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Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2019 1:03 pm Title: Chapter 43: Saturday, December 16th

 Justin is finally at the hospital. He suffers so much! Brian and Ted give him a sermon about drugs but pain makes you do stupid things. I hope Carl will fix Hobbs problem. Great update Ladies as always.



Author's Response:

That's a very good point that pain can make you do foolish things. Justin also brought it on himself, unfortunately, with his stubbornness about go-go dancing so he can pay Brian back. "Stupid little twat," as Brian might say, if not as affectionately as usual at the moment. Could it be any more obvious how much Brian cares about him? :)

Do we foresee a sermon coming up for Justin from both Carl and Wen? Along, of course, with more from Brian and Ted... plus Deb, Vic, Daph, Syd, Em, etc. Jsutin's gonna get an earful, again and again. :D

Oh and then there’s our favorite detectives… they may also have a thing or two to say to Justin. :D You're not the only one who wants Carl - and Wen - to fix the Hobbs problem. If only the administrators at St. James didn't encourage that kind of bullying. :/

Everyone is on tenterhooks, waiting to see whether Justin will be okay. We didn't mean to leave you - and all our other lovely readers - hanging from a cliff for so long. Unfortunately, real life has sucked in the worst way for Karynn (eureka1) of late, which means we haven't been able to work much on the next chapter. We will update as soon as possible, but it may be a month or more. :/ There is, however, a teaser available in the FanDoc if you haven't already peeked at it - and we will write the rest of the chapter to go with it. :)

Thanks so much for leaving a comment, Marie-France. :) We adore our loyal readers!

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: Nanna Nat Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2019 8:12 pm Title: Chapter 1: Saturday, November 4th, 2000

Grrrrr, I try and avoid WiPs unless abandoned because I hate waiting for updates. The world of Netflix and streaming has completely destroyed my ability to patiently wait for the next chapter/episode. Somehow this little number got under the wire and sucked me I. I am gutted that I have to wait! What an absolutely terrific read. I love stories that are firmly out of canon yet the characters are written in such a way that over time it becomes canon. I love the fact that your characters (except Michael and Dr Dave) are so rounded and it is lovely to see Old Vic back. It is funny and action packed even though it has happened over such a short time period. I really enjoy the down moments and interaction between the characters. 

 

You are both both such talented writers. I am a Literature teacher, and fairly new to the world of fanfics. I have read a LOT for my job (and pleasure) and am constantly in awe of writers like yourselves.

 

Thanks again for the story. I have really really enjoyed it! ❤️



Author's Response:

I (Karynn, aka eureka1) totally get that thing about WiPs and waiting for updates - I'm in the same situation with two of my favorite stories (Kerri's The Butterfly Effect and a story in another fandom, Swimmer963's incredible series, A Song for Two Voices), but there's also no way I can hold off and not read. When stories are of that caliber, at least it's always worth the wait. So... I can't be sorry that Brynn and I have snagged you as a reader of Tricky Business. :D The good news is that I can assure you that we'll never abandon our story, even if the updates are sometimes few and far between. The bad news is that real life has majorly sucked for me recently, which means there hasn't been time or energy to work much on the next chapter. We will get an update posted as soon as we can, but it's likely to be a month or more. :/

That's a terrific compliment that you consider our story to be an effective alternative to canon. :) That's just what we want. You're right that Michael and Dr Dave aren't that well rounded - Michael is the 'joker of the piece' as our beta put it. We don't think his behavior is totally off base, though, especially for season one Michael, when he was insanely jealous of Justin. (Not that his behavior in other seasons was necessarily much better.)

Appreciation from readers like you really keeps us motivated. :) We're striving for a well-written story (as error-free as possible) that is also engaging. :) As far as fanfic, I didn't even know it existed until after I stumbled onto QaF in the summer of 2015 and then began surfing the Internet for more information about the show. I had no idea that something like fanfiction was even legal. :D I read mostly in the QaF fandom, but I do occasionally branch out. High-quality, free stories? Jackpot!

