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Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2017 3:35 am Title: Chapter 22: Thanksgiving, Thursday, November 23rd

Ohhh myyy god...that start was hiralious...i had to take break in between...i am laughing so hard...mindblowing way to start..just stopped to tell you guys...that u ROCK..LOLS.

AGAIN...OMG...gus called debbie grandma...soo sweet..u just made my day thank u guys...ok now i am going to read further.

 



Author's Response:

Justin may still be recovering from the way he ended up greeting Thanksgiving day. :D Karynn's chuffed that she made you laugh with the 'rise and shine' scene. :D

Thanks for taking a break from reading to leave your first review on this chapter, Navneet. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 1:44 pm Title: Chapter 21: Wednesday, November 22nd

An amazing chapter ! Mel made a kickass work for Brian !

I'm laughting about Brian and justin with Gus like parents !!! And Brian misses Justin when there 2 are back together ?

Please Brian had to forgive Justin even it's not him who did not put the alarm right ??? Carl must find something !

Thank you for the update.



Author's Response:

Mel is one incredible, kickass attorney. Brian is darned lucky she's on his side. They'll undoubtedly return to their usual bickering soon, lol.

Brynn is taking a bow for Brian's observation that he and Justin are acting like a divorced couple. :D

We know all you cheeky readers want Brian and Justin back togehter - right now, dammit! :D We're trying to nudge them in that direction, and they may be starting to listen. Keep in mind that the story is 'slow burn' and that less than three weeks have elapsed since the burglary.

Carl and Wen are investigating the robbery, but an investigation is usually painstaking. It takes time to unearth and follow up on all possible leads.

Thank you for leaving another review, Marie-france. We've started working on the next chapter - Thanksgiving has arrived. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 7:29 am Title: Chapter 21: Wednesday, November 22nd

That was one fun and adventures chapter....i loved it...the interaction btw gus and justin then gus and brian was simply fun...and brians observation on his talk with justin ...they both are acting like divorced parents.. was too good.
U guys are soo clever..as always loved it..thanks a bunch of the update.

Author's Response:

We're so glad you enjoyed the scenes with Gus. That tyke is so adorable and such a scene-stealer - just like Harley. :) Brynn is taking a bow for Brian's observation that our boys are acting like a divorced couple. :D

Thank you for being such an amazing reviewer and reader and posting all those fun gifs, Navneet.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 5:22 am Title: Chapter 20: Tuesday, November 21st

I really like your idea to open a fandoc for the story. Brilliant! Hope you get lots of input! And... I really want to see Brian come face to face with Harley yelling his name in Justin's voice. Please let that happen soon. Please! TAG



Author's Response:

We wanted to create something for our faithful readers, hence the FanDoc. :) We've seen a couple of anon critters in the doc, so at least it's being accessed. Even if it doesn't generate discussion, it's something for the readers to enjoy.

We'll whisper your suggestion in Harley's ear and see what happens... :D

Thanks for reviewing, TAG!

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 3:03 am Title: Chapter 13: Tuesday, November 14th

another great chapter-  Jennifer was such a bitch-  glad Debbie got her to change her mind.  Brian and Horvath-  glad that Brian knows he gave Justin his rucksack- makes Brian a little more forgiving-   Interesting converstion with Smthye but still don't trust him

 

I feel so badly for Justin and for all kids that are bullied-  it really is bad when the administration doesn't support the student-  lots more to read-  just so little time



Author's Response:

Thanks for leaving another review, Sandy. We're glad to hear from you here or on AO3. :)

Debbie makes the best surrogate mom ever. She was pretty clever in the way she persuaded Jennifer to cough up Justin's birth certificate.

That makes two of you since Brian doesn't trust Smythe either. :)

It is absolutely horrible that many kids are bullied for one reason or another. Too often, bullying goes unreported or unresolved, either for fear of retaliation and/or indifference on the part of school administrators.

