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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2018 3:44 am Title: Chapter 13

Lindsey is back to her "dick" period: that should be interesting if she thinks Zee will be jealous.

Poor, poor Michael: his intestine is running worse than his mouth.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2017 5:54 pm Title: Chapter 13

I love Ralph. He is amazing. 

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2017 8:22 pm Title: Chapter 13

I'm still laughing about the dump ass living in a bathroom..What Ralph could have possibly done to his wine that Michael's stomach grows like a 4months pregnant as the cunt said??but whatever it is he deserve it!!And as for the cunty bitch,i'm enjoying this much how she got ignored and sidestep by Talon who she thought is her friend,hahaha if she only knew...Well all of them is so easily fooled by Talon!!Payback is really is a bitch...I wonder what Luther's reaction about the painting that sold only a dollar??good move Talon🤗🤗

And i can't wait for Zee and the three shark lawyers and genius accountant working their magic of making plan to the Taylor Electronics and another idiot called Craig..He doesn't know what hit him coming out of the blue...

Great chapter and thanks for updating..

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2017 12:35 am Title: Chapter 13

Michael always did have diarrhea of the month now that it is coming out the other end it should keep him busy for a few more hours or another day lol

Luther and Lindsay You can hold onto your delusion that Zee is still wants her ex, that will backfire Big time when Zee doesn't react and Luther parading Lindsay around doesn't do anything again, who wants creme brulee when they have Jello every night?

Talon has taken care of her jewelry and soon she will be taking care of Luther and walking away for good with her dignity intact.

Wouldn't it be funny if Grady was using Lindsay and Michael to get to Brian who he really wants or Justin? rofl

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2017 8:56 pm Title: Chapter 13

Luther is something else.  Says No one likes to share their man yet he's spreading himself around on Talon.  Love how Michael is having bowel problems, serves him right.  Lindsay getting it on with Grady, is that good or not?  Love that Talon sold the painting to Ralph for a dollar.  Mel doesn't really hate Brian and Ted won the pot!  Now Jennifer is pissed on learning that Craig is trying to run his business down.  I know you have something planned for that and can't wait to find out what.  What is Ted going to do for Menno?

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2017 8:26 pm Title: Chapter 13

Luther is about as delusional as L&M. How he thinks he actually has influence over anyone. How he thinks that Zee would be upset about Grady. (sorry....that make me want to both vomit and laugh hysterically)

As much as Talon may be scheming against Luther, I don't see her having any altruistic motivations. I don't see her trying to make amends or anything, it's purely selfish. she doing everything soley for her own benefit IMO. I mean I'm loving that she's totally screwing Luther over!! lol, but I'm not sure she'd hesitate to do the same to any of the others to get what she wants. Who knows...

Michael now......can I just sit here adn say BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ROFLMFAO!!! Oh hell.that was EPIC! Priceless!!! Oh man o man. that had me in absolute stitches! Thank you for that.

I'm also really curious as to what's going to happen with Craig and the store. Now that the gang seem to know what he's up to. Ubelievable that he'd be so low, but then.......he's another selfish asshole that deserves everything that's coming to him. and more!

Excellent chapter!!!!!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2017 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 13

How delusional and ignorant can three people be?! Guess we are going to keep finding out if Luther, Lindsay and Michael keep going the way they are... please let them keep going LOL!

We will now join another episode of The Delusional & The Desperate already in Progress... 

First let's talk about the asshole with the God-complex.... Luther, Luther, LUTHER!! Get a GRIP! You are NOT the Lord of All He Surveys. In fact there isn't MUCH he can really survey right now except his losing battle. For him (and Lyin' Lips) to think that Zee will be distracted or more accurately pissed off that Slut Butt is humping Golddigging Grady, he really has another think coming. There was a reason that Grady is Zee's EX and why it truly doesn't bother her that he is. Furthermore she has Faal. HELLOOOOOooooooo!!! What the hell would Zee want with Lindsay's male counterpart? This chapter made me even further anxious for Luther to get his comeuppance on all fronts, beginning with Talon. I really hope that Ralph leaves with her when she's finally finished doing her damage to that Lying, Sneaking, Scheming Sonofabitch she traded her marriage for. 

Secondly, let's talk about the female member of the LL Ensemble (yes! The Lying Lips Ensemble is what I've taken to calling the Luther/Lindsay Alliance). Loose Lips Lindsay (and yes that statement can be taken two ways if you get my meaning) still hasn't learned her lesson about opening her mouth and her legs yet. What a supercilious SKANK. Well Talon shot her ass right on down to size about her "in" within the art world and Grady... well I suppose desperate times call for desperate measures and that includes tricking with a desperate whore. A stiff prick has no conscience but if he's not careful that Horse-humping Thundercunt Lindsay has is going suck the life out of him and spit out the bones and all for the sake of trying to get the attention and money of someone who doesn't want you or to remember that they once even knew yo' broke ass.

As for the third player in this Miasma of Misery, Michael....LMAO, LMFAO, OMFG ROFLMAO!!!!! I would high five Ralph if I could!! That was a genius way to get Mutton-mouth back and was the perfect accompanying torture to Talon's own brand of revenge. I honestly can't wait to find out what they are going to do next... or to WHOM! I'm sure that list will grow by next chapter but I'm also sure that Michael will remain on the Shit list both literally and figuratively...LOL

Can't wait for the next chapter, Nicole!! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

 

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