Date: Aug 01, 2019 11:34 am Title: Chapter 9- LOVE DON'T LOVE NOBODY
WARNING: EXTREME GRAPHIC VIOLENCE ...
Here I was so sure David was going to get his just-due, and yet the other two cretins who suffered their demise. And oh, what a demise it was. It didn't bother me reading it... what does that say about me? *yikes*
But through the ?horror? I really had a good laugh... mini-uncooked bratwurst ...
Wherever do you come up with this stuff? have you ever read Richard Laymon? It kind of reminds me of a couple of his novels.
Well, I do hope we get to be witness to the Docs, too.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2018 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 9- LOVE DON'T LOVE NOBODY
Damn...evil minds..lols...they deserved it.
Date: Mar 22, 2017 6:12 pm Title: Chapter 9- LOVE DON'T LOVE NOBODY
Holy torture, but so freaking good!!!
Date: Feb 28, 2017 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 9- LOVE DON'T LOVE NOBODY
Ewwww! You weren't kidding with the 'graphic' warning. TAG
Date: May 31, 2016 3:07 pm Title: Chapter 9- LOVE DON'T LOVE NOBODY
Hello my dear!!!!!!!!!! Well, I must say, your warning for graphic violence was spot on!! WOW!! and YIKES!!
Like I said on FB, I have no idea how I missed chapter 8. Ah well. I got to read 2 chapters at once.
I must say, I think Kip and Sap got off easy compared to what my lay ahead for David. LOL. Good to see Deb and Jen working wo well together. I can see them becoming friends do to their many common interests. Perhaps find a new found repsect for each other. haha.
Lindsey......talk about seeing a different side of her!! Again...YIKES! If the families merge, obviously another realtionship will be in teh works, between her ane Mel. Nothing like a perverse love ot pain and torture to bring people together.
Gotta say, teh bird thing.......eeeeeeeeeeeeek! I'm honestly scared shitless of birds, so that scene playing out on my head. Yeesh! Got chills!
Terrific 2 chapters. Have been thoroughly enjoying this fic. Enjoyed the twists you've created.
Looking forward to more.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Hey Elaine!!! What can I say about this chapter? I had so much fun being this vicious and I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I have to say this is probably the first time I really enjoyed writing Lindsay and Mel. Talk about a match made in CREEPY!! Jenn and Deb are getting to know each other by more than reputation only and that can only strengthen the partnership. They may never fully be friends but they definitely have a newfound respect for the others ability to torment their victims. Wait until their sons get to David!!! **Hint: Brian is going to see a side of Justin he's never seen but only recently heard about...And so is David!
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
P.S. I promise no more Vultures... well not the kind with wings anyway...LOL HUGS!
Date: May 31, 2016 5:54 am Title: Chapter 9- LOVE DON'T LOVE NOBODY
O boy, this is really hard to read. I can't even imagine what will happen to David after that.
Author's Response:
Sorry if I made you cringe a bit, Claire. I was in a particularly NASTY mood when I wrote this. But I can't say that I didn't enjoy it, LOL! David is in for quite the surprise going forward and not one he is going to like at all! Thanks so much for taking this ride through Sadistic-ville with me!
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: May 31, 2016 1:10 am Title: Chapter 9- LOVE DON'T LOVE NOBODY
Chelle,
Love this chapter. First the annoying of Douchebag Dave. Then the pure sadistic torture of Kip and Sapperstein. Great for reading if you are in a particularly nasty mood towards someone. Thinking about this sure beats wearing an orange jumpsuit for actually doing it. Now on to the Karma for DD.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
LMAO!!!!! I was definitely in a 'MOOD' when I started writing this chapter. And yes, I think I value my freedom too much to end up in that gaudy orange jumpsuit- that's just NOT in my colorwheel...lol Next up the true torment of that Dastardly Disgusting Dom David. *Evil Grinning and Rubbing Hands* I have something particularly special in mind for him. LOL I can't wait!!
~Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Chelle