You'll catch up with us eventually; we've just started working on chapter 22.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2017 9:56 pm Title: Chapter 21: Wednesday, November 22nd

I've been away from reading for a bit and have finally been able to get back t oit. I've caught up on those that I had already begun reading and promised myself that I wouldn't start any others until 1 or 2 of them were completed. Well...as good of intentions as they were, it certainly didn't last long. Decided to start 1 other fic and naturally it was this one. Am all caught up and have nejoyed it thoroughly. I'm curious as to who actually knew the code and broke in. How much of an ass is Brian going to feel like once he finds out the truth! the malicious side of me is looking forward to him feeing like a complete heel! lol. Especially once he finds out the Justin has been working 2 jobs in order to pay him back and is NOT the "irresponsible teen brat" he's assumed he is. Not a terrible long or hard fall from grace for Brian, but at least one with a soft landing. In this case perhaps "Pride cometh before the fall" will be very appropriate.

Deb and vic's realtionship with justin is really lovely. They've brought him in and really surrounded him with love and support. something he really needs about now. He's getting what he needs from than rather than his parents sadly. I'm not sure that Jen is going to be able to redeem herself, at least not in the too near future. will definitely take time. I can't even imagine not supporting my child! I've wanted to back hand her several times throughout this. She's coming acriss as such a pretencious bitch! I hope that she learns a lesson pretty quickly. what is she teaching Molly? that if she doesn't tow the line, do as she's told and what's expected of her she'll be kicked to the curb too? 

Harley is going to be a hoot! I can see him learning some interesting new words and phrases. just enough to embarass the hell out of Justin at times! should be good for a giggle. How much of an influence will Harley have on gus's vocabulary?? hehehe. Again...can see come giggle worthy moments with those 2 as well.

Oh I'm so glad I started this. While I wish Brian would get off his high horse and stop being such an asshole, another part of me wants him to start seeing justin as a young man who whill more than likely become more mature than himself. ;) I want him to get Michael to stop treating Justin with disdain. and I want Justin to see that while he knows Brian is his, it's going to take time for brian to realize it and that Justin needs to show him what he's missing. this is a good growth time for Justin, and he needs for Brian to deserve him.

Mel kicks ass! She's a real legal beagle and Brian is on his way to starting his own business. One that will undoubtedly become a raving success. YAY!

Such a great fic! So thrilled that I started it and that you update regularly.

Cheers,

Elaine

 



Author's Response:

Wow! That's quite the glowing review, Elaine. We're blushing at having our story receive so much praise. :)

We're made up that you're enjoying Justin's relationship with Deb and Vic. They make wonderful surrogate parents for our favourite blond.

Jennifer's blowing it right now, but we're not ready to give up on her. We're hoping she'll come to her senses soon, although she has, sadly, done irreparable damage to her bond with her son. That's an intersting point about what she's teaching Molly, although she is at least encouraging Justin to see his sister.

You're right. Harley's probably going to cause no end of embarrassment for Justin, but the teen will learn to take it in stride - probably. :D Who knows? There may be quite a gabfest between Gus and the budgie.

It still hasn't been that long, not yet three weeks, since the burglars cleaned out Brian's loft, so we're cutting the stud some slack. Even if he's not ready to admit it, he clearly misses Justin. We'll have to see what details emerge from the investigation into the robbery and how that might influence matters.

Thanks so much for all the wonderful comments, Elaine. :)

We've just started working on the next chapter and will post a teaser for the next chapter in the FanDoc as soon as possible.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2017 9:40 pm Title: Chapter 21: Wednesday, November 22nd

Love to hear Mel doing what she does best and being in charge and smart & agressive! Brian was lucky to have her there with him. Can't wait to see how he's going to name his agency. Clearly he has to have Justin have some input whether he knows it or not. 

Well I think Brian was being a bit of a snob blaming Justin for Gus's mess...he's a baby! That's his job! lol And thinking that Justin had ulterior motives for being topless...Haha he really misses that bared torso lol

You guys are killing me! When are they getting back together or at least have some sexual tension. More please!



Author's Response:

We're chuffed that you enjoyed Mel in this chapter. She is one kickass lawyer! :)

A few readers are wondering how and what Brian will name his agency... We'll have to see how that plays out.

