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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2018 3:28 pm Title: Chapter 14

Yeah, right, Michael, you are not stupid, but did you look at the documents you signed? I bet not. Talon is not giving 50K$ because you just asked.

So, Grady is doing both and they don't know it yet: I can't wait to see how it will be revealed.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2017 6:19 pm Title: Chapter 14

Why did Talon give them the money? She must have a plan. 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2017 5:25 pm Title: Chapter 14

Perfect way to work in the "love" triangle with Dumb, Dumber and Grady LOL

Oh Michael, why do I bet you didn't read the papers before you signed them.... BRILLIANT!!!!!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2017 1:22 am Title: Chapter 14

Someone give Michael some monopoly money so he can buy a clue, Talon wouldn't give him a thimble of piss if he was dying of thirst much less give him or Lindsay $50000!

Both have a better chance hooking on time square for 0.50¢ (More like the lint in someone's pocket) since they don't  payback anyone unless forced to do and they both spend money like they have a Daddy Warbucks on retainer.

Grady sleeping with both of them is beyond Ewww I need brain bleach, or battery acid to get that imagine out of my head.

Uh he didn't rim Michael right and he did wear two condoms because I doubt after the day and night Michael had he was all April Fresh?? Ewwww!!!

So was Lindsay really out at galleries meeting new people and drinking with them, cause I seriously doubt word hasn't gotten around about her, even if Millicent hasn't dropped the hammer on her yet I doubt Melody wouldn't whisper in a few well chosen years?

Hope Tobias doesn't have a goose egg when he wakes up? lol

Zee is going after Craig and he is going to wish he had stayed off her radar by the time she is finished with him.

I would feel sorry for him but I have better things to do with my time ;)

I am waiting patiently for the next chapter with bleach on standby rofl

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2017 8:56 pm Title: Chapter 14

Grady and Michael.... the thought of Michael actually having body parts.... just EWWW!! But on the upside, Grady is running up mileage riding the Thundercunt and the Tunnel of the Bottomless Dump, so I suppose it's befitting since he's Luther's personal dildo.

I have to laugh at Lindsay's assessment of Michael and in turn Michael's opinion that he's not stupid. There is sooooo MUCH I can say about that! First, why would he even think to ask Talon for money when she can't stand his whiny ass? But then not question why she decided to lend him the money after he asked? Lindsay for all her arrogance, closet bigotry, ignorance and misplaced delusions of grandeur, knows this. I don't think SHE will be signing that paper; only Idiot Boy. Somehow, I think she will be taking the money she has left and finding herself away from Michael sooner rather than later.  

The tasting had me in stitches as well as Tobias' reaction to the wedding venue. I think Tobias could have used a shot of vodka after he came to from his fainting spell. It's nice to have friends in high places.

Justin broke my heart. Craig is such a douche (apologies to douches and douchebags everywhere since you actually serve a purpose where Craig has none). I can't wait until the he falls into the same ditch he's trying to lay for Justin. There's an old adage that says: While you're digging one ditch, dig two. I think that saying is about to become a reality for Craig whereas Justin will come out the better man....again. I'm glad that Brian was able to soothe him in their own special form of communication. Now I think Justin is definitely going to be ready to come out fighting!

 Looking forward to MORE!!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2017 8:48 pm Title: Chapter 14

Yak yak yak i need a brain bleach!!Grady after Lindsay now Michael,it really grossing me out..😣😣😣
And what Talon is up to now,why she just hand over a 50 grand to them??

Well atleast i'm getting excited about the France escapade later on and another wedding at Portland...🤗🤗

Please what happens to the talk between Luther and Zander??

Poor Sunshine,really upset bcoz of his sperm donor...But whhhooaaàa what a way to erase the stress and disappointment...So HOT HOT HOT😍😍😍

Great chapter thanks for updating!😘

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2017 8:29 pm Title: Chapter 14

Looks like Tobias and Darius are speechless about the wedding venue.  But Tobias will be paying for it with audits I'm sure.  I can't get over Michael and Grady, that will put a plip on the Lindsay and Grady love vest.  lol.  Michael thinks he's not stupid.  I bet Talon knows what they didn't say and has plans.  Can't wait to find out what it is.

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2017 7:21 pm Title: Chapter 14

Mostly great chapter. Justin and Brian sex, always great. Weasel sex, not so much. EWWW. Some things are just too gross to even imagine. Love the story.

~Lorie

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