[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2017 11:48 am Title: Chapter 14
Simon and Ken, along with their sons are going to fit right in. Until they meet Michael I imagine.
Author's Response: Maybe even after they meet Michael. LOL
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2017 10:33 am Title: Chapter 13
It's funny how all three showed up at Kinnetik. Gone are the days when Brian would not have told Ted how much he appreciates him.
Author's Response: Brian is changing and evolving in our story - but not too much. LOL
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2017 10:22 am Title: Chapter 12
What a perfect way to bring up sexual harassment and solutions. It also makes me feel bad because when I was younger I was a snoop. If I could go back in time that is something I would change.
Author's Response: Very interesting comment. Glad the story had an impact.
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2017 9:56 am Title: Chapter 11
Gus had a good first day. Poor Owen he didn't get the full Brian treatment. Think of what he missed.
Author's Response: ;) lol
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2017 9:27 am Title: Chapter 10
Brian has an amazing way of explaining things. I think John is working his way into JR's heart.
Author's Response: John and JR have a special understanding.
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2017 8:14 am Title: Chapter 9
What a wonderful party. Poor Owen, his first introductions were Emmett and Debbie. Brian really is worried how Bree is picking things up, but he's really perfect to help JR come out of her shell.
Author's Response: If you're not used to this family, it would be so intimidating.
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2017 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 8
An interesting chapter. We learn that Emmett has always wanted a house with a white picket fence. Somehow I see a new house on the lane. It's interesting that while Brian is getting closer to Joan we don't see Claire, his sister as often. I notice that Michael is more interested in finding Brian than talking to Owen. And then you end it with Bree quoting Brian talking to his flowers. LOL.
Author's Response: You could be right about the new house. And I love that line to make the flowers grow. LOL
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2017 6:48 pm Title: Chapter 7
The Lane is growing by leaps and bounds. The Wendy house is perfect and soon Bobbie's sister's house will grace the lane.
Author's Response: Yes, our small family is expanding.
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2017 3:40 pm Title: Chapter 6
What I like about this chapter is that Molly is firm in wanting Justin at her wedding and Owen is right there with her. However, Justin wants Molly happy and knows Craig not being there will marr the wedding.
Author's Response: They are a caring family in spite of Craig Taylor.
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2017 2:20 am Title: Chapter 5
Ah ha. We have Kinnitek moving to New York in the future. A Wendy house in the future. As well as an art show. There is even a wedding. Nice story lines.
Author's Response: Thanks, hope you are enjoying this story.
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2017 12:13 am Title: Chapter 4
Let's hope that Bre never finds out about the trip to the zoo. The Wendy house should keep her mind off it if she does. Now if you can just turn Craig into an accepting father rather then a bigot.
Author's Response: The resurrection of Craig is not likely.
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2017 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh this chapter was amazing. A trip to the Statue of Libery and the Met. Which works well with the storyline of Justin's new paintings. I see a playhouse at Edna's Treasures in their future.
Author's Response: Thanks.
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2017 7:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ken and Simon are in this story for the long hall, especially since I know that Gus falls for one of the sons. I knew that Brian had a sweet tooth, but usually he sneaks his treats.
Author's Response: You're right, and Brian is very conscious of his appearance, so he doesn't often give in to his sweet tooth.
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2017 6:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's so nice that Brian and Gus can getaway together.
Author's Response: Father and son time is so important.
Date: Jan 11, 2017 5:32 am Title: Chapter 20
Fantastic story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: Jan 11, 2017 5:19 am Title: Chapter 19
Brian reacting to Em had me actually laughing out loud
Author's Response: LOL...I had to go back to re-read it!
Date: Jan 11, 2017 5:10 am Title: Chapter 18
I love seeing it all from a newbie perspective
Author's Response: LOL
Date: Jan 11, 2017 5:00 am Title: Chapter 17
Mel's speech may be one of the best I've read!!!
Author's Response: HA!
Date: Jan 11, 2017 4:49 am Title: Chapter 16
I'm glad joan is finally relaxing and feeling a part of it all
Author's Response: She's getting there.
Date: Jan 11, 2017 4:39 am Title: Chapter 15
Gee Michael, jealous much?
kinnetik n-ergyis another brilliant name!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: Jan 11, 2017 4:25 am Title: Chapter 14
I'm glad the guests get along so well
Author's Response: :D
Date: Jan 11, 2017 4:16 am Title: Chapter 13
Brian with the desk lamp had me cracking up
also if Cynthia has a bad feeling still, it worries me
Author's Response: Yeah.
Date: Jan 11, 2017 4:07 am Title: Chapter 12
So scary but so brave of Gus! I am proud of Brian for not killing Trevor
Author's Response: So am I!
Date: Jan 11, 2017 3:53 am Title: Chapter 11
I think Owen will relax and do fine
Author's Response: He does. The whole family is a hoot!
Date: Jan 11, 2017 3:24 am Title: Chapter 10
I think Brian's explanation of him and Mel was perfect!
Author's Response: Thank you.