Brian was being just a tad hypocritical in blaming Justin for Gus' mess. In his defense, he'd overindulged with Cynthia and had a bit of a hangover. :D It must've killed him to lust after Justin like that; he certainly got all tongue-tied. :D

You do realize, I hope, that you're issuing an invitation for us to torture you some more, Glo. *cue evil cackling*

We're starting on the next chapter and will post a teaser in the FanDoc as soon as possible.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2017 9:17 pm Title: Chapter 21: Wednesday, November 22nd

Justin is really very patient, with both of the Kinney boys!

Melanie was very professional and efficient: without her, Brian would have let his anger win and he would have lost a good deal. She didn't tease him too much afterwards and that's a big change.



Author's Response:

What a perfect comment - that Justin is patient with both Kinney boys. :D

Brian's lucky he has that kickass, bulldyke lawyer on his side. Melanie was rather 'sweet' to him after that meeting, lol. They'll undoubtedly return to their friendly bickering soon enough.

Thanks for taking the time to leave another comment, Claire. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2017 8:52 pm Title: Chapter 21: Wednesday, November 22nd

What a fantastic chapter.  We got Harley and Gus!  Melanie did do a great job and the new agency will be very sucessful.  Wonder who names it.  Love how much fun Gus had with Justin and it would have been nice if Brian had been around for the banana eat off.  That Gus is learning words almost as fast as Harley.



Author's Response:

Thanks for being the first to review, again, Phyllis - both here and on AO3's FB page. :)

We're glad you enjoyed the doses of Harley and Gus. We can't get enough of either.

Mel is one kickass lawyer. It's a good thing she was on Brian's side.

Who knows? Gus and Harley may have quite the gabfest. :D

We've just started working on the next chapter and will post a teaser in the FanDoc as soon as possible.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2017 3:25 pm Title: Chapter 19: Monday, November 20th

Excellent chapter! (And not only because you mentioned MY dildo!) loved the name ideas from everyone. And that last scene - hot, hot, hot! TAG



Author's Response:

C'mon, admit you liked it so much because we featured The Mighty Intruder. You've all but confessed that anyway. :D

We're chuffed you enjoyed the suggestions for Justin's new toy; we included as many as we could.

We must be doing something right if we have TAG's stamp of approval for the final scene. :D :D

Thanks for reviewing! We're almost ready to post chapter 21.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2017 1:03 pm Title: Chapter 20: Tuesday, November 21st

What a great morning Justin is  blushing and Vic and harley are very funny !

Brian Cynthia and Ted are ready with Mélanie to fignt  Ryder Yeah !

I hope that Jennifer changes her mind soon !

Thanks for the wonderful update, finishing with Justin and Bob LOL 



Author's Response:

We're chuffed you enjoyed the humor between Justin, Vic, and Harley. The Harley-Vic team is definitely ahead if they're keeping score. :D

You're the second person to comment on the team backing Brian against Ryder. You're right - Ryder will likely rue the day he decided to terminate Brian.

We haven't given up on Jennifer, but, sadly, she has probably irreparably damaged the mother-son bond that used to exist between her and Justin. We do hope she comes to her senses soon, so she and Justin can at least be friends.

Our favorite blond and Bob - we seem to have a recurring theme. :D

Thanks for commenting again, Marie-france. It's much appreciated. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2017 6:11 am Title: Chapter 20: Tuesday, November 21st

U guys are too good...like always the chapter was awesome...sunshine is too cute blushing and harley is damn funny...vic is soo lively ...jen will come around soon i hope...brian and his squad is ready to fight with the evil force ryder...lols.The name calling blond boob bimbo....rofl.
Thanks for the wonderful update..u guys sure know how to make it up to ur readers..keep surprising us like this.

Author's Response:

Aw, thank you for the lovely comments, Navneet. <3

We're glad you enjoyed the funny moments between Justin, Harley, and Vic

We haven't given up on Jen but, sadly, she probably has damaged the mother-son bond between herself and Justin too much for it to return to what it once was.

