Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 29, 2017 5:24 am Title: Chapter 24: Saturday, November 25th

WOW...i mean WOW...That was one unexpected start of the chapter...my god...how could brian be soo stupid to let go something soo precious and beautiful ..?? They were soo beautiful together...he made big mistake..stubborn ass*** ...please let justin turn down brian with that stupid idea of being sex buddies...seriously he is soo egoistic to come with that dumb thoughts. Gosh ..this story is going soo awesome...when em said my baby brians reaction was priceless...HE IS NOT YOURS..lols..i love a jealous Brian ...make him more envious in coming chapters..wink wink...great job guys ...that was one memorable chapter...lol..i will look forward to see Brian's and justin's conversations the most ...more then the cops discovery.

Author's Response:

We're so chuffed by your enthusiam for our story and your wonderful reviews, Navneet. :)

Brian may be coming to his senses in regard to Justin, but *cough* he's not quite there yet. We'll have to see how Justin responds to Brian's proposal... if the adman can every get him alone for a moment. :D

Yes, haha, the stud who doesn't do jealousy... Who really believes that line?

Thanks so much for all the lovely compliments about this chapter. :) We're working diligently on the next chapter and the story as a whole.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2017 3:05 pm Title: Chapter 24: Saturday, November 25th

That was an hot sex scene ! Justin needs to sleep ! I like Ted becomming friend with Brian !

Great chapter ! Thank you for the update

Author's Response:

We thought we'd open the chapter with a bang. :D We're chuffed that you enjoyed it, Marie-france.

It's hard to tell when that lack of sleep will catch up with Justin and what will happen then. The lad's definitely burning the candle at both ends.

It's great fun to write Ted and Brian's developing friendship.

Thanks for reviewing. :) We're working on the next chapter now.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2017 3:00 am Title: Chapter 24: Saturday, November 25th

darn-  not the first to review-  great sex scene -  love the playfullness between Brian and Justin

 

gag every time another pet name comes up between Michael and Dr Dave - and I just hate that Brian or anyone is not putting Michael in his place when he just blasts Justin with all that mean spirit.

 

Liked that Ted talked to Brian- now Brian has to get over himself and talk to Justin

Author's Response:

We're made up that our readers want to be the first to review. :D

The two of us had fun writing that opening scene competition between Justin and Brian; both men won in the end. :D

Imagine having Dr Dave and Michael whisper those pet names into your ear - we can't escape! LOL

We're doing our best to nudge Brian toward Justin.

Thanks for commenting, Sandy. :) We're writing away on the next chapter.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2017 9:27 am Title: Chapter 19: Monday, November 20th

Mmmmm, I like BOB. And Justin playing with toys on Brian is hottttt! But now I'm too worked up to get to sleep. Lol. TAG

Author's Response:

It's a toss-up as to whether BOB or Harley is our favorite original character. :D

We couldn't figure out the right 'tags' for this chapter. :D NSFW and NSBB (not suitable before bed) seemed a bit much. So we guess you'll just have to suffer. :D

Thanks for letting us know how much you enjoyed Justin playing with toys on Brian. We'll have to see what that inventive blond comes up with next.

Thanks for the review, TAG. :) After various RL interruptions, we're getting closer to posting chapter 24.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: Saje Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2017 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 22: Thanksgiving, Thursday, November 23rd

Bwahahaha!

Shriveled balls, nut stuffing, fuck the mad out of him!

Delightful! !!

Saje

Author's Response:

We're glad you enjoyed the Thanksgiving feast, Saje. :D Thanks for commenting!