Thanks so much for leaving a review. :) We hope to hear from you again. There is a teaser for the next chapter available in the FanDoc if you'd like a little something to tide you over. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2019 9:26 am Title: Chapter 43: Saturday, December 16th

Wonderful update! Hugs to You, Brian and Ted. Feeling great reading this chapter. As Justin finally been taken care. Waiting is over. Oscar telling about 2 thugs attaked Jus night before. Ted concerns over Sunshine. Love Protective Brian for Sunshine (even he gonna ream some sense into Justin later). Love it, how event fold out. Also Ted is one who become a true friend of Brian after Justin. I respect it. Carl is truely a father figure.

If Deb noticed, (In Qaf) she would have know how Brian was miserable alone before Justin came. Even sweet, Deb only cared for Micheal, who is 30 but behaves immature, sits on his arse, read comics & does nothing. *Brian's voice "It's true."

ThankYou for update. Satisfied. Gonna read it again.⭐:) hugs



Author's Response:

Thanks for the lovely comments, Pushpanjali. :) We always look forward to hearing from you.

Well, Justin has almost been taken care of. Right now he's freaking out, wondering whether his bad decision to take drugs will have drastic consequences. He's lucky to have Brian and Ted looking out for him. Protective Brian is always popular (as is protective Justin). And now we have protective Ted! It doesn't get much better than that.

You're right - Ted is a true friend - better than a certain so-called best friend. ;) Although, to give that unnamed person some credit, he probably would be there for Brian, if not for Justin, if he actually knew what was going on. Do we hear a high-pitched whine? :P

Based on your comments about Deb, you might enjoy the one-shot I'm (Karynn, aka eureka1) currently writing. It's not at all anti - you-know-who is still the best friend - but it addresses some of those same concerns from Brian's perspective. Look for the fic in roughly the next two weeks. It was supposed to be out for my third anniversary as a writer, but real life has sucked, and interfered majorly, so it’ll be late.

We're made up by how much you liked this chapter. Our apologies for leaving Justin - and you - on a cliff for so long. :/ Keep holding on with your fingertips! - it'll be a while before we get out the next chapter. There is a teaser in the FanDoc, though; take a peek if you haven't yet.

Hugs back atcha. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2019 2:25 am Title: Chapter 43: Saturday, December 16th

Wow Justin is in such pain and a whole lot of trouble 



Author's Response:

Yeah, Justin is freaking out about what the doctor will say and whether he'll be okay. :( His poor decision-making could have drastic consequences. Thankfully, he has both Brian and Ted there, doing their best to look after him, although Brian is regretting some of his own recent actions... 

Thanks for leaving a comment, Chris. :) We'll try to have another chapter up in the next month or so, providing RL cooperates.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2019 4:20 pm Title: Chapter 43: Saturday, December 16th

I loved this so much! You know I love all your stuff ladies but this chapter....fabulous! Poor Justin was really giving me some serious anxiety with the amount of pain he's been in and his stubborness, refusing to seek any help. Jesus! I was shocked Deb & Vic didn't notice from how he was moving & not eating. 

Brian was a friggin mess and I'm sure he's not gonna do that again! Yikes! God! I love Ted & Brian's friendship! "You better put your nose all up in it now Theodore" lmao God love them! 

So glad Brian is going to get Justin a new freaking coat jeez....I don't know why no one has thought about it before just by looking at the thing lol

Cannot wait to read more about Justin's hospital stay...oh my God, the amount of damage that must have been done to his poor privates.



Author's Response:

Who are you, and what have you done with Glo? :D :D You loved the chapter without any S - E - X ! :D

Justin is giving himself and everyone major anxiety, especially Brian and Ted and soon, no doubt, Carl. And he's bound to get (more of) an earful from them and everyone else - can you hear Deb?! - once they find out. Justin's not thinking about that right now, however, since he's freaking out about what the doctor will have to say and whether he'll be okay. Poor kid. :(

Deb and Vic probably put Justin's lack of appetite, and also the way he moved so gingerly, to a mild case of food poisoning (that stuff is nasty, even when it's not severe), the flu, or both. 