You're right - Ryder probably doesn't stand a chance against Brian, especially with Melanie, Cynthia, and Ted backing him up. :D You liked the BBB, huh? - definitely far outclassed by BOB. :D

Keep up the great work as our PR person, please! Those gifs you post keep us entertained and motivated. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2017 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 20: Tuesday, November 21st

Lovely chapter, reminds me of QAF UK.  I just wanted to smack Jennifer.  But I love Harley, can't wait for Brian to meet him.  Your next chapter looks to be good with the meeting of Brian and Ryder.



Author's Response:

The resemblance to QAF UK is incidental, but we're chuffed you're enjoying our story.

We're exploring how things might have panned at as of our point of divergence from season one; we definitely felt there was quite a bit of tension between Jennifer and Justin at Molly's birthday party. We haven't given up on Jennifer just yet; however, she'll never be able to reestablish the same mother-son relationship with Justin, which is sad for her.

Harley has won all the readers over; he's our most popular original character. :D You're the second reviewer to wonder how Brian will react if he hears Harley's newest greeting. Brian was a tad put off by the budgie at Sunday's dinner, lol.

We're working on the next chapter now, and I can confirm that it will include the meeting between Brian and Ryder.

Thanks for reviewing, Phyllis. We're always made up by your comments. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2017 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 20: Tuesday, November 21st

Oh that B.O.B  keeping our little Sunshine happy! Lol Harley is a riot! I hope Jennifer gets a clue soon, for Justin's sake. Love the Ted/Brian dynamic. Cynthia is the best! I think we need a B/J scene...how about it?



Author's Response:

Bob really is keeping Justin happy. :D Vic, too. :D

Harley is our most popular original character. He's such a hoot. :D

We haven't given up on Jennifer just yet, but she'll never have the same mother-son relationship with Justin, which is sad for her.

The Ted-Brian dynamic was one of my favourite aspects of season 5. It's fun to explore it happening at an earlier stage.

We figure every fic needs more of Cynthia, especially her interactions with Brian.

Why am I not surprised that you want another Brian-Justin scene? We'll see what we can come up with, although it may not be what you expect. :D

Thanks for reviewing, Glo. We're chuffed by your comments. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2017 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 20: Tuesday, November 21st

Too bad Jennifer can still be so blind: I just hope for Justin that she won't insist he comes for Thanksgiving.

Harley's new welcoming is pretty funny. How will Brian react to that?



Author's Response:

Jennifer has a ways to go if she wants to reestablish herself as Justin's friend, but we aren't giving up on her quite yet. She and Justin will never have the same mother-son relationship, however, which is sad for her. There's very little chance that Justin will go to her and Craig's house for Thanksgiving; as he informed his mother, that's no longer his home.

Vic's chuffed that you're enjoying Harley's new greeting. :D That's a good question as to what Brian will think of it; we've added a note to the Thanksgiving celebrations so that we can all find out. :D

Thanks for reviewing, Claire. We're always made up by your comments. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2017 11:32 am Title: Chapter 19: Monday, November 20th

Hello I read the 19 chapters  and I love this story! I will not comment on all the chapters but give you my impressions.

Debbie and Vic we find so much their complicity is great! Daphnée is still there for Justin I loved her trip to the country of toys and the last chapter is very hot!

Brian would not be a little jealous? In any case he is very angry to see Justin dancing! I hope that he will soon forgive Justin and that we will have the explanation of the burglary and hot reunion of B and J maybe with BOB !! LOL

I look forward to the next and thank you this story is amazing !!

Sorry for the long post and my bad english!



Author's Response:

We're chuffed that you've discovered Tricky Business, Marie-france. :) We must've kept you busy reading for a least a few hours. :)

We agree - Deb and Vic make the perfect surrogate parents for Justin. We can't imagine Justin without his bestie. He and Daph love to tease each other, but they also always have each other's backs.

Brian wants us to tell you he doesn't do jealousy - you have our permission to laugh yourself silly over that outrageous claim. He is jealous as he watches Justin dance, but he's not about to admit it, so he's sticking with being miffed at the teen for not taking his advice about the go-go gig. He is genuinely annoyed with Justin for that, as well as worried about what might happen.

