Date: Feb 02, 2017 5:40 pm Title: Under the Sea
I REALLY hope his fingerprints at least lead the team closer to Justin!
Date: Jan 31, 2017 5:04 pm Title: Under the Sea
Oh my god! Cynthia! I'm so glad she's going to be alright...How scary that must have been. And it's really sweet how Justin is taking care of her. He's doing a good job despite the circumstances.
Author's Response:
Justin couldn't not take care of her.
Date: Jan 29, 2017 3:10 pm Title: Under the Sea
Oh my God!!I hope they can connect at what happen to Cynthia with Justin being missing...When can they find Justin??It's a good thing the kid is with him if not Justin would die from loneliness..Brian hurry finding SunshineðŸ˜
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. I love these reviews. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: Jan 28, 2017 4:54 am Title: Under the Sea
Now that the cops have Hunter what will happen to Justin and Bobbie Jo? So sweet of Justin to write a story just for her.
Author's Response:
I thought it's what he would do wiithout books to read to her.
Date: Jan 27, 2017 10:48 pm Title: Under the Sea
But what's going to happen to Justin with Lee in police company? He & the baby won't have food. :/
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Author's Response:
That is the question. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: Jan 27, 2017 10:48 pm Title: Under the Sea
I'm so glad Ted had Eugene follow Cynthia out.
Poor Justin. I know he's trying to make the best out of his captivity. I'm glad that Bobbie Jo is trusting him now. I do hope they both can get out of their alive and safely.
The one thing I worry about is Justin is going to become very attached to that little girl. He's not going to want to let her go.
Author's Response:
You don't even what to know how close Cynthia acutally became a new victim. I thought better of it though. He is that, you'll see in new chapter that the feelings are returned.
Date: Jan 27, 2017 2:28 pm Title: Under the Sea
Good chapter. I was so worried about little Bobbi Jo.Good for Ted.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I can't write terrible things about kids, just can't.
Date: Jan 27, 2017 1:31 pm Title: Under the Sea
Justin and Bobby Jo are making the best of a horrible situation. Kip.....that is all!!
Well now Lee had done it! He tried to nab Cynthia!!!!! And there are witnesses to his actions! Hopefully the police will be able to make the connection between Lee and the murders but most importantly as the man who stole Justin.
I'm waiting with baited breath for the next chapter. It's times like this I wish I could ban real life for all of our writers (myself included) to let story continue immediately.
Great Job!
HUGS,~
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Sorry it took so long for the new chapter. It's up now. I wish I could ban real life too. I hope you like it. A lot you talked about is in the story.