Date: Feb 02, 2017 7:07 pm Title: Cops and Criminals
Oh no.... I think the Sap is worse than Lee... he's gonna be awful with Justin who agreed to do anything to get Gary to find Barbara Jo
Date: Jan 31, 2017 5:38 pm Title: Cops and Criminals
Ewwww....The Sap! What a scummy perv... They better find him before that creep does something!
Author's Response:
Yeah, sorry he is such a creep.
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2017 6:09 am Title: Cops and Criminals
Please tell me you have Brian find Justin?
Author's Response:
LOL. New chapter is up, I guess you'll get your answer. Thanks for reveiwing.
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2017 6:08 am Title: Cops and Criminals
Go, Brian, go! TAG
Author's Response:
He's going, I promise.
Date: Jan 30, 2017 4:33 am Title: Cops and Criminals
I thought we were in for good news and it just gets worse. Please happy thoughts.
Author's Response:
I don't think the good will come until the epilogue. But on the plus side it might be really good.
Date: Jan 30, 2017 3:24 am Title: Cops and Criminals
My heart is racing!! That bum-ass bastard Sapperstein!!! Good Lord, when they say birds of a feather flock together, there was never a more true statement when it comes to Hunter, the Sap and Kip!! YECK, YUCK, BLECH!! Poor Justin! I soooo hope he won't have to submit to that turd's advances. If Sapperstein pulls down his pants, Justin should laugh at him to cause his pint-size frank and beans to go further into hiding. Nasty-Summa.... <in my Bernie Mac voice>
Hopefully now that Carl has a third piece of this jigsaw puzzle of suspects, they will look into Sapperstein. As for Lee, I hope they don't give him a deal of any kind. Let the bastard stand trial and get the maximum sentences on all counts. Hopefully Sapperstein will stand trial with the bastard. Incidentally, now I question if Lee actually killed his bother instead of Gary.
Hmmm... definitely food for thought and certainly eager for MORE of this story!!
Great Job!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Gosh, thank you so much. You might not like this new chapter too much. I'm sorry in advance. I'm so glad you continue to like the story, hopefully I won't lose you with the new chaper.
Date: Jan 30, 2017 2:52 am Title: Cops and Criminals
Wow everything is connected,but this Sap is the one i hated the most..Hoping Brian can get to Justin before Sap could do anything to him..Thinking about that guy touching sunshine want me to throw up!!
Aaah Barbara Jo,what have you done,you shouldn't run like that..Poor sunshine can't do anything...
Brian hurry up......!!!!
Loved it,another great chapter..and wow just two more chapter and this will be over soon....Well i'll just look forward for your another upcoming story then..I love this one,so i'm sure i would love whatever your having next,knowing your a brilliant writer and all...Thanks for sharing..
Author's Response:
I think the Sap is on everyones most hated list. Thank you so much for reviewing. I'm so glad you