Our readers are very likely to hear more about BOB. :D Did your screen fog over when you read that final scene?

Your English is great, and we're made up by long comments. :)

We're working on the next chapter now.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: Saje Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2017 7:08 pm Title: Chapter 19: Monday, November 20th

Holy Hades! That was HOT!

Saje



Author's Response:

It must have been a scorcher to earn your seal of approval, Saje. :D Thanks for leaving a comment once you recovered.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2017 10:43 am Title: Chapter 19: Monday, November 20th

Ohhhhh...mmyyyyy ggggooodddd...christ...that was outstanding...amazing ...sooo exciting...sooo entertaining...i can't find the right words...u guys sure know how to tease us..don't u.??

Alas...i reaalllyyyy enjoyed it..i did not know u guys updated today as i did not get the notifications...uff...i was totally blown when i accidently saw it on this site.

I am feeling quite proud of myself ..i can't believe you guys named the dildo B.O.B ...lols..thank u soo much for the mention...i am soooooo glad i get to help u guys...other names were hoe-larious too...wink wink...u guys just made by day..i love u guys...keep it up...i will be looking forward to more of ur updates.

P.S - it took me atleast 1 hour to read this chapter cause my mom was sitting right beside me and i was grinning like a lunatic..she almost took my phone away from me...thank god she did not pry much...lols ...ok ...i am shutting up now..thanks u guys for the spectacular update.



Author's Response:

We've never had such an enthusiastic review as yours, Navneet! :D We're completely made up that we entertained you so thoroughly. :D

Keep patting yourself on the back, lol. You should be proud for coming up with the perfect name for Justin's new toy. We're wondering how long it will take our favourite blond to start referring to it by that name.

LMAO! at all the trials and tribulations you endured to read this chapter. If your mother only knew... :D

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: mcm Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 19: Monday, November 20th

!! OMG !! That was beyond what I ever could of thought up. BRAVO

You guys are so good at being bad, HEHE Justin made Brian pass out un touched no less

 

 

Thank you

~TERESA~



Author's Response:

We're made up that we exceeded your expectations, Teresa! Fortunately, Justin shared exactly the right memory with us. :D

Now that's a compliment of the highest calibre - that we're so good at being bad. Justin told us he could make Brian come untouched, but we remained unconvinced until he demonstrated. ;D

 

You're welcome, you wonderful 100th reviewer. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 19: Monday, November 20th

Love the parts with Daphne and Harley.  Too cute. So Brian's going to start his own agency.  And he's gonna take Ted and Cynthia with him.  Now that last bit was amazing.  Thanks Navneet, Glo, Tag and Tuneesa for supplying names for the new dildo.



Author's Response:

We're chuffed you enjoyed the scenes with Daphne and Harley. Justin had so much fun teasing Daph, until his friend turned the tables on him, with a little help from Deb and Vic. :D

Brian's definitely asking the right people to join him as he contemplates opening his own agency, we agree.

Navneet, Glo, TAG, and Tuneesha are taking their bows, thanking you for recognizing all the effort they put into choosing the right names for Justin's new toy. :D

We had fun crafting that last scene together - happy we could wow you with it. The boys are whispering more of their escapades into our ears...

Thanks for being one of our most faithful reviewers, Phyllis. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 8:51 pm Title: Chapter 19: Monday, November 20th

First of all, I've noticed it before but never said anything...are you two British? Lots of slang thrown around. lol Justin & Daphne were so cute at the 'toy' store. Yeah girl, try out that bi clerk, or let her try out you, she WILL teach you a few things! lol 

Brian & Ted are hysterical together, "Is this also your first time in this century?" lmao Poor Brian having flashbacks about the asshole in the backroom. First they get trashed then they pass out...now that's real friendship! 

Deb & Vic are totally pigs, I love it! The staff of Zeus was good! Sweet Jesus! After I finished this, I had to go relieve myself...I would LOVE to see Brian loose control like that...hot hot hot! Good job with the name Navneet! B.O.B. cute!



