Date: Feb 02, 2017 5:24 pm Title: Going for a Ride.
I'm so glad everyone has a part to do, but Det Holloway needs a slap... sounds a bit of a homophobe to me.
is this retribution from the Pink Posse time?
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2017 3:42 am Title: Going for a Ride.
I'm glad Molly realises her dad is a twerp.
I somehow suspected they would bring up Justin running away at 17. those jackass cops :(
Date: Jan 31, 2017 4:06 pm Title: Going for a Ride.
Ohhhh...This is so good! I wonder who took him. And why! I hope he'll be okay....At least he's got his family looking out for him.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2017 4:24 am Title: Going for a Ride.
You've given us some great suspects, but I think we'll be surprised at who the culprit is.
Author's Response:
And it seemed you were, hehe. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: Jan 25, 2017 6:57 pm Title: Going for a Ride.
Whoever could that guy be?I would assume he's straight guy because he doesn't have a clue about the relationship between Brian and Justin..But what's the reason of the kidnapping when he just took off taking Justin with him and without even hurting sunshine??
I hate that Holloway guy,just opening his mouth without any consideration about the family's feeling specially Brian..They should let Jen deal with him....
Poor Brian,everything of what he's done to push Justin away from him before all comes back to haunt him...Hope Carl can find a lead sooner..
Author's Response:
Eek, I hope chapter four answers some of those questions. Sadly, it's not the last we'll see of Holloway.
Date: Jan 25, 2017 4:38 pm Title: Going for a Ride.
Hmmm. curious as to who has Jstin. It's obvious it's someone that doesn't know him, at least not by sight. Wondering what the guy meant by "I know what you are" when Justin mentioned getting married...that was a strange interaction.
I'm not sure Craig would be behind it. Again, the kidnapper alluded to Justin being something...I really want to find out what he meant. Other possiblities? Countless...
OK...off to read the next chapter. See if any of my questions get answered. I love a mystery I must say. I can see myself becoming suspicious of any number of people.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I hope to keep you liking it. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2017 3:52 pm Title: Going for a Ride.
Hmmmmm . . . Who's the mysterious giant man? Why would anyone want to kidnap our Sunshine? Very intriguing. TAG
Author's Response:
Sorry I just saw these reviews. I guess you know now. LOL. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: Jan 24, 2017 9:19 am Title: Going for a Ride.
Very intersting start. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I hope you like this chapter. I'm kind of nervous how it will go over. Thanks.
Date: Jan 24, 2017 8:30 am Title: Going for a Ride.
OMG!!!! Who the hell has Justin?! Of course my first initial thought is Craig hired some goons to keep Justin from marrying Brian and putting him in some kind of Conversion Camp. But then that would probably be too obvious no matter how plausible. Hobbs definitely owes Justin for the whole gun incident but considering what the asshole did, Chris might just have called it even. The only other people I can think of is Ethan, wo certainly wouldn't want Justin happy with Brian or even worse the Sap since he has a vendetta against both Brian and Justin. OMG!! This is already starting to drive me a little insane! LOL Looking forward to the next chapter!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
This will answer the big questions. I hope you like it. Thank you for the review, it made my day.