. :P Brian still has rather a steep learning curve ahead of him if he wants Sunshine back in the loft. Btw, incidents like the one with the microwave have happened to people in real life, even to one of the authors. :D

Geesh, we wish would could promise more frequent updates and shorter chapters, but...  Back at the beginning of Tricky Business, we did break a couple of days down into two chapters each. We really prefer to post a full day (= one chapter) at a time; there's just so darned much happening that it leads to lengthy installments. With a little luck, the next chapter will be shorter. Anything under 20,000 words is good by our current standards. :P

Now that real life is cooperating (somewhat), we're working on the next chapter. :) Check out the teaser - it's a real 'tease' - in the FanDoc.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: kerri240879 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2018 9:05 am Title: Chapter 33: Monday, December 4th

Hi girls; I am so freaking tired - I've already done 40 hours this week, and am only four days in. But I wanted to let you know that I read it, and I loved it. I'm just too tired at this point to leave a huge review. But I will reread on the weekend, and give you the review you both deserve. xx



Author's Response:

At least you got it together to write a comment, Kerri. Karynn's, what, 7-8 chapters behind with The Butterfly Effect? Shame on her! :D

We're chuffed that you enjoyed the last chapter. Have you checked out the teaser, emphasis on 'tease' for the next one? :P

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 11, 2018 9:28 am Title: Chapter 33: Monday, December 4th

I will keep this short...this chapter was *fabulous* like always ..i *loved* it...( wide smile on my face)..hope to see Brian in better mood soon lol...no matter how funny Brian's condition is right now ...😁 and no matter how happy justin is without brian in the picture.... we STILL want them together...STOP TORTURING US(Screaming loudly) ...gosh...sorry about that...ok..yah ..soooo thats it..Good work ladies...hope u both have a great day..mine u just made great...bye(waving frantically )...👋👋👋



Author's Response:

Soz, nope, can't stop. We love torturing our favourite readers. :D Brian too, of course. :P

You've already discovered the teasing teaser - cue the authors cackling evilly - so you'll just have to wait patiently (yeah, right, sure) for us to finish the next chapter.

Thanks so much for your amazing support of our story, Navneet. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 11, 2018 9:27 am Title: Chapter 33: Monday, December 4th

Brian has a crappy day, he misses his Sunshine so much. Except at the bank. It was funny! I loved Justin's day especially with Carl the librarian and surely Debbie and Vic, they are a great family!

Thanks for the update Ladies!



Author's Response:

Poor Brian! It's amazing that he can even walk with those balls so blue. :P

Justin has an amazing circle of supporters. :) We're made up that you're enjoying our take on him.

Thanks so much for commenting, Marie-france, and our apologies for the belated reply. Go check out the teaser for the next chapter, empasis on 'tease'. :D

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 11, 2018 3:07 am Title: Chapter 33: Monday, December 4th

Love reading the Justin parts.  His conversations with the librarian and Carl are great.  Poor Brian, his dreams of Sunshine didn't help the start of his day and catching Justin with Eric didn't help.  Why do I think that Eric's sister is named Syd?



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your support of our story, Phyllis. :) Our apologies for the belated response.

That's an interesting connection you've made between Syd and Eric. TBH, we didn't have that in mind when we wrote the convo in the diner between Deb, Justin, and Eric, but who knows what might happen now? :P

Since real life has finally decided to cooperate, we're making good progress on the next chapter and a teaser has been posted in the Fandoc. Beware, 'tease,' the word within a word, truly applies. :D

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: Tessan91 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2018 1:00 pm Title: Chapter 32: Sunday, December 3rd

I'm loving this story.

I read all the chapters in one day and I can't wait for the next chapter XD

Please update again SOON 



Author's Response:

Yay! We're made up to have you reading our story. :) And, wow, that must've kept you busy, gulping down the whole story in one go. :D

A massive Internet outage for one of the authors hindered our progress with the next chapter, but we'll get it up as soon as possible. In the meantime, an NSFW teaser is available in the FanDoc if you'd like to take a peek.

