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Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2017 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 6

Cringe...cringe. ...cringe..... CRINGE!!!! ARGHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That about sums up my reaction to the HORROR shower scene as infamous as Psycho!! Brain Bleach PLEASE!!! <whimpering> Someone please have pity on me and pass the Brain Bleach!!! 

As for the rest of the chapter, Brian and Justin's relationship is really shaping up nicely. They are establishing trust between them and that's certainly going to come in handy sooner than later I suspect.

Great Chapter!

~Nichelle 



Author's Response:

A bunch of thanks, Nichelle:)

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2017 4:44 pm Title: Chapter 6

I'm finding Michael more and more distrubing. He's becoming scary and could be a real threat to Justin and Brian's relationship once he finds out about it. Even a real physical threat to Justin. I hope not. I'm not sure what to think of that whole scenario. Is Michael lying about their past relationship? Doesn't seem like the rest of the gang is around to verify or not. I'm also curious if he and Justin actually knew each other or is this very much a new meeting? There have been a few instances that have made my think both ways. Either way, I'm loving how hope Brian is in this. He really seems to not like his past self at all. Hopefully he'll really open up to Justin. He started to, and has begun the ground work for it, but stopped. I just hope that Justin keeps trusting him even if/when Michael gets involved. 

And what's up with Lindsey? Is she just sad about the changes in Brian? Will she try to really sink her hooks back in and keep trying to manipulate him?

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Thank you for the comment, Elaine. I loved to read each one of those:)

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2017 11:04 am Title: Chapter 6

I am so loving these two discovering each other.  I do hope Brian tells Justin soon about Michael.  You never know what he might do once he finds out about Justin. 

The shower scene with Michael was infurriating.  I'm glad Brian changed the locks.  He's becoming a stalker.

Can't wait for the next update. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review:)

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2017 3:08 am Title: Chapter 6

I cannot wait for the next chapter...I can't get enough of this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much:)

Reviewer: Amanda80 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2017 1:52 am Title: Chapter 6

I'm still trying to figure out if Justin knew Brian before the accident and was told by Michael to stay away.  Michael clearly has some delusions regarding Brian and I wouldn't be a bit surprised if Michael was somehow involved in Brian's accident and subsquent amnesia.  Can't wait to read more 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, dear:)

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2017 11:08 am Title: Chapter 5

This Brian is so damn adorable!  I love his and Justin's first date and first time making love.  Too perfect.

I understand Michael's grief, it would be really hard to be in a relationship with someone who doesn't remember but it's been two years and it doesn't appear that his feelings and memories are coming back.  I know it hurt but he needs to move on.



Author's Response:

But Michael can't take a hint;)

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2017 12:34 am Title: Chapter 5

Really enjoying this story!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad to know that:)

Thank you so much for leaving a comment.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2017 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 5

I love this story (but HATE Michael!!!)  Brian and Justin spending time together just made my heart smile! the dating and hell Brian was so sweet when they made love and that's exactly what it was, it wasn't fucking

Michael needs to get a grip.... I want this to come to light... I want everyone to know what Michael has been doing to Brian!  I want Justin to find out and to pummel Mikey for keeping this up!



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you liked the story, I'm posting another chapter tonight, I hope you'll like it.

Thank you so much for reviewing:)

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2017 8:35 pm Title: Chapter 4

I can't figure out if Justin knows Brian and had been told to stay away, or if Justin doesn't remember him either and their connection is just that strong they both feel the pull.

I want to throat punch Michael.... and I am upset at Emmett the most for still harping on the Stud... Em I would hope accept the new Brian and not linger on the old one.. Everyone else I get... Ted and Brian didn't really become "friends" until later on, but Em :( 

I wonder if anyone will be upset with Michael for misleading Brian when they find out... because they should ALL find out what he's been doing... I'm thinking nobody knows since Brian never says anything in public so he doesn't embarass Michael

 

can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Ted and Emmett, and Mel didn't have the luxury of meeting Brian before he really became the Stud. And in my opinion, Emmett was more of a friend of Michael than Brian. Ted later became the new best friend(in the series) although Brian helped them all whenever they needed him. 

