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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2018 3:42 pm Title: Chapter 18

Michael and his jealousy: such a pleasure to read!

Craig is not getting away peacefully: the gang is hunting him and now he's getting the TV. Full disclosure of his wrong doing.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 27, 2017 5:50 am Title: Chapter 18

The whole thing with Grady is getting really interesting. Will Michael and Lindsay hit each other? That would be lots of fun. 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 7:41 pm Title: Chapter 18

Forgot to comment on this last night I was just so excited that they finally got info about Copthorne.

Gus and Jenny called Leda Momma I bet she cried later with Mel in their room.

I got a bit teary-eyed when I read it the second time Leda will be the mother Lindsay was supposed to be to Gus and Jenny instead of thinking only of herself and she will protect them both with her last breath.

The four of them are a wonderful family with a great support system to keep them all safe every second of their lives.

Plus Mel has finally found a partner who is her equal instead of another child she had to look after or avoid like the plague.

Out of this pain true happiness won :)

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 7:15 pm Title: Chapter 18

Wrote own the ingredients for those smoothies. ;)

Jenny and Gus, both calling Leda Momma....oh how that must've made her feel! But it just grapped on tight to her heart. Really lovely. I think Lindsey is going to absolutely freak out when and if she ever hears that. Her loss however. The kids both know what she's really like. they may love her as she's a parent, but they don't like her as a person and they certainly don't respect her. She's lost so much, yet she just doesn't see it at all does she.

Grady is getting nothing more that what he deserves. Aboslutely hysterical tht he's being chased by both L&M! They are going to turn on each other at any moment because of this. Now that will be monumental and can't wait to see if it actually happens. I do believe that that was Talon's idea all along. She really is a manipulative little thing ain't she? LOL. Have to say I'm enjoying that part. 

then there's Craig. LOVE IT!!!!!!!! OMG I busted a gut laughing at his situation! Kicked out of the hotel, news camped out at his home and then 2 little birdies was kind enough to let the media know his current location. AS for his getting bail. Hmmmm. Curiouser and curiouser. The assumption that Copthorne is someway involved in yet another legal manouver certainly is something to give one pause. I'm not sure why Luther is aiding him, but there has to be a good reason. Luther needs to tread carefully. Mind you he really has no idea what the others are all up to, nor how it will eventually come around to bite him in the ass. Looking forward to that.

Oh what tangled webs there are in this. So much fun waiting and watching how things go for the idiots and evil doers. 

Hooray for Zee having the house now! She's over the moon. Very happy for her.

Can'twait to see what else you have up your sleeve!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 2:57 pm Title: Chapter 18

Ok i really want to meet this Copthorne,he sounds bad as Luther or maybe worst..But now that he got the attention of the gang especially Zee,he better watch his back..He has no idea what hit him..Good job Xanthie for sharing that information with family..

Now as for Grady,well it's a big Gross!!sleeping with Lindsay but not satisfied bcoz maybe she lacked dick,but when he slept with Michael not satisfied either??I think he's the biggest perv i know😅😅😅How Zee falls for him,is a big mystery??

I loved all what's happening in Paris,the best one is Jenny calling Leda "momma"is just cute😍i wonder what would Lindsay feel about that when she hears it??But the hell with her,nobody cares anymore...

Oh My God Zeon is priceless,didn't see that coming😀😀😀I'm sure he's struggling to keep a straight face while talking to craig at the same time mocking him...Can't wait for press to get in the evil's office...

Thank you for updating and sharing.😘

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 6:19 am Title: Chapter 18

Hope he gets it good. What is Grady thinking his Dick will run and hide first Lenz then Michael, how gross.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 4:51 am Title: Chapter 18

Zeon and Thomas I hope you got enough popcorn for me because I can't wait to see this show lol

Craig Taylor This Is Your Life!

The press are going to hound him non-stop and they are going to dig and dig there is nowhere he can hide <evil laugh>

Grady has realized that sleeping with Michael and Lindsay is something he will regret for a longtime, Michael is a lousy lover and Lindsay is a cold-hearted Bitch that no orgasm can warm up, he laid down with dogs and woke up with fleas that he will never be able to get rid of.

I would feel sorry for him but I am too busy laughing and doing cartwheels, now that he has tapped both of them he is theirs forever. (Brain Bleach, Brain Bleach!!!)

Thank You Xanthe for giving them the info they needed to take care of Judge Copthorne and Luther the dominoes are falling and they are going to be buried.

Oooooo Tobias is about to have  some Funnn!!!

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 3:59 am Title: Chapter 18

Oh things are heating up.  Michael, Lindsay and Craig are all due for another smackdown.  Great job.

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