Thanks for leaving a review. :) Comments provide the best motivation.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: kerri240879 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2018 8:50 am Title: Chapter 32: Sunday, December 3rd

OK, so I have giggle-snorted my way through this twice now, and my kids have decided I am certifiable. *Wide eyes*

I loved Justin's giggle fit on the bus - having had one or two myself in the past, I knew exactly what he was going through!

"Sis," Vic's voice chided, "he can't answer with the way you've got him pressed against your tits."

I have learned not to drink coffee while reading your fic - Sir Fluffinator was not impressed at being sprayed with hot liquid, and if Isabel had rolled her eyes any harder, they would have popped right out of her head. I shit you not! But I regress - I giggle-snorted my way through this section, as the mental picture of Justin's red face danced through my head. I love the way you guys portray Deb and Vic in this - and I love the Britishisms that I come across - we spoke about this the other day, Karynn (and by God did we talk! I'm still spun out!).

I love how 'hard up' *snickers* Brian is right now, without Justin falling into his bed. His thoughts about it only being 8 months until he hits thirty had me grinning. 

I loved, loved, LOVED the scene with Michael and Justin setting up the house - it makes me want to rip him a new one every time that he reverts to form - I'm still offering up the anthill suggestion as punishment. *Grins*

And sure enough... asshat! The fact that he is oblivious to just how busy Justin's schedule is, makes me want to go "whack, whack, whack" on the back of his, ala Deb. 

LOLLED when Justin snubbed Brian at the door - you go, baby!! I'm really glad that he's sticking to his guns in this, and the fact that he is sending Brian around the bend in the meantime is just a bonus, lol!! And Brian's reaction to Justin tricking had me giggling like a loon - can we say jealous and hypocritical much? 

God, Ted, and Ben together are freaking adorable! I loved how you had Ted just shrug off Brian/Ben whereas Michael threw an epic hissy fit on the show.  

Loved the sweet moment of Brian sneaking desert off of Justin's plate - really cute. But I have to admit - I nearly threw up a little in my mouth when reading about David and Michael feeding each other - like...eww. 

Nawww.... sleepy kisses!! 

I've told you, ladies, before, and I will say it again - I love this story. Adore everything about it. And I seriously can't wait to read the chapter with my idea in it - I promise not to have a cup of coffee in my hand that day!! Squishy hugs for you both!! xxxx



Author's Response:

Your comments kept Karynn smiling when she was cursing the massive Internet outage that kept her offline for five days. She read your review twice - or was it three times? - on her tiny cell phone screen. :)

Btw, only the best people are certifiable. :D Who cares if kids and cats aren't impressed? :D

You're the second reviewer to admire that beautifully scripted line of Vic's. Karynn again takes a bow. (She's such a clever, modest lass.)

Karynn has to practice American spelling and usage (and think hard about it) when she responds to reviews; otherwise, she might turn into a Brit. :D What a horrible fate! She's also still spun out by that short convo with you, but is on the road to recovery. *snickers*

We had to show Brian queening out well in advance of his thirtieth; he was already so vocal about it in the second episode of the show.

Poor Michael. He's so misunderstood. He put all that effort into being nice to Justin for hours on end and doesn't understand why everyone is, at best, poking fun at him. :P He wants a gold star - no anal warts or fiery, biting ants - for being so good. :P No slaps from mom either, dammit!

 

"What're you talking about, woman?" Brian roars. "I do not do jealousy!"

The authors shake their heads. Yeah, the brunet stud is just a trifle deluded.

The brunet stud reaches down to adjust his painfully blue balls. "When am I gonna get some relief?" he whines.

"Your travails aren't over yet." The authors flip their ponytails over their shoulders, à la Sydney.

 

Ted and Ben are a hit! Yay! How odd that we'd pair two men who actually have something in common... :D

Oh, dear. That line about Michael and David feeding each other was a bit descriptive. To our credit - and the readers' relief - we did avoid details of their ensuing make-out session.

