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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2018 4:04 pm Title: Chapter 19

Craig is losing it big time: he wanted to play with high profiles and he is only a little fish from the pond.

What about the last part? Is Luther using the name of a dead child?

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 27, 2017 7:08 am Title: Chapter 19

Luther is even worse than I thought. Who uses their dead kid like that? Disgusting. 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2017 9:54 pm Title: Chapter 19

Luther has Craig over a barrel. that was amusing! Since he's currently going under the name of "Zebadiah" all transactions will be considered null and void right? Now that the gang is aware of that, I'm sure they will use it to bring about Luther's end, financially anyway. There will of course be further legal ramifications, long standing ones, I'm sure seeing as he has been doing this for so long. He has proven himself to be sub human and in dire need of as serious ass kicking. Something I know the gang and their ever growing comrades will happily particpate in. I am so looking forward to how you do this. Will be such fun. 

Michael and Lindsey, ineviatly fighting over Grady's attentions is already getting to be a great sport to watch. I stand by my earlier thoughts that Grady is going to get everything he deserves. LOL. While may have been Talon that planted the seed in his mind, she did it such a way that she'll come out smelling like roses. She's playing all three, (4 if you include Luther) sides brilliantly and like the master manipulator she apparently is. The gang will more than like really come to appreciate her abilities at some point. Lets face it, she learned from the best. 

Again, excellent chapter.

Lots of info coming out at every update. 

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2017 5:54 am Title: Chapter 19

Michael is an Incubus, Lindsay is a Succubus and they both plan to drain Grady dry whether he is asleep or awake lol

Luther is so disgusting and what he has coming his way is going to make what happened to Michael and Lindsay look like a love tap.

The level of his betrayal against his wife and children is so horrendous that there is no chance of forgiveness there is only destruction and taking away everything he values.

There isn't a hole big enough for Luther Stark he makes the devil look innocent.

I was not expecting that, good surprise twist there :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2017 5:29 am Title: Chapter 19

Arrgh!  I am so pissed at Luther.  I can't believe the shit he gets away with.  But I think Talon is taking him down a peg.  He's downfall is going to be massive if Zee and the family have their way.  It's funny how Michael thinks Grady would want to continue to see him.  He seems to latch on to people like a limpet.

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