Date: Jan 29, 2017 5:59 pm Title: Chapter 16
Holy crap what a chapter! I kinda wish Michael ended up in jail. True asshole til the end...my God Deb! They definitely got what they deserved though. Great story, really enjoyed it, well done!
Thank you, Glo. I'm glad you enjoyed this story. I appreciate the feedback:)
Date: Jan 28, 2017 9:46 pm Title: Chapter 16
I absolutely loved this story. You have a writing style that totally draws me in. Thank you for sharing your work with us.
Hi, Susi, thanks for the comments, I appreciate it a lot. It's rewarding to know that someone liked your work, and thanks for letting me know:)
Date: Jan 28, 2017 12:41 am Title: Chapter 16
Read the entire story in a short time. I had to force myself to switch off the laptop and go to bed at night. Girl, this is one good story.
I love the softer and gentler Brian in this story. He felt so relaxed and happy with his life.
A big thumbs down for Michael. An arrogant, self possesed, cruel and egotistical little bastard of a manchild. To play with his best friends mind was an absolute no no for me. And Debbie? She should learn to count to ten before jumping in to solve matters for her precious little boy. Well at least Mickey got what he deserved.
Thanks for a wonderful read.
Thanks for the comment, I truly appreciate it. I'm so happy that you liked the story.
Date: Jan 27, 2017 8:37 pm Title: Chapter 12
Omg this chapter! My emotions are everywhere....Holy shit, I'm exhausted! Tears then anger then annoyance then fury! Whew....so good, intense, amazing, heartbreaking....I really want Brian & Emmett to be close....
Wow, Glo, it's overwhelming to know that my story evoked that kind of emotions. Thanks for letting me know, I appreciate it a lot:)