The occasional sweet moment insists on sneaking into our story, and we knew it would thrill Brian to be the one to succumb. :D

Now that Karynn is back online, even if she is still roundly cursing the Internet provider, we're crafting more of chapter 33. Your reward won't appear till chapter 34; we'll have to be on our toes when we write that dialog! :P

Thanks for the motivating review, Kerri!

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2018 10:43 am Title: Chapter 32: Sunday, December 3rd

Ha ha  Michael  nice to Sunshine it's was short !! Brian is so jealous of Bob, but no he doesn't do  jealous LOL I like Ben and Ted together. Thank you for this chapter all the part of Christmas decorations was very funny !!



Author's Response:

Hey! Michael was nice to Justin for hours! :D It's a record! :D

Brian is nodding in agreement. "Thank fuck someone has figured out that I don't do jealous." he says, heaving a sigh of relief. :P

It's unanimous so far. Ted and Ben make a wonderful pairing.

We're chuffed that you enjoyed Debbie's idea of Christmas decorations. C'mon, admit it. You actually had a bit of sympathy for Michael in regard to those reindeer… :P

Thanks for being such a faithful reader and reviewer, Marie-france. :) Karynn suffered a major Internet outage in her corner of the world, but we're back to working on the next chapter. An NSFW teaser is now available in the FanDoc. * naughty authors waggle their eyebrows *

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2018 7:40 pm Title: Chapter 32: Sunday, December 3rd

Michael will never grow up and actually say something sane, genuine or mature. He was even beng 'nice' to Justin when they were putting up the reindeer & other decorations. But of course that didn't last very long. Of course he doesn't even think of Justin's studies...he's an idiot who barely has brains of his own...sorry I'm being pretty harsh on Mickey...whatever! lol I enjoyed all the teasing in the beginning of the chapter but more Brian & Justin interaction! We need some more action...real, recent, live action! Sort of speak lol

Love love love Ted & Ben! Poor Brian's balls must be truly blue without his Sunshine. 



Author's Response:

Hey! That was a breakthrough for Michael - he actually forgot his jealousy of Justin for a few hours. Maybe he'll do better the next time. We have to encourage the dweeb. :P After all, there's a 'Michael' in every family. LOL

We take it you want actions, not words. Didn't you like the sweet kiss at the end? That was supposed to make you go "Aww" and forget your craving for scorching sex. Oh, right. This is Glo's review. What were we thinking? :P

We're chuffed that Ted and Ben are such a universally popular pairing.

:D Do you think Brian's balls might drop of from lack of Sunshine? :D

Patience, we counsel you. We can’t rush the B/J reunification, no matter how much you beg. :P

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2018 9:22 pm Title: Chapter 32: Sunday, December 3rd

Michael is so disgusting! I'm surprised that he can get away with such a behaviour.

Once again, Brian doesn't get lucky and learns that Justin has Bob and another kid to play with. However, he's getting closer and Justin gave him a great slogan and an incentive as well.



Author's Response:

Michael did forget for a few hours that he's dead envious of Justin. We'll have to see if he can manage it for longer the next time. :D Unfortunately, there's a Mikey in every family - can't get away from them. LOL Just have to learn to manipulate them. :P

Poor jealous Brian, the stud who doesn't do jealousy. Yeah, right. Who believes that line any more? :P

We thought it would be fun to have Justin dream up the 'Eat the meat' slogan this time around.

Thanks for reviewing, Claire. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2018 2:34 pm Title: Chapter 32: Sunday, December 3rd

So much delicious goodness, it's hard to know where to begin.  Love the banter with Carl.  It was hard to believe Michael was nice to Sunshine though he did make up for it at dinner.  The Christmas decorations were a hoot.  Brian was so sweet as the very end.  A perfect chapter all the way around.  Love the Ted/Ben pairing.