You're right. There are lessons for Brian here, too. Not only did he get drunk and high and break his promise to be at Babylon for Justin on Friday night, he was so stoned that he couldn't have helped regardless. If Justin had called him on the landline, he probably wouldn't have heard the phone ring or wouldn’t have paid attention if he did. And the way he regularly pops drugs hardly sets a good example for his young lover.

Isn't the friendship between Brian and Ted wonderful? We're really enjoying our Ted, who matures - well, except for a touch of foot in mouth disease :D - much earlier than in canon and is well on his way to replacing someone else as Brian's best friend. Other than Justin, of course. :)

Both Debbie and Vic have probably wanted to buy Justin a new coat - that thing's so threadbare that if one pulled on a hanging thread, it would probably disintegrate - ever since he moved in with them, but they know how stubborn and proud Justin is about caring for himself. Stubborn blond. *sigh*

Real life has sucked big time for Karynn of late, so we're not sure when we'll get the next chapter out - probably at least a month (or more) from now. :/ We're always planning future chapters, though. :)

Thanks for the wonderful review, Glo. Sex aside, hahaha - you know we can't resist teasing you. :P

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2019 1:02 pm Title: Chapter 43: Saturday, December 16th

So much stupid going on between Brian and Justin.  So glad you pointed out about Justin's allergies.  Just thinking of all the pain Justin must have been in makes me queezy.  Ted is my hero, though I'm sure Emmett would have stepped up to the plate if he'd known.



Author's Response:

In canon, we learned in the pilot episode that Justin is allergic to lots of medications, so it jarred when CowLip didn't follow up in future episodes, not even when Justin was being treated after the bashing. His allergies are especially important during this story arc, with Justin accepting mystery drugs from a dubious source, but they are also relevant in other ways. 

Isn't Ted wonderful? He's such a good friend to both Brian and Justin. :) You're right about Emmett; if he'd known, he would be there for his Baby and also for Brian - exchanges of 'Honeycutt' and 'Bri' aside. :D

Justin is well ready to be out of limbo, although he's also also freaked out that he won't escape unscathed. :(

Real life - it sucks sometimes! - has kept us from working on the next chapter, but we'll get it out as soon as we can - likely a month or more, unfortunately. :/ There is a teaser in the FanDoc, however, if you want to take a peek.

Thanks for reviewing, Phyllis! :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2019 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 43: Saturday, December 16th

Excellent chapter! So relieved that Justin finally is going to be taken care of.

Surprised that Debbie didn't find strange that Justin didn't eat.

Ted and Brian are amazing here: working together to get Justin out of Babylon, then checking him and getting him to the hospital. Calling Carl was also a great idea.

I hope Justin will understand that he can't keep doing this.

I love this quote "run over by a station wagon full of lesbians"!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the lovely compliments. :) This chapter seems to have really resonated with our readers. :)

Thank goodness, huh, that Justin is finally going to see a doctor? If only a positive outcome were certain... :( We're all on tenterhooks, waiting to hear what the doctor will say. Brian and Ted are almost as freaked out as Justin. Carl, like Brian, may do his best not to show it, but he's also bound to be really concerned about the kid who's becoming a son to him. Our favorite detective has sure come a long way from when gays weirded him out.

Debbie probably put Justin's lack of appetite down to a mild case of food poisoning or the flu. We'll doubtless hear more of her opinion on the matter. :D

Thanks for sharing your favorite quote from the chapter. :D That was a combined brainstorm. :P

Real life has once again delayed us - it has been especially sucky for eureka1 :( - but we will get a new chapter out as soon as possible, likely another month or more, unfortunately. If you haven't read the teaser for the new chapter yet, it is available in the FanDoc.

Thanks for being such a faithful reader - and reviewer - Claire! :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: BabylonBritinTaykin69 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2019 9:50 pm Title: Chapter 43: Saturday, December 16th

HHow many more chapter of this till it's finished.