Thanks for commenting:)

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2017 8:05 pm Title: Chapter 3

Hearing that Brian thinks he was an asshole means that he should do what he can to still avoid being him again.

At least he's smart to know he can't just accept the nauseating advances of Michael... stay strong B!!!



Author's Response:

Brian needs to be strong for the storm coming to his life:(

Thanks for the review:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2017 2:33 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'm liking this a lot. But I get the feeling that Justin didn't know Brian from before and that things are different.  Him going to community college and not working at the diner.  That means that Brian and Justin are meant to be.



Author's Response:

You will learn everything soon, hun. Thanks for the review:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2017 2:16 pm Title: Chapter 3

Now I understand.  You've put everything in prospective.  I like how Cynthia helps him in his professional life, which in a way he always kept seperate for his private life.  Do you think knowing Michael was why he was such an asshole?



Author's Response:

Everything we surround ourselves in our everyday lives will have an effect on how we think and feel especially when we are with them for quite some time. So, having Michael and everyone, (his parents included) have some effect on Brian in one way or another.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it much:)

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2017 1:05 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'm loving the flirting between Brian and Justin.  It's so nice to see a different side of him.

I think Brian needs to just tell Michael it's over and they aren't going to get back what they had.

Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Yeah, they are going for a date! Thanks for commenting:)

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2017 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting story idea.  The thought of Brian and Michael together as a couple makes me want to vomit but I'm along for the ride.  Off to read the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for giving it a chance and thanks for reviewing:)

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2017 6:57 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh dear lord....I'm quite literally nauseus. the very thought of Michael and Brian. Ugh...Yuck and please hand me the brain cleansing bleach!

the very idea of him taking advantage of Brian like that. It's unbelievable. Not surprising cause he's a complet vomitous ass, but still....I'm hoping that Brian's friends and family come forrard and have him understand the truth. But then again, why haven't they thus far? How have they allowed this hoax to go on? Oh man...pleae tell me it's all a hoax on Michael's part! that they really weren't together? I may heave. If so....then at least Brian instincts are on teh money and he'll end it all once he "meets" Justin.

Ah man...I'm so looking forward ot the next chapter, but yet.....there's apart of me that's partly scared. LOL. It's kind of like watching a scarey movie. You put your hands over your eyes at the scary parts, but still peek through your fingers. ;)

Terrific chapter! 

cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

There's one more chapter that you might need the bleach, and I'm so sorry for that. I'm going to post 2 chapters though, hope you'll like it. 

Thank you so much for reviewing:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2017 3:41 pm Title: Chapter 2

I'm wondering if Michael is lying.  Did he see his chance and run with it?  But then I would have to wonder about Emmett and Ted that they let Michael do such a thing.  Did Michael have Brian's POA or is that yet another lie?  Am enjoying this story a lot.



Author's Response:

Well, I can tell you that Michael really have Brian's POA, the rest will be revealed in coming chapters. Thanks for reviewing:)

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2017 3:18 pm Title: Chapter 2

Michael is sleezy... Shame on him for being so selfish right now and not misleading, but outright lying to Brian...  and I'm sure we find out soon, but how the hell does the family not tell Brian the truth?  I'm sure they are told to let him remember on his own, but why would they let Michael continue to lie to Brian???  I can't imagine they would be unaware of what he is doing? (especially after the first chapter)



Author's Response:

I'll post two chapters, it will answer some of the questions that everyone has. Thanks for commenting:)

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2017 2:05 pm Title: Chapter 2

Brian's story is so heartbreaking! WOW! Eleven years of his life?? Poor Darling! Michael is really an ass!! His interactions with Brian were so cringeworthy- my waking QAF nightmare come to life. YIKES!! I really need to get that image out of my head NOW! Someone please pass the brain_bleach.jpg...ECK! BLECH! UGH! YIKES! JINKIES! 

 

Happy Writing and HUGS, Nadine (Babe)

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

I'm sorry for that image, I'm afraid I still have one more chapter with that creepy image, but I'm going to redeem it with one extra chapter with more Justin in it. Hope you'll like it:)

Thank you so much, Nichelle.