Author's Response:

Yay! We're thrilled that you enjoyed this chapter so much, Phyllis.

Carl does a darned good job of coping with the risqué banter that flies around in Deb's household. :)

Can you imagine having those reindeer on your rooftop? :D :D

Thanks for letting us know that you love the Ted/Ben pairing. So far it seems to be universally popular.

We thought that closing line might get an "Aww" or two. :)

Thanks for the wonderful review.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2018 6:07 am Title: Chapter 32: Sunday, December 3rd

"Sis," Vic's voice chided, "he can't answer with the way you've got him pressed against your tits."

LOLOLOLOLOLOL

This chapter was so much fun .my mouth hurts from all the laughing i did while reading it...omg...can't believe Brian is getting utterly desperate now...damn i thought we will finally get a KISS ...but nooooo u evil writers takes away any hope we had...boooo.

I mean seriously i thought finally they are going to talk some heart to heart...but nooooo u guys have to Ruin it for us...boooooo...i can't believe Brian is sooooo jealous of BOB & EM ...lols... how do u guys come up with so funny and hysterical puns ....and lines...i wonder every time.

Ok...thats it...That was Amazing and hilarious Update ...Miss. karynn and Miss.brynn u ladies just made my day...hats off to u both...such a excellent writing ...loved it alot...  thank u very very very much for the loveable update.



Author's Response:

Wow! You must have speed-read the chapter, you were so quick to comment. :)

Karynn takes a bow for the titty humour. :D

We're chuffed that we made you ache from laughing so hard.

Complain, complain, complain. It's so difficult to please some readers. :D What about that sweet kiss at the end? It was supposed to make you go "Aww" and forget all about any other kind of B/J kiss. :D

Brian's so hilarious when he thinks he doesn't do jealousy - silly stud.

We're working on the next chapter and should be able to post a teaser in the FanDoc within a few days.

Thanks for the delightful review, Navneet. :) You made us laugh in return.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2018 4:11 am Title: Chapter 30: Friday, December 1st

Been super busy lately and finally catching up.  Brian, Brian, Brian-  he needs to get his head out of his ass and tell Justin he was wrong.  Mickey hitting on Ben-  oh so wrong.  Hope Justin figures out he can't really burn the candle at both ends without crashing.  If he is about to crash, I hope Brian is there to catch him.



Author's Response:

We know all about the struggle to find tme to read and review, lol. We're glad you're still enjoying our story, Sandy. :)

Both of the boys are a mite stubborn, so it may be a bit of a contest as to which one comes to their senses first. :D We'll have to see what happens.

Have you managed to forge your way through chapter 31 yet? We rather outdid ourselves with the length of that one. No, Brian, we're not talking about inches...

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2018 7:45 am Title: Chapter 31: Saturday, December 2nd

Phewww....finally finished...that was ONE HELL OF LONG chapter...lol..What can review it..i am out of words .... Speechless....it was Outstanding , Fantastic, Excellent Chapter.

You ladies are soooooo damn good at this ...i really am at awe how do u come up with all of this ...lol...hats off dears...very very impressive.

Thank you both for this stupendous chapter  ...like always I LOVED IT...xoxo..toodles for now.



Author's Response:

Thanks for another wonderful review, Navneet. :D We were briefly out of words ourselves after completing that chapter - we're hoping it won't be surpassed as the longest in this story, but we know better than to say 'never'. LOL

Karynn is still without heat, so writing is a bit slow - uh, frozen - at the moment. Her heater should be replaced tomorrow or the next day, though, and then it will be back to writing, writing, writing. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2018 8:57 am Title: Chapter 31: Saturday, December 2nd

Hahaha I love Emmett he will make me love the gym; poor  Brian !!

Justin has a new boyfriend? Yes, Brian is going to be so jealous I'm waiting for the reaction of the green-eyed monster. Michael still jealous but Justin knows put it back in his place.

