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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2019 4:41 pm Title: Chapter 5: Nightmare on Elm Street

Fucking Debbie always puts her nose in other peoples stuff

Reviewer: LeatherCuff Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2019 9:14 pm Title: Chapter 9: Uphill Battle

Brilliant final line of another great chapter 😍

Reviewer: LeatherCuff Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2019 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 8: Romance Shit

I wish this had been an actual scene in the show ❤️

Reviewer: LeatherCuff Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2019 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 7: Dickery-Dock

I'm enjoying these stories so much... Brian is such a conflicted character but you really allow us to see what's beneath the mask

Reviewer: LeatherCuff Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2019 10:23 am Title: Chapter 3: Clutter

Brian is learning! 

Reviewer: LeatherCuff Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2019 2:29 pm Title: Chapter 2: Dangerously Horny

What bracelet? I'm confused, have I missed something? 



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Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2018 7:43 am Title: Chapter 9: Uphill Battle

Sad ending but great story - wonderfully insightful as to Brian’s struggle not to fall in love. TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 6:29 pm Title: Chapter 9: Uphill Battle

Great series. Loved it. Thanks for posting this here! TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2017 9:56 pm Title: Chapter 7: Dickery-Dock

Michael is apologizing? Really? That's a new beginning!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2017 9:39 pm Title: Chapter 6: None of the Above

It's amazing how you can make us feel what they are going thru.

I would like to crush Michael; I can't support how he treats Justin.

After the car, the apartment; Brian knows how to sweeten his bad actions.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2017 8:48 pm Title: Chapter 5: Nightmare on Elm Street

Deb could be so inconsiderate. No wonder her son could be the same way.

I love when Gus runs to his Daaaadeeeeee...

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2017 8:33 pm Title: Chapter 4: Cake and Compromises

Brian can do gifts; almost a romatic one "It's the exact same color as your eyes"...

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2017 7:37 pm Title: Chapter 3: Clutter

Brian can be harsh and careful with Justin quite at the same moments.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2017 7:13 pm Title: Chapter 2: Dangerously Horny

So nice to read how they deal with the bumps on their road.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2017 6:54 pm Title: Chapter 1: Stranger Things Have Happened

It's not new, but Michael is such a pain in the ass.

I love the way you write: very well built, detailed, emotional, but not too much, and most of all, plausible.

Justin and Brian are sometimes struggling, but they try to be there for each other, and to understand each other.

The munchers are also painful and very demanding.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2017 9:25 pm Title: Chapter 9: Uphill Battle

Do you realise how much I freaking LOVE, Jesse? He is so so good for Brian. I would so lol if he wasn't even real, but he is and I adore their friendship. That was so sad what happened to Lindsay and the baby - and Brian may have acted like he didn't care, but he did. It hurt him just as much, he just didn't know how to process it :(

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2017 4:32 am Title: Chapter 8: Romance Shit

Michael is an asshole. He only told Justin about Rick to piss him off and upset him. And Melanie's behavior at the table was disgusting. She had no regards for Justin's feelings at all. All she wanted to do was hurt Brian. I'm glad they made up - Brian buying flowers was SO cute.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2017 3:30 am Title: Chapter 7: Dickery-Dock

Guh, Justin is SO good for him :)

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2017 2:59 am Title: Chapter 6: None of the Above

Brian Brian Brian, you silly boy. You could have fucked anyone and it would have upset Justin, but you had to go and fuck, Rick, didn't you. You silly boy. I'm glad he realised he made a mistake, though. And the fact that he told Rick that makes me happy. I LOVE that he made an apartment for Justin - so that he can have some space and get away from him when things get difficult between the two of them. It's a great sign that Brian is growing and is actually aware of the things he does - and that he wants to change. But he doesn't know that yet lol

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2017 2:33 am Title: Chapter 5: Nightmare on Elm Street

I was waiting for Joanie to meet Gus, and omg, how rude was she when she asked why they'd called him that, who does that? I felt so sorry for Brian here. Debbie had no right to put Brian in that position :(

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2017 1:49 am Title: Chapter 4: Cake and Compromises

OOOOH, what is Deb asking him? 

I lol'd at Brian being so uncomfortable around Jennifer and the whole pointing the gun thing, it's like, bless her, she's trying to like him lol.

And Brian giving Justin a car for his birthday was SO cute - especially when he said it was the same colour as his eyes, but as soon as Justin acknowledges he said that, it's like Brian has to deny it and make a joke about it. He is so messed up, I love him LOL.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2017 12:40 am Title: Chapter 3: Clutter

Brian talks when he's ready. But I do love how Justin is helping him with that. It may annoy Brian but it's good for him, and I think as much as he would deny it, he feels better for doing so. It also helps him talk to Justin when he has something to distract himself with - like opening and closing the fridge, it's like he can't always say something when he has eye contact with someone. It's like god forbid they see into his soul lol.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2017 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 2: Dangerously Horny

I really love the way you write these two. But omg, sometimes I just want to shake Brian so hard, it's like his brain is a little slow when it comes to relationships lol

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2017 1:27 am Title: Chapter 1: Stranger Things Have Happened

Brian's reasons may have been "silly" (quoting him) but they're extremely valid when you think about his childhood. I think it's sweet how he wants only the best for Gus. But I am glad both Jesse and Justin managed to convince him to change his mind. I did LOL at how he called and shouted out about being monogamous while Justin was there and then made Linds swear she wouldn't tell anyone lol.

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