[Report This]Date: Feb 03, 2017 4:09 pm Title: Wedding Day
Great! Really good. I like how you used passed characters like Kip and Sap to create this storyline. I just wish you gave a little more story after Justin is rescued (injuries sustained or emotional side affects)....especially have Justin telling Brian what happened in the past with both Kip and Sap and Brian's reaction. But otherwise I loved it! Cant wait to read more from you.
Author's Response:
I'm working on a sequel called Life Interrupted. I hope you will enjoy it.
Date: Feb 02, 2017 5:18 pm Title: Wedding Day
OMG... I'm glad that Mikey was able to figure this out and not just brush it off...
scary... and nice way to work in the wrong info as clues... if Justin hadn't written in about Babylon and Emmett, maybe Brian wouldn't have asked Mikey about the Morphisto part!
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2017 11:44 am Title: Wedding Day
Omg...what a start....interesting plot...thank u for posting.
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2017 3:32 am Title: Wedding Day
I knew Justin wouldn't leave him like that and that SOMETHING wasn't quite right here. Well done, Justin for remembering that conversation though... but where is our boy?????????
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2017 4:13 am Title: Wedding Day
I'm glad you let us know that Justin didn't leave on his own. I'm still suspicious of Michael, he seems too nice.
Author's Response:
Lol in this story Michael is good. He's still Michael but it's not a anti-Mikey story. Thank you for reveiwing.
Date: Jan 25, 2017 6:39 pm Title: Wedding Day
Whoa what a start!!Someone got a hold of Justin against his will but atleast they allowed him to write Brian which is good for him to get a clue that he didn't leave on hiw own and stupid part whoever who kidnapped Justin..Weĺl after all our little sunshine didn't get high score on SAT for nothing..One thing that i like in this story is Michael friendly,don't get me wrong but i'm a huge anti Michael & Lindsay's fan but for a change once in a while,i love to see a caring Mikey and seems like he and Justin get along better here than before..
Thanks for sharing.😘
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the start. I like anti-Mikey stuff too but sometimes I just want nice Mikey. There is already two villians in this story, no need for more. Thank you for reviewing.
Date: Jan 23, 2017 9:34 pm Title: Wedding Day
Damn!! What a beginning! Anxiety spiked already but can't wait for the next installment!
Happy Writing,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Oh gosh. Thank you. I hope the new chapter doesn't let you down.
Date: Jan 23, 2017 9:05 pm Title: Wedding Day
WOW! That's some way to start off a story! I'm ready for chapter 2 already! Welcome to KD! TAG
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm hoping people like it. I'm glad you do.