Thank you girls I liked this chapter and I know that with you 2 I have to be patient LOL



Author's Response:

Emmett had such fun tormenting Brian at the gym. :D And *cough* so did we. :D

We'll have to see how things evolve between Justin and Eric, but that green-eyed monster will almost certainly make an appearance. There seems to be a bit of gleeful anticipation at Brian's expense going on. :P

Those long chapters do take a while for us to produce. But we promise to crank out new installments as quickly as possible. :)

Thanks for another fun review, Marie-france. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: kerri240879 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2018 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 31: Saturday, December 2nd

Want to know what sucks? When you have a major review typed out and ready to post, and then the power goes out. *Blank look* I loved this chapter - I was LOL-ing during the scene with Brian and Emmett at the gym; I so want to say poor Brian, but it was too easy for Emmett to tease him like that. Excellent imagery!

Sydney is really starting to grow on me, but at the same time, it worries me because of Hobbs. And Dixon really is living up to his name - what a dick!!

Really loved Justin's moment with Eric, but I have the feeling that a little green-eyed monster is going to raise it's head if and when Brian finds out. Maybe another case of foot in mouth disease?  lol!

I really dislike Michael in this -I mean, wish him an incurable case of anal warts kind of dislike him. Or strap him to an anthill and cover him with honey kinda dislike. *Wide eyes* That was kinda vicious, no? Ha!!

Anyways, love the chapter, love the story, and love you guys. *Pom poms waving* Looking forward to more, and Karynn, I'll answer your reviews on AO3 later tonight. *Smooches you both and gives you squishy hugs*



Author's Response:

Ugh. It's nasty when the power goes out, especially at such a critical juncture. :) Karynn has been without heat for what feels like forever, even though it has been less than a week. Needless to say, she's not doing much writing at the moment. She tried typing with fingerless gloves, but that was a no go. New heater to be installed tomorrow or the next day. *blissfully anticipating a heated house*

It's so much fun to write Emmett getting the better of Brian. :D We can't resist. :D

Brian's green-eyed monster? Whatever are you talking about? :P You're likely right to anticipate more humor as a result.

The anal warts seem rather mild compared to your other suggestion for Michael, hahaha.

Smooches and squishy hugs back atcha, Kerri. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2018 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 31: Saturday, December 2nd

Loved the opening & the ending the best! Michael is such a vindictive asshole! What a loser....some friend! Please tell me Justin is going to give up dancing soon.....



Author's Response:

We knew you were jonesing for more action, Glo, so we decided to accommodate you, in this chapter anyhow. :D One of us was largely responsible for the opening scene and the other one for the closing scene. Can you decipher which was which? :D

Michael's so jealous that he can barely see straight, much less behave rationally. We'll have to see if that changes.

Um, no, we can't tell you that, soz. :P Justin may, however, recognise the need to give up the dancing sooner than Brian admits that he's in a relationship...

Thanks for reviewing!

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2018 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 1: Saturday, November 4th, 2000

I find your introduction of Eric into the storyline a much better one then the series.

 



Author's Response:

We're made up by your compliment, Phyllis. :) This is one of the plotlines we've had in mind since the beginning, with the story - and our more mature, responsible Justin - evolving to accommodate it.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2018 1:51 pm Title: Chapter 31: Saturday, December 2nd

Really great chapter up until Michael showed up making trouble.  Thing were beginning to look good for Brian and Justin but now I just want to slap Michael in the head.



Author's Response:

Michael's so jealous, he can't see straight. We'll have to see if he comes to his senses.

Justin was already peeved at Brian, so he might well have copped off with Eric in any case. He deserved to have some fun with more than his right hand or BOB. :D

Thanks for reviewing, Phyllis! :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2018 4:54 am Title: Chapter 31: Saturday, December 2nd

Whoa, that was hot! So happy to read this scene; it's way better than in the series! Way better than BOB.

Michael is as mean as ever; I hope it will come back and bite him. For once, Debbie reacted correctly.