Reviewer: gert Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2017 1:27 am Title: Chapter 1

This is so good!  I am so looking forward to finding out what happened.  Thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

You're welcome and thanks for the comment, I just posted chapter 2:)

Reviewer: Lisajean Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Grrrrrr Michael! That selfish bastard lol I would like to ring his neck!



How heart breaking for Justin :(  And Brian His heart knows :)


 I am sooooo glad you are back writing Nadine!!!  I am looking forward to more.



Lisa



Author's Response:

Thanks, Lisa. I hope you'll like the next chapter that I just posted.

Thanks for reading and commenting:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 5:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

So let me see if I have it correct.  Brian has amnesia for two years.  Brian does remember Michael.  Michael is pushing for a relationship and Brian is balking.  Why do I feel that Michael is keeping something from Brian?



Author's Response:

Yes, Brian has an amnesia for two years. I can post the next one early morning tomorrow(my time), and it will answer some questions regarding the amnesia.

Thanks for reading and commenting:)

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 5:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Terrific start. REally gald that it's an already completed fic and that you'll just be posting regularly. I can see myself waiting for each one. lol.

Anticiapting finding out what happened to Brian to cause the amnesia. How Justin got shoved out.

Brian is ADORABLE! so out of character for him right now, but when 1 can't remember one's life then he's pretty vulnerable. His automatic reaction to Justin is lovely and just goes to show that their deep and abiding love is real. That love is in the soul.

And the whole Michael thing......UGH! am so beyond creeped out! What an utter asshole! Manipulating and lying to Brian about their relationship is beyond reprehensible. I dearly dearly DEARLY hope Brian figures it out soon!! But what about the rest of the gang? Emmett, Ted and even Deb? They must know what Michale is doing and as been doing to Brian. Am completely grossed out and desparately hope that Brian NEVER sleeps with Michael as much as Michael is trying!!

Another fic that I'm going to be looking forward to reading over again. Anticipatin every update!

Thanks for sharing this!!!

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Hi, Elaine. If you liked this adorable Brian, I think you'll enjoy this fic(fingers crossed). I know there are so many questions about Brian's amnesia, the gang, and Justin, but all will be revealed in coming chapters. I might post 2 chapters a day if I'm not so busy. I'm going to try, though.

Thanks for reading and commenting. I really loved reading it:)

 

Nadine

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 5:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

wow... what a start... poor Brian and what an asshole Michael... I can't wait to see how the rest of the family has let Micahel tell Brian they have been a couple!!!!! and I wonder what happened that Justin doesn't know Brian either... maybe it was the bashing and they both got hurt? but their hearts definitely knew each other!!!



Author's Response:

This was Brian's POV, so... we'll learn more about the backstory in later chapters. I hope you'll like it.

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I appreciate it much:)

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 2:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oooohhhh that <bleeping> Michael!!! I can just about imagine what he'd told Justin two years ago during Brian's recuperation. He is the WORST kind of abuser! I can't wait for Brian to see through all of Michael's BS!

As for Brian and Justin, I hope that Brian doesn't tell Michael about it. This is their chance to get to know each other without all the headgames and interference from the best friend. By the way, where is everyone else?? I can't imagine that Ted and Emmett or even Lindsay would let Michael live in his delusion and isolate Brian like this. And Debbie... but then again Michael is a chameleon, changing himself into one thing when he's around the others and scheming behind the scenes. Hopefully, someone knows where Justin is and brings him up to date on everything or at the very least, has kept him abreast of Brian's healing. Brian and Justin will find their way back to once they were but the question is how?

Looking forward to MORE!! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Nichelle. The next chapter will be more about the amnesia and Brian's accident, and a little bit about Brian and the gang. This is a little complicated actually, with few twists and turns, but definitely a happy ending.

I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story, and thanks for commenting... 'Babe'... Haha

Have a nice day!

Nadine

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

That is just creepy.



Author's Response:

I know, but the next few chapters will explain the backstory about Brian and Michael. 

Thank you for reading.

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