[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2017 1:29 am Title: Chapter 2: Sunday, November 5th - Part 1
I am so glad that Justin isn't going to New York. This sets a whole knew light on what could have been. It was great that Deb managed to get him to move in. Please, please tell me that you will tell us who actually burgled Brian's loft.
Author's Response:
We really like this mature response from Justin and think it's more in character for him to stay and face the consequences rather than running off to New York with Brian's credit card. Poor kid feels absolutely horrid that he may have been responsible for leaving Brian's loft unlocked . . .
We'll have to see what develops as far as the burglary. *cue laughter from the evil authors*
Thanks for reviewing!
~Karynn and Brynn
Date: Jan 08, 2017 8:28 pm Title: Chapter 2: Sunday, November 5th - Part 1
Excellent. Mais ce n'est pas très gentil de nous laisser comme ça.
Author's Response:
L'auteur diabolique que je suis glousse, car "tu devras attendre la semaine prochaine pour connaitre la suite."
Comment in French courtesy of my dear friend, Alois.
Thanks for reviewing. <3 We're glad to keep you entertained and on the edge of your seat.
[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2017 11:19 am Title: Chapter 1: Saturday, November 4th, 2000
Interesting premise here. My first thought is that there's no way this is just a random crime of opportunity brought on by somebody noticing Justin had failed to lock up properly. You can't move EVERYTHING out in just a couple hours like that unless you'd had it planned out pretty thoroughly. So what's really happening? I'll be happy to read and find out. Great start, ladies. TAG
Author's Response:
Yay! We've intrigued you with our story.
You're the first one to mention that aspect of the robbery, TAG. Hmm, what is happening? *evil authors cackle*
Karynn & Brynn
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2017 6:49 pm Title: Chapter 1: Saturday, November 4th, 2000
I'm glad to see that in this version of events that Justin called Brian rather then Brian showing up and finding out. Good to see that Carl is the cop. I hope you at least tell us who the burglar is and look forward to seeing what really happened.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! We love this more mature response from Justin, which what we envision happening. We'll see what unfolds as far as the burglary . . .
More in about a week! We hope you continue to enjoy.
Date: Jan 02, 2017 5:08 pm Title: Chapter 1: Saturday, November 4th, 2000
Hi!
I'm so happy that someone writes a story on this part of the show. I always doubt Justin forgetting to set the alarm...It"s going to be hard to wait the others chapters because you are very very interesting!!! Please update as soon as you can and thank you for sharing with us.
Author's Response:
We're doing a happy dance over your wonderful review! I think most of us have wondered what happened behind the scenes and questioned Justin's culpability. Hence our take on events.
We'll update in about a week. Wish we could do it faster, but that bedammed real life insists on interfering. LOL
Date: Jan 02, 2017 2:30 pm Title: Chapter 1: Saturday, November 4th, 2000
A week! Okay I shall be a patient girl and wait for the next brilliant chapter!
Author's Response:
We thank you for your patience. LOL We aren't nearly as fast at churning out new chapters as you.
Thanks for the compliment to our story. More in about a week. We hope you enjoy the second installment just as much.
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2017 5:51 am Title: Chapter 1: Saturday, November 4th, 2000
Great so far..."can I have some more please?"
Author's Response:
We thank you for the wonderful feedback. And yes, you can have some more . . . in a week. :)
Karynn & Brynn
Date: Jan 02, 2017 4:31 am Title: Chapter 1: Saturday, November 4th, 2000
Fantastic beginning, looking forward to more.
Thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
Author's Response:
Thank you, JoAnn! So very glad to hear you're enjoying our story. Lots more to come. :)
Karynn & Brynn
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2017 1:24 am Title: Chapter 1: Saturday, November 4th, 2000
Wow...lovely start...thank u for sharing.
Author's Response:
You are very welcome. Thank you for reading & reviewing! <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2017 12:32 am Title: Chapter 1: Saturday, November 4th, 2000
This is going to be great -I can feel it in my bones! Eagerly anticipating the next chapter☺
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! We're chuffed by your review. Next installment in about a week. :)
Date: Jan 01, 2017 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 1: Saturday, November 4th, 2000
Il y a logtemps que je n'ai pas lu quelque chose d'aussi interressant.
Author's Response:
I'm glowing from your wonderful review! <3 Brynn and I thank you for the compliment. I hope you continue to enjoy our story.
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2017 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 1: Saturday, November 4th, 2000
this is gonna be soooo gooood.....
Author's Response:
So glad you're enjoying our tale, Saje! Stay tuned . . .