Author's Response:

Thanks for being the first to review, Claire. :)

Whoa, that was hot! So happy to read this scene; it's way better than in the series! Way better than BOB.

Does that refer to the scorching opening scene? :D Sadly, we never saw anything quite like Brian's memory in canon - we're hard at work rectifying that, lol. We're guessing you're commenting on to the closing scene between Justin and Eric. High time Sunshine got to play with something other than his hand or BOB, right? :P We wanted to change things up with how Justin and Eric met and have our favorite blond be gentle with the other boy.

Michael's spiteful jealousy isn't going to make him very popular, lol.

~ KaBrynn

 

Reviewer: kerri240879 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2018 9:10 pm Title: Chapter 30: Friday, December 1st

First of all - happy birthday, Karynn, once again. I hope that you had a wonderful "not getting older, just wiser" day.  

Now, review; I wasn't able to read yesterday (internet issues, working a double shift, yadda, yadda) so I'm a little behind the eight ball - or should I say Brian's blue balls? lol! The man shouldn't have to worry about them falling off - he'll be handing them over to Justin soon enough, along with an apology! 

His "attempt" at seduction was as funny as all shit - we'll blame the lack of good sex and a case of "blue ball strangulate" on his lack of common sense. I can so clearly see him trying to figure out who BOB is so that he can extract his revenge for the hooker with the loose ass! lol!

I loved the byplay between Daph and Justin, but the whole Dixon thing is starting to worry me. He was such an ass in canon, and I love how you guys have really delved into the whole school scene with this. 

Loving it as always, and am officially the president of our M.F-G club. Waving brit-poms *snickers* from down under for such talented writers, especially when I continue to find little Britishisms scattered that make me giggle. Cheers. xxx 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the additional birhtday greetings, Kerri! :) Definitely older and, who knows, maybe actually a little bit wiser. :)

Brian is not pleased with your assessment. He's spinning his wheels trying to figure out how to extricate himself and his blue balls from any kind of actual apology. That lack of common sense may not yet be at an end, what with planning Operation Twat Retrieval. He'd better not let the name for his campaign slip... :D

Dixon will undoubtedly continue to be a dickhead. He takes his cue from Perkins, unfortunately. We'll have to see how much of a damper Detective Wen's visit puts on the homophobic administration and faculty...

Waving Brit-poms back at you... :D Thanks for a wonderful review from Oz!

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2018 7:10 pm Title: Chapter 30: Friday, December 1st

Holy long chapter!! So great! Really enjoyed it.

Looks like Brian will be eating some humble pie at some point in the future. How soon will be up to him. Was SO proud of Justin though for standing up for himself there. He may still love Brian, but I don't think he likes parts of him. He's also realizing that he CAN live without him. Sure he'd prefer to be with him, but Brian has to work for it. Seems like justin has really matured in the past little while.

Loved Justin and Daph's convos.  can justimagine his look of horror asking about her getting a boob job. LOL! They are such good friends. He's going to make himself VERY ill though. No way he can do all the jobs he's doing plus school.

Such a good update!!! 

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Believe it or not, this chapter isn't even in the top five in length. :D Insanely enough, we're averaging nearly 10,000 words per chapter. :D

We're chuffed that you enjoyed this installment. We knew our readers were chomping at the bit for some action, but it took a while to build to this point.

Justin is an incredibly strong and proud man - very much Brian's equal. We're thrilled that you liked the way he stood up to Brian. :) You're right that Brian will probably have to eat humble pie, but you know our favorite brunet will try to squirm his way out of an actual apology.

Both the boys are so darned stubborn. One can't even admit to himself that he's been in a relationship, since he doesn't do those; the other one has acknowledged to himself that he might not be able to do everything, but he's by no means ready to quit trying just yet.

We're glad you're enjoying Justin and Daphne's banter. Their friendship - possible boob job and all, lol - is such fun to write.

Thanks for the wonderful review, Elaine. :) It made us smile. A teaser for the next chapter is availabe in the FanDoc.

~ KaBrynn

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