Author's Response:

We'd tell you if we could! :D Unfortunately, we don't have a better answer than the last time you asked. :D 

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2019 5:04 pm Title: Chapter 42: Friday, December 15th

Thanks for update.  I think Michael ropped the loft



Author's Response:

That Michael robbed the loft is a popular theory. The police won't confirm or deny, though; their investigation is still in progress.

Thanks for commenting. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2019 8:07 am Title: Chapter 42: Friday, December 15th

Justin always been a remarkably strong person beside Brian. Being in so much pain still Justin was able to school, give test. later doing GG-job. I don't fault Justin taking those pills in Pain Haze State.

Love reading Justin's school, his class conversations & Brian Loft comic scene.

Action Needs to be taken. IF Brian wants his "Sunshiny Wet Dreams Come True", He needs to be known what Justin been through. Also Keep Justin for Kinnetic(after his treatment). Hobbs needs to be put in his place, so does two thugs who tried take advantage of Justin.

ThankYou, for the update. Hugs ðŸ™‚



Author's Response:

Justin is incredibly tough - that's one of the many characteristics that makes him a good match for Brian. :) The decision to take drugs was a bad one, but understandable under the circumstances. He does need to stop and think about what he's doing, though; there could be serious consequences.

We're made up that you enjoyed the scenes at St James. :) Brian and his cohorts had a great time, although Brian remains convinced that he was almost completely sober. Sure. Keep telling yourself that, stud.

:D Sunshiny wet dreams :D Good one. That's the desired outcome for Operation Twat Retrieval. :D

Is there anyone who doesn't want Hobbs to get his just deserts? Besides Hobbs himself, that is. Maybe Dickhead, although there's doubtless another jock ready to cozy up to him, so he probably doesn't care all that much.

Thanks for the wonderful review, Pushpanjali. :) We should have a teaser for the next chapter up soon - we're banishing real life!

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2019 7:09 am Title: Chapter 42: Friday, December 15th

Justin really has a shitty day and makes some really bad decisions. I hope he has passed his tests and working for kinnetik will stop him from making other mistakes. We will say that with pain he does not think well. The Kinnetik team has fun like crazy and Brian has a wet dream, it was a dream, right?



Author's Response:

You're absolutely correct. Justin in pain does not think well at all. That led to the extremely bad decision to take drugs at Babylon. :(

The drunk and high advertising team had a lot of fun. :D Even if they were barely coherent at times. :D Brian keeps trying to tell us that he was barely affected by all the alcohol and pot, but we're not buying it...

The final scene was a Beam and weed-induced hallucination. Brian certainly enjoyed himself. :D

Thanks for commenting, Marie-france. :) Real life reared its ugly head and interfered with our progress on the next chapter, but we should have a teaser up soon - we're working on the chapter now.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2019 5:59 pm Title: Chapter 42: Friday, December 15th

When will Justin realize that he can't continue doing his go-go boy gig without serious complications? For such a smart guy, he can be so stubborn. With his limited quickness/mobility, he should be careful. He is very lucky to have the bouncer on his side. 

I guess the last scene is a dream. Considering Justin's nether sensitivity, the moans wouldn't have been from pleasure.



Author's Response:

Justin's determined to make money to pay Brian back as quickly as possible, and that led to a really poor decision to take drugs. Even discounting his injuries though, he can't keep burning the candle at both ends forever. Let's hope someone talks sense into him soon! Justin has a gift for making friends, and he's lucky to count Oscar among them.

Yes, Brian is having a Beam and weed-induced hallucination in the last scene. You're right; 'real' Justin would not be moaning in pleasure, but hallucinatory angel Justin definitely is. :)

Thanks for commenting, Claire. :) We've been delayed - again, dammit! - by real life but are working on the next chapter now and should have a teaser up soon.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: Maggiemay13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2019 3:45 am Title: Chapter 42: Friday, December 15th

I May be way off base here.....BUT I am thinking that Brian did not “imagine” sex with Justin. I’m thinking that good ole Mikey came in the loft, saw how high Brian was and took his opportunity. I know I’m thinking very diabolically, but I am not a Mikey fan. So my mind immediately went there lol. I guess we will see what really happened with the next chapter. Great writing. I love this story.