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2017 2:28 pm Title: Chapter 23: Friday, November 24th

Ohhh...god...that was some chapter..Really entertaining..u guys are real match makers...first it was debs now vic..good ..in this line was the CUM a grammar error or it was intentional "Mr Grassi, after you've seen the lad to the break room cum changing area, would you care to join me in a libation from my personal stock?"...lols..i just love their interactions ...how do u guys are soo funny...??? Where do u get this humorous brain???i have to take breathers in between cause of all thr giggling i do here reading it.Seriously dave calling mikey honeybun ?? Also in last chapter he keeps calling him by these endearment's ..that is soo hetero ...in kinneys words. And what the hell is going on in that stubborn head of kinney..?? Gosh..i will never understand that man. This secret stalker shit is going to be one of the reasons of BJ's reunification ...the chapter was fabulous..hats off to u guys ...keep it up...keep surprising with new chaps...like always .

Author's Response:

In the line you refer to, 'cum' is a preposition meaning 'also used as' for things with a dual purpose or function - hence, 'break room cum changing area'. :D When other writers use the alternate spelling 'cum' for 'come', I have no problem with it, but not in my stories... please.

We're into funny business as well as tricky business, which could be the same thing at times. :D We have to alleviate the angst with humor.

Neither of us likes the 'honeybun' endearment, so we thought we'd torture Dr Dave and Michael with it.

Brian's proud have his brain be difficult to analyze. :D

We'll have to see what comes of those stalker rumors - is there a stalker or not? Feel free to leave your hypothesis in the FanDoc. :)

Thanks for such a fun review, Navneet. :) We're completely made up by it.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2017 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 23: Friday, November 24th

Hmmmm so Brian is gonna fold soon huh? It's about time! Justin seems to be very popular. It's a good thing though, even Vic seems to be getting a secret admirer...nice! All this British lingo though...us Yanks read this too ya know lol 

Author's Response:

Justin is popular, especially when dancing to 'In the Navy'. :D

We'll have to see how Brian does at acquiring Justin as a fuck buddy. He may still need to work on his approach...

We're chuffed that you're enjoying expanding your vocabulary. :D Expect more 'real' English. :D

Thanks for reviewing, Glo! :) A teaser for the next chapter will be posted soon in the FanDoc.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2017 8:42 pm Title: Chapter 23: Friday, November 24th

Poor Brian: he's been teased all night and wasn't able to get Justin to release the tension.

Vic might be getting lucky on the coming days... Good for him!

I don't like the fact that a cop came to get Justin. Such an easy way to get what he wants if he is the stalker. I hope somebofy will check with Carl if he sent someone.

Author's Response:

Brian thanks you for the sympathy for his blue balls. :D

Once he was sure Justin would be looked after, Vic enjoyed his flirtation with Smythe; we'll have to see what comes of it.

Officer Reyes was just following his superior's (Carl's) commands, ensuring that Justin got home safely. It's unlikely that he has enough insider knowledge to be the stalker.

Thanks for reviewing so quickly, Claire. :) We'll post a teaser for the next chapter in the FanDoc as soon as possible.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: OBabyRN Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2017 8:10 am Title: Chapter 1: Saturday, November 4th, 2000

Michael going thru Justin's things and making out on the bed was too much.  Why wasn't there more outrage for this?  Good that  Brian's jealously is showing more and loved the poem, but his comments to Vic about Justin's irresponsibility and his negative comments about Gus not being safe with Justin because of the banana mess we're offbase.  He wouldn't say that, even in an altered universe.  I wish you well trying to Brian and Justin back together, but I can't see a foreseeable realistic outcome for these two.  Even though it has only been a few weeks, it was always the underling bond....  I really wanted to see this one work out. 

Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving a comment :)

Michael's transgressions were outshined by the poem and the curious attempts at its translation, so no one had time to be more outraged by it, I suppose. And him and David playing couch quail in Justin's room was overlooked most likely because everyone was a little tipsy at that point and didn't think much of it. As for Brian in this last chapter - he has just recently been assaulted and left traumatised, and clearly has problems sorting himself out. I can't see how I could fault him for being a little capricious under the circumstances.

