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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2018 3:49 am Title: Chapter 42

Hunter is going to make Michael dance until his feet hurt.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2017 2:01 pm Title: Chapter 42

Michael won't know what hit him when they are through with him. 

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 42

Aaaah i'm seething right now toward the asshat,how could he do that to Ben,not just stole from him but cheated too was very low and outrageous..i can't think of any words worst that worst..Ephraim please let him pay hard and bring him totally down..!!As for Lindsay,wow I thought she's finally thinking to strengthen out her life but then turn around and do what she did in gallery??Jen's right she's getting better in a worst way...

So excited for the next update...

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 7:27 pm Title: Chapter 42

everytime I read a new chapter, with all this sort of angst and drama, I  think to myself, what mroe can happen. but then, you hit us with something out of the blue. I think how much lower can Michael and Linsey go? And again, you throw no punches. I mean, lower than sludge doesn't even cover it.

While Lindsey is just plain dumb, her current machinations are slightly less vile that Michael's I mean what she's been doing is terrible and obviously unlawful, Michael on the other hand is so far beyond reprehensible! My goodness! To do what he's done to both Ben and Jenny. I suppose we shouldn't really be surprised, but honestly...I really can't wait till he goes down! And I mean down HARD! while I'm really looking forward to it, another part of me wants to see him keep digging himself in even deeper! I want him to get so low that nothing could possibly help in out of it, no excuses could ever be made. I guess I want to prolong his agony. lol.

I seriously nearly peed myself laughing over the dogfood. (yes, previous chapter I know, but I missed that review, sorry) I'm sure the yall new he's eat it. they are all aware of his attitude. If not, they would have put a sign that said "dog food", not just "don't eat". that had me in absolute stiches for ages. Remembering it while writing this still makes me smirk.

This chapter's laugh worthy moment...Hunter now owns the lot where Michael's stuff is stored! Holy shitballs! LMFAO!

Oh this was awsome! Truly awsome. 

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 4:56 pm Title: Chapter 42

A song to go with this chapter: Hi ho, hi ho it's off to jail we go!!

I ranted for nearly an hour when I read how Wankerboy cheated Ben out of his money. And now he's doing the same to little Jenny. Let him and Blondzilla go to jail again. And now for at least five years so when they get out everybody will have moved on and totally forgotten about them.

And the finish of this chapter: Hunter owing the storage company where widdle Mickey has his stuff....... I howled with laughter.

Man, this story is getting better with each passing chapter.Where do all these wonderful and wicked ideas come from?

Can't wait for the next update.

XOXO

Meriam

 



Author's Response:

Heads up you are going to rant some more about widdle Mikey.

Oh and guess who's coming back...

Happy reading darling

Nicole xxx

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 1:55 am Title: Chapter 42

Looks like Michael isn't the only one going down Lindsay was double dipping her hand in the till and after they figure out how much she has taken perhaps she and Michael can get matching handcuffs?

I just love when the family comes together to put Michael and Lindsay in their place it makes the holidays so festive lol

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 12:51 am Title: Chapter 42

Oh my, what wickedness are you up to.  Love that Michael got served by Jenny.  And that Hunter now owns Rudyard Garage.  That means he owns everything stored if Michael doesn't pay.  I'm not sure how you're going to manage that.  In the mean time everyone else will be having fun in Italy!

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