Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2017 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 6

Ha, so Chris finally found his one true love. I hope he will have the guts to apologize to Justin someday. 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 7:00 pm Title: Chapter 6

Had to wipe the water I sprayed all over the computer screen at the last part. OMFG! Fuck me that...........WAS UTTERLY BRILLIANT! I kind of had a feeling something like that would happen, but the way you wrote it....Priceless!

Back to the top though...Jen has layed it out to the those 2 boys clearly and did not mince words. It really doesn't matter who anyone is, they will never stand a chance against that group. They are family, whether by blood or not. Jen is a lioness with all who she considers her, and Lord help anyone who tries anything.

Very heartwarming reunion for Thomas and his folks. Kiki is a gem. I'm so glad she's been getting such great parts in these stories. 

Zander freaked me out for a second there, but all fears were alleviated. HA! Oh Luther....I'd almost feel sorry for you if you weren't such a completly hateful bastard. He deserves everythign coming to him. What a joy it will be to watch. I'm there will be much angst before the inevitable happens, but in teh meantime will make for fantastic reading! Having Luther actually meet L&M is going to be another fun filled adventure. I'm sure afte r10 minutes he's going to regret ever signing them on. The suits and charges etc won't be overturned apparently, and he's going to soon discover what utter pains in the ass those 2 are. How utterly useless they will be in his plans.

Loving this and looking forward to the nex update, Thank goodness you are so regular! 

(still chuckling over Craig and Chris..."Mark"BWAHAHAHAH!)

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 6:26 am Title: Chapter 6

Hahahhah i can just imagine Craig's reaction to that😅😅😅So Chris finally dealt with his sexuality?I just hope he doesn't agree to what the evil Craig is offering him..

Zee is so sweet,all the years that he fight with her twin but still she remembered about his allergy,wow that's a real love..
And Zeus is kind of afraid of Jen.Well he should have when mama bear try to protect her cabs she won't care who's the opponent🤔🤔

And last can we have a vivid detail of Menno and Solomon inside the office?? (blushing here)i think it would be so HOT watching two huge guy going at it like there's no care in the world..But most of all i missed B & J in action😘😘😘
Another great chapter,thanks for updating...

Author's Response:

Oh you're going to love C7 and C8....

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 4:24 am Title: Chapter 6

Chris Hobbs I would Kiss You if I Still Didn't Want To Kick Your Ass!! (Is Mark Hot, Does he know the whole story and how did the Parentals take the news?)

Perhaps it is finally time to put the ghost of Chris Hobbs to rest?

I don't know if Justin and Brian are ready to be in the same room as Hobbs but maybe a letter or phone call could help them all move on?

Happy that Zee's brothers are stepping  up to stand by their sister and make their father pay.

Mel always knock!! rofl

Solomon is ready for New York I don't  think Michael and Lindsay have realized that a change of venue won't help their chances but it will be funny  to watch:)

 

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 4:10 am Title: Chapter 6

It seems that all these devious plans they have are backfiring right out the gate. And we all knew how deep in the closet Chris was...

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 2:57 am Title: Chapter 6

Chris -1, Craig - zip.  Can just picture Craig's jaw on the floor.

Zander and Zee - 1,  Luther - nada.  Luther is going to be unimpressed with the Doublemint Twits.

Do we get to see Talon getting a clue?

Glad to see that the brothers are banding together to be the big brothers that htey should have been.