Author's Response:

Yes, one of us is British, but the other is American. The American half of the duo was first corrupted by living in Europe for nineteen years, including three years in London. All was truly lost, however, when she encountered her Synergy Sister, who has vastly improved her English. :D The corrupted American likes to confuse readers by sprinkling her scenes with British words and phrases (honestly, she sometimes can't remember what's proper English and what's the American version thereof), in an attempt to make it more difficult for our readers to determine who has written writing what. We're glad you're enjoying *cough* our unique blend of Brit-speak and Americanisms.

Brynn thanks you for finding Brian's line, "Is this also your first time in this century?" amusing. We had fun writing the dialogue together, but that one-liner is classic Brynn. :)

By that definition of friendship, Brian and Mel should be great friends too; after all, they passed out of the girls' sofa after necking a bottle together. ;D

Deb and Vic are so in character, right? Yay! You like liked the way we fit in your suggestion of 'Zeus'. Navneet takes another bow for her brilliant reinterpretation of B.O.B.

We bet you did need a long 'nap' after the final scene. :D We're trying to raise the curtain on what happens behind the scenes with Justin and Brian.

Thanks for the fun review, Glo; we're completely chuffed by it.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 7:49 pm Title: Chapter 19: Monday, November 20th

The Mighty Intruder and BOB have me laughing hard! Daphne and her journey in toys' land...

Not only Justin has Debbie and Vic teasing him, but Daphne entered the game too! Poor guy. At least, he has some burning memories to help him making friend with his new toy.

That scene with Brian was really hot!



Author's Response:

We're made up that you enjoyed the names for Justin's toy and the way we wove them into the chapter. TAG and Navneet are taking their bows for suggesting The Mighty Intruder and BOB.

Justin had a lot of fun embarrassing Daphne at the sex store, although she more than got even at the dinner with Vic and Deb. At least our intrepid teen knew what to expect. :D

Fortunately, the boys have lots of fantasies to fuel their imagination... :D Plus, they've both informed us that they're dreaming up some new scenarios for each other.

We had fun writing Justin's memory together... One thing we can promise is more hot scenes to come.

Thanks for being the first to review this chapter, Claire!

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2017 1:08 pm Title: Chapter 18: Sunday, November 19th

Poor Brian. He's such a mess without his Justin. TAG



Author's Response:

Yay - you've caught up with us. :)

Brian says he's not missing his Sunshine... not at all. You believe him, right?

The stud was infuriated that Justin ignored his advice about the go-go dancing, even though Brian knows the teen needs to learn for himself. Unforunately, that led to Brian's disastrous actions, leaving him vulnerable with no backup. We'll have to see how he copes in the aftermath.

Thanks for reviewing. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2017 4:10 am Title: Chapter 18: Sunday, November 19th

Omg...the first half of the chapter had me laughing soo hard..could not stop myself. That part was soo Hilarious.

How can brian be soo stupid..he was drunk, smashed and hurt by sunshine...but still he should have controlled himself. Thank god of those guys..if anyone finds out he will be soo ashamed. 

A big THANK U TO U BOTH  for this awesome update...i enjoyed it very much..keep it up guys.



Author's Response:

You have no idea how made up I am about your review! I agree, the first part was very lighthearted and Karynn did a marvellous job with the banter. As for the second half of the chapter, I think there's no doubt Brian was extremely irresponsible and was incredibly jammy to have made it out unhurt. He is definitely determined to keep the whole situation to himself - whether he manages that is yet to be seen.

A big thank you for reading and reviewing :)

KaBrynn

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2017 12:24 am Title: Chapter 17: Saturday, November 18th

Oooo - did Brian hear that little tidbit about the new 'boyfriend' Harley? Lol. That would certainly get him going. Hehehe. TAG



Author's Response:

Sadly, no, Brian was already upstairs when Melanie quizzed Justin about Harley. He finds out who Harley is in the next chapter anyway.

No worries, there will be other opportunities for jealous Brian

Thanks for commenting, TAG. More soon. :)

~ KaBrynn

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