Author's Response:

That's certainly a unique theory. :D You'll just have to keep reading to find out what happens. :D

Thanks so much for leaving a review. :) We're made up that you're enjoying our story. Real life has delayed us - again, dammit! - but we should have a teaser for the next chapter up soon.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2019 2:56 am Title: Chapter 42: Friday, December 15th

Okay, so the advertising trio were pretty funny but Benji?? Lol what a bunch of weirdos! Too bad about the power outage, that sucks! 

Seriously Justin?? Did he not care about his body at that point, that he would take drugs from someone who's not his friend? WTF boy? He should know better! And Brian was pretty freaking trashed himself huh, wow! 

No sex?? Yes, I'm greedy! Lol but thank you for the speedy chapter! 



Author's Response:

"What?" Brian roars. "How dare you call me a weirdo? I was almost completely sober!" Yeah, sure, Brian; we all believe you. :D

You can bet Brian's not going to let it go that Theodore called Ben Benji - that's the one thing he's bound to remember even though he was drunk and stoned. It was just the early stages... for Brian, at least. :D

The power outage led to quite an entertaining afternoon for the 'intrepid advertising trio' but not so much for Justin. He does know better than to take drugs, but he made a poor decision in that moment at Babylon. Now will come the fallout.

Yes, Brian was trashed too, so much so that he forgot all about his offer to pick up Justin from Babylon. Justin seems to have forgotten, too...

What, Brian's hallucination didn't count for a bit of sex? :P

Thanks for the fun review, Glo. You always make us smile. :D That darned thing called real life has delayed us with the next chapter, but we should have the teaser up soon.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2019 2:08 am Title: Chapter 42: Friday, December 15th

The pain the pain!  School and work.  Thank goodness Justin managed to get help.  Now what about Brian?  Exactly what is he up to?



Author's Response:

Yeah, poor Justin. :( And now he's made a bad decision with the drugs. We'll have to see what happens next.

Brian? He's feeling no pain... not yet, anyway. :D

Thanks for commenting, Phyllis. :) After another of those annoying real life delays, we're working on the next chapter.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2019 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 42: Friday, December 15th

Justin is tougher than anyone could possibly imagine. Walking around in agonizing pain all day.

Brian is going to be very angry when he finds out about Sven, the pills, the coke and the two guys who wanted to "play" with him.

Ted and Cynthia are a riot when stoned. Poor Ben. Ha! Would like to be a fly on the wall when he tries to get Ted to bed. Should be fun.

Good thing Brian sent Cynthia home since he had imaginary sex with his Sunshine angel.



Author's Response:

You're right; Justin is one tough kid. He made a very poor decision about the drugs, though, without thinking through the consequences - now comes the fallout. Will Justin spill to Brian about the two guys who wanted to 'play' with him? He’s pretty good at being close-mouthed when he wants to be.

Brian was just as funny as his employees, although he refuses to believe it. :D There are gonna be a lot of flies on the walls of Ben's bedroom! :D Either Ben or Ted has to let slip what happened... or so we hope.

That was a pretty good hallucination that stoned and drunk Brian came up with, right? :P

Thanks for commenting, Sherry. :) We hope to have a teaser for the next chapter up soon. Real life has delayed us again. :/

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2019 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 42: Friday, December 15th

COPIOUS - DRUG USE!!!  I think we can safely say, copious upon copious!!!

Brian is going to be sooo pissed at Justin! He'll know. And that little altercation outside of Babylon will probably not escape Brian's knowledge either.  And I think Justin is going to REALLY feel his pain in the morning, after dancing and abusing his body throughout the evening.  If his balls are STILL that swollen and bruised... he better see a doctor! He shouldn't still be that sore. But, we already know the extra pill Sven 'donated', is going to be put to use.

