Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2019 5:52 am Title: Chapter 10: LOVE WILL NEVER DO WITHOUT YOU

Hmm... I just realized I never left a final review. Not surprised as I had stayed up all night reading it last time, while devouring a 12 pack of diet pepsi. Anyway, it was an awesome story. I liked the slight changes you have just made too. If I could have added anything in to the final scene with David, I think the guys should have stood in front of him, Brian reaching around and jerking Justin off, then when Justin let go of his release, sprayed it all over David's face. Kind of a 'Dorothy and the Wicked Witch of the West'. Think it would have worked? Yeah, probably not. But David certainly would have lost any erection he had.

Thank you for bringing ALL of Liberty Avenue into a remake of a cross between Mr. and Mrs. Smith, and Dexter.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2018 4:25 pm Title: Chapter 10: LOVE WILL NEVER DO WITHOUT YOU

Unfuckingbelievable  ...u guys are pure evil...jesus...that was one hell of a way to kill someone...very clever.

Loved the fic...everything was awesome...great team work.

Thank u for the outstanding story.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2017 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 10: LOVE WILL NEVER DO WITHOUT YOU

so so so so so (there are more SOs, but i'll leave it here) good!

first, I love you just a little bit more for working my Patriots into a story!!!!

I almost felt sorry for the torture Michael endured, but it's Michael so that's why it ws almost.. and I like that even though they feel guilty, everyone puts the blame where it belongs... Michael for being a dumbass and David for being a douchy dick!

I love you how worked in all the people I love to hate and gave them grusome deaths!

and everyone (except Leda, I was waiting lol) made their appearance and it was done so freaking well!!!!

Reviewer: Lorna Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2017 5:18 am Title: Chapter 10: LOVE WILL NEVER DO WITHOUT YOU

Great! Loved the BDSM and the portrayal of all the characters.  

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2017 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 10: LOVE WILL NEVER DO WITHOUT YOU

This...I don't even have words. Just know that I loooooooved every second of all the action.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2017 7:15 pm Title: Chapter 10: LOVE WILL NEVER DO WITHOUT YOU

I love how in this chapter all the fighting, death scenes etc are approached by them kind of like a day at the office. lol. Big meeting, and they got it done. Love it. adn thank you for no more bird scenes! ;)

No way could they have David live adn just go to jail. Like they said, he'd just escape and he'd be even more dangerous. Great end for him! Not only having to watch B&J, but having his own form of torture, which was partially pleasure, adn haveing Cynthia finally end it. Very apropo. Must say though, that little twist with Cyn and David was definitely a bit "WOAH!"

Great story all round. Looking forward to putting it on my kindle and giving a good re-read. 

While I'm looking forward to reading updates on the other story, like you, I'm going to morn the end of it. It's inevitable, but it'll be emotional as well. At least once it's finished, again, I can add it to my kindle, curl up with a "glass" (aka bottle) of wine and read in it's entirety again. (and again)

Cheers,

Elaine