Date: Feb 02, 2017 6:19 pm Title: Fever
Baby steps but they need leaps and bounds. Food running out, Barbara Jo sick and Lee not coming back!!!
Date: Jan 31, 2017 5:17 pm Title: Fever
Oh dear...What if they get stuck there and no one comes and gives them food?! What if Bobbie Jo is really, really sick?! So cute how she calls Justin Daddy. :)
Author's Response:
I think it would be the scariest feeling, being trapped and not being able to help her.
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2017 6:02 am Title: Fever
OMG! To get so close. I'm sure Kip would have given them the location and that is probably why Lee killed him.
Author's Response:
>>>Evil laugh
Date: Jan 29, 2017 3:22 pm Title: Fever
Wow so Hunter killed his brother too?well it's Kip's own fault things got that way,he knows what he's brother's capable of..Anyway I hope they find them sooner bcoz the baby could be seriously ill and Justin would do anything for the baby to get some help..
Seriously though,Neverbreeze,you're killing me here from excitement and nervousness,just to think of Justin slicing his foot is already a torture until we know what happens on next chapter..You are such a brilliant writer and torturer at the same time but i love every minute of it..Thanks for updating😘
Author's Response:
I"m so glad you are liking to story. Thank you so much for the compliment. I have a short one shot that i'll post after this one is finished. Only two more chapters.
Date: Jan 29, 2017 3:17 pm Title: Fever
WOW!!! So Kip is dead? Of course him questioning Lee about what he planned to do with Justin lying on the ground possibly listening to the exchange was an automatic solution for self-preservation *snickers*. Idiot! Part of me is glad he is dead but the other part of me feels he escaped to easily regardless of the 20+ stab wounds.
So now the race is on to find Justin and Bobbie Jo...SMH I keep wondering how Carl hasn't come across Lee owning that cabin while investigating the man. Something is there but he has to be missing it. Who could that cabin belong to if not Lee? So many twists and turns to go with! Too bad Brian isn't allowed to beat the truth out of Lee. He's far too smug in thinking that he has the upper hand. And in all fairness, they are being forced to ask him for answers, so maybe that is affording Lee a level of self-satisfaction but still...
I had to smile a little when Bobbie Jo called Justin 'Daddy.' It makes sense since he's the one taking good care of her. It broke my heart, as it did with Justin, that she's come to think of the chain around his ankle as normal. What a way for this child to grow up! Hopefully Justin can figure a way out without maiming himself or some random person is going to come by the cabin. Far-fetched I know, but I'm just desperate enough to hope at this point!
Again, great job! I'm totally invested in this story!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
So, no sadness for Kip? LOL. Poor little Bobbie Jo, her little life has been a rollar coaster. Thank you for reviewing. Two more chapters
Date: Jan 29, 2017 1:58 pm Title: Fever
I do hope they can find Justin and Bobbie Jo soon.
I'm so glad they have Lee in custody.
Author's Response:
Only two more chapters, so they better. LOL. Thank you for reviewing.
Date: Jan 29, 2017 3:59 am Title: Fever
Please don't cut your foot off yet, Justin. :/
Author's Response:
It was just a passing thought for him. Both feet. But you're not gonna like the next chapter.