I loved the humor in the loft. It was classic. And I'm so glad Brian can hold his drugs and alcohol better than Ted and Cynthia!!! (right!) And you did "drunk talk" so well.  *grin*

Yay for Ms Gallagher humiliating Hobbs in front of the others, and maybe, just maybe, Nakamura just might have some martial arts training in his background. After all, Hobbs needs to be put to heel. (or am I being unrealistic???)

I've never heard of doing tests with a pencil, eraser, pen and calculater. (Of course the OLD, small town girl that I am) ... but for teachers like Dixon, I can see where that is a very good thing. Otherwise, I'm sure Hobbs and some of the other jocks, would get a lot of help. Hopefully, test scores will rank high for the good guys. I'd love to see Hobbs fail.

Great update you two!!

HUGS  ~Cathy

 



Author's Response:

You beat out Phyllis with the first review! :D That's not an easy feat. :D

We can't imagine how Justin could hide his injuries from Brian. He's bound to get plenty more 'encouragement' to go to a doctor, from all sides. He's being such a stubborn, foolish, little twat - to borrow one of Brian's 'endearments'. :P Can you hear us now, Sunshine?

"At least 'someone' recognizes that my tolerance is much greater than Abbott and Costello's." Brian nods in approval before wincing and massaging his aching head.

We had a blast writing the 'drunk talk' together. Did you guess what Cynthia meant with 'clench your plate'? Hmm, we should probably add an end note to clarify that.

Do Ms Gallagher's snide comments mostly go right over Hobbs' head? He’s not the brightest bulb and is way too used to coasting on his jock status...

We followed the current British method for taking tests. To reduce cheating, all final answers have to be rendered in ink. It wasn't like that for Karynn long, long ago, either... as best she can remember anyway. :D

Yes, Hobbs needs to get his just deserts. That has to happen sooner or later, right?

Thanks for the wonderful review, Cathy! :) We hope to have a teaser for the next chapter up soon. We were delayed... again. :/

 

~ KaBrynn (Karynn & Brynn)

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2019 7:29 am Title: Chapter 41: Thursday, December 14th

Brian is doing well with Kinnetik but Justin is having a bad day. I hope he's going to tell Carl that he can not let Hobbs do that. Nice to see a new update Ladies!!



Author's Response:

Poor Justin. :( We're hoping he'll tell Carl, but the blond can be a foolishly stubborn twat (to borrow Brian's word).

Thanks so much for commenting, Marie-france. :) We're chuffed that you're still reading. Real life is still being a pain, but we are working on the next chapter. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2019 2:16 am Title: Chapter 41: Thursday, December 14th

Well well well, Justin certainly knows how to take care of Brian doesn't he? Oh my....that was hot! 

Poor Justin needs to cut back, he's going to be a walking zombie and someone needs to kick Chris Hobbs ass! 

I like plot as much as the next person but can we have less school time & more flirty/sexy time please? Lol

And will the case of the robbery become more prevalent soon? Tell us Michael is part of it.....hmmmmmmm



Author's Response:

You enjoyed that NSFW opening scene, huh? Karynn may have gotten a trifle 'hot' writing it. :P

Chris Hobbs is such a coward. There's no way, if he can help it, that he'll give Justin a fair chance to fight back.

Sherry voiced the same concern about Justin taking on too much. He's bound to realize that soon and find a better balance - right? Do you hear us, Sunshine?

Greedy Glo... what else is there for us to say? :D Even a steamy sex scene isn't enough for you. :D Hmm, maybe at some point in the future we can lock the boys in the loft for twenty-four hours... how does that sound?

Our intrepid detectives are being incredibly close-mouthed about the burglary. They've assured us, though, that they are still investigating.

Thanks for the fun review! We'd mention the teaser in the FanDoc, but you doubtless read it immediately after digesting this latest chapter. We are working on the next installment – now RL needs to stop being a total PITA…

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2019 12:49 am Title: Chapter 41: Thursday, December 14th

Onions and vinegar,yeah great way to start a new business.. Ha!

Omg Justin. He's going to be bruised. At least his knees from dropping down hard and fast. Brian's going to notice. Something really bad needs to happen to Chris. Something the there could be no retaliation. He so dersrves it. Bastard!

I think Justin is taking on too much. All these test, studying for finals, and possibly another language. When would he find time to a teenager?



Author's Response:

 

Brian doesn't want to hear about onions or vinegar ever again. He should be so lucky. :P

Justin's probably indulging in a bit of wishful thinking as far as his injuries vanishing quickly. :( Poor kid.

Hobbs gets our blood boiling as we write about him. Cowardly cretin. He'd better keep an eye out for Justin's sidekicks, when they (inevitably) find out what happened.

Justin is definitely taking on too much but, hopefully, he'll find the right balance of work and fun soon :)

Thanks for another wonderful review, Sherry. :) A teaser for the next chapter is available in the FanDoc. 

~ KaBrynn

 

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2019 4:14 pm Title: Chapter 41: Thursday, December 14th

The beginning is hot as hell!!! Brian is very open!

The end is so disturbing: I hope that someone will take care of Chris and that he will stop hurting Justin.

Thanks for this amazing update!



Author's Response:

We're glad you enjoyed the first scene. :D Brian certainly relished his visit from the blond blowjob fairy. :D

Yeah, we want someone to take care of Hobbs too. Such a cowardly, closeted wanker. :/

Thanks for reviewing, Claire. We have posted a teaser for the next chapter in the FanDoc, although we are, unfortunately, nowhere near finished with the next chapter. We'll keep working on it, though!

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2019 8:05 am Title: Chapter 41: Thursday, December 14th

"blond blowjob fairy" Brian's so onto Justin. Kinnetic is on its way up. Hope Brian would convince Justin to work with him, so leave GGB work. Enjoyed banters of Cynthis, Ted, Brian.

I feel for Justin. Frau is so kind, hope she & Daph, Syd will kick the hell out of Chris. Most importantly Kinney's reaction of this attack on Sunshine. Payback is needed.

Thankyou for update. hugs !:)



Author's Response:

We love that blond blowjob fairy almost as much as Brian does. :D

Oops! I forgot a couple of the women when I responded to YumYumPM's review. Frau Rose and the monitor, Angela, should definitely be added to the mix.

We'll have to see whether Justin fesses up to Brian and, if so, how the stud reacts. You didn't actually expect us to reveal all the plotty goodness to come, did you? :D

Thanks for being such a faithful reviewer, Pushpanjali. :) We're working on the next chapter - now if RL would just stop being such a royal pain.

Hugs back atcha.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2019 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 41: Thursday, December 14th

How wonderful to see another chapter.  Things are looking up for Kinnetik, shame the same can't be said for Justin.  Somehow you must get back at Hobbs, maybe all the girls?



Author's Response:

Thanks for again being the first to review, Phyllis. :)

Siccing all the women on Hobbs - Daphne, Sydney, Origami Girl, Detective Wen, Debbie, even Cynthia - isn't a bad idea. Hobbs would never survive! We'll have to whisper a suggestion in their ears.

A teaser for the next chapter in available in the FanDoc, and we're working, albeit slowly, on the next chapter. RL - nasty infections on one side and a thesis on the other - should be banished!

~ KaBrynn

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 03, 2019 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 40: Tuesday, December 12th

The angst of taking SATs, plus the resulting after test at the diner was to die for.  Even better was Ted and Brian's meeting with Ted's former employer and how well that turned out.



Author's Response:

The trials and tribulations of a massively important test like the SAT are relatable for pretty much everyone, right? Syd found just the right way to relieve her anxiety with the one-word game at the diner. :D It turned out well for our favorite blond boy, too, even if the cheerleader did embarrass him mightily. Maybe he should thank Sydney. :D

Thanks for all your wonderful reviews, Phyllis. They're much appreciated.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 03, 2019 2:31 pm Title: Chapter 40: Tuesday, December 12th

thank you for update



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. :)

~ KaBrynn

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