I am sorry you won't be around to see the story work out, though I am confident it will even without you :)

KaBrynn

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2017 4:24 pm Title: Chapter 22: Thanksgiving, Thursday, November 23rd

What a terrific chapter. So much going on. Laughed my ass off in parts. Oh felt so bad for Justin. What an awful way to get woken up! I remember growing up my mom used to come wake me up by opening up the blinds in my room. was not a great way to start my day. I feel lucky in comparison!! LOL!

The family certainly has a different kind of rapore don't they? amazing how Carl seemed to fit right in and took everythng on the chin. There were a few hiccups, but either way, he got a eye opening look into the family dynamics and didn't run away screaming. Points for Caril! Hopefully he and Deb can make a go of it without too much intereference from Michael. glad he's becoming friensd with the gang and that he's really keeping hsi eye out for Justin. He's proving himself as welcoem addition, dispite some of the gang's negative attitude re: cops.

Gus is sure chatting up a storm. New words coming daily. Deb must've been near bursting when he said his own version of Gramma. Like all kids, Gus-speak will become more and more fluid.

Michael really is an ass isn't he. barely capable of formulating his own thoughts. must drive David around the bend. Makes me wonder the psychology behind David. He must really crave the feeling of dominance, of superiority to put up with Michael's ignorance. Most people like an intellectual equal. David seems to want to be able to patronize.

Brian is frustrating. He obviously wants Justin. He's just choosing not to forgive. Not sure why. Wonder what's going to happen once he finds out it wasn't Justin after all. Will Justin be willing to forgive him? Will turn around be fair play in this case? the internal fighting that Brian is doing must be exhausting! Vic's no fool though. He knows. He's right though. Justin is only going to wait for so long for Brian to get his head out of his ass. 

Loved this chapter! 

Cheers

Elaine

 

Author's Response:

We're completely made up by your comments, Elaine. :)

Poor Justin, indeed. Not the way any of us wants to 'rise and shine'. That scene begged to be written, since canon Deb wasn't much of one for respecting personal boundaries. Karynn's pleased you enjoyed the humor. :D As Deb told Justin, you have to give as good as you get in her household. :D

We have a feeling that Carl's not one to give up easily, so another slow-burn romance is probably in the air with Deb. :)

Deb was thrilled to be called grandma. We suspect that Gus and Harley will be acquiring quite the colourful vocabulary from Grandma Debbie - and others. lol

Michael - what can we say? *sigh* The only way we can deal with him is to use him for comic relief. Dr Dave has acquired a 'lemon' for a boyfriend, but he seems happy with his sourpuss...

Brian's still having trouble getting over the invasion of his loft. As a reminder, it has only been two and a half weeks since the burglary. Our favourite stud is torn between continuing to rebuff Justin and putting his hands all over the teen. :D We're hoping he'll listen to the excellent advice from Vic.

Thanks for letting us know you enjoyed the entire, insanely long Thanksgiving chapter. :) We're working on the next chapter now and should soon be posting a teaser in the FanDoc.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2017 1:31 pm Title: Chapter 22: Thanksgiving, Thursday, November 23rd

Loved this chapter, of course but my God! Does no one in the Novotny/Grassi family know how to knock on a closed door?! If someone did that to me, I'd be bullshit, especially as a teenager. Yeah embarrassed but more angry then anything. And pulling the bedding from him too? Wow...a complete invasion of personal space. They could have woken him up without doing all that. I'm sure Deb & Vic wouldn't have appreciated someone, anyone, doing that to them...okay bitching over lol

Enjoyed all the teaching of putting together a Thanksgiving feast. I'm going to have to try some of that myself thanks! Justin was so thoughtful, thinking of healthy choices for Brian. At least Brian was thankful while he lusted after him behind his back lol Seems like Gus & Harley stole the show with all their 'words' heehee

Okay we all know Michael is a simple man...um I mean boy and clearly he's still stuck in the ID stage of life because the world does revolve around him...NOT! How dare he call Deb too old! I would not be proud if I spawned that...Michael is so rude, no surprise there. Rude to Deb, rude to Justin, rude to Carl, will he ever grow up? Probably not. How could everyone just sit there and let him call Justin names like that? Michael trying to sound grown up & smart just never seems to work out. lol Can always rely on Justin to educate the man, um boy. Love when he's a PSA! Of course Brian is going to be jealous of BOB! He'd rather be servicing Justin himself. 

Now on to more 'invading' personal space: Michael! That room may have been his at one time but all Justin's stuff is in there now, how dare he go into the desk & snoop & think it's okay to take things! "Michael honey..." seriously Deb? That's all you're gonna say? At least Justin had a laugh at his idiocy. 

Love Brian & Ted's friendship and Vic & Brian...stronzo...haven't heard that in awhile. lol the ending was awesome! Brian can't get his mind off of Sunshine...

Author's Response:

Personal space? What's that? Deb and Vic want to know. We had a lot of sympathy for Justin, but Karynn so clearly envisioned that 'rise and shine' scene that it had to be written. There were quite a few instances of Deb not respecting privacy in canon. In spite of the siblings not recognizing boundaries, Justin seems to be recovering from his embarrassment and anger. As the redhead declared, you have to give as good as you get in her household.

If you want any of the recipes behind the dishes that were served at the Thanksgiving feast, let Karynn know. :)

We suspect both Harley and Gus will be acquiring a colourful vocabulary. :D

Michael's not nearly as dumb in canon, but he was so darned irritating that this is our method for coping with him. Dr Dave has acquired a 'lemon' of a boyfriend, lol.

Our favourite stud is clearly jealous of BOB. Vic had such fun teasing Brian without giving anything away.

Michael's invasion of Justin's space is the worst of all. Deb and Vic unintentionally stripping Justin naked pales in comparison. Unfortunately, Michael has yet to realize that the bedroom at his mother's house is no longer his - probably because Deb lets him use it as a storage closet. *sigh*

We're made up that you're enjoying Ted and Brian's friendship as well as Vic interactions with Brian. We laughed ourselves silly at the way Vic teased the stud about BOB without revealing anything, as well as giving Brian some much-needed advice.

Yay! Karynn's doing a happy dance that you enjoyed the 'vanilla sex' to cap off the chapter. :D

Thanks for all the wonderful comments, Glo, rant included, lol. We've started working on the next chapter and should soon be posting a teaser in the FanDoc.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: OBabyRN Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2017 8:42 am Title: Chapter 7: Wednesday, November 8th

I'm struggling with Brian's continuing hatred of Justin.  I'll read a few more chapters, but angst has got to give.

Author's Response:

Thanks for giving our story a try. :)

This chapter takes place on the fourth day after the burglary, so we think it's understandable that Brian is having a difficult time adjusting to the invasion of his loft, for which he blames Justin. Except for chapters 2 and 3, which together span one day, each chapter covers a day.

Also, Brian has been hit with a double whammy - first the burglary and now Kip Thomas' accusations - so he's having a really tough week.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2017 4:32 am Title: Chapter 22: Thanksgiving, Thursday, November 23rd

Ok...christ...i had to stop again....lols..justin is such a PSA..Brian is getting horny by just watching sunshine...gosh soo many emotions going inside brians head. All this food is making me hungrey....mikey is a dumbo...all those slaps on his head might have effected his intelligence.

I am going to proceed again...really exciting chapter.

Author's Response:

Yay! We kept you laughing. :D

Brian is torn between rebuffing Justin and putting his hands all over the teen. We should pity the stud... :D

If reading about the food is making you hungry, think what writing about did to Karynn. :D It's amazing she didn't gain ten pounds.

That's an interesting observation about Mikey's intelligence... what little he had to start with, Bad!Karynn mutters.

Thanks for review number two on this chapter, Navneet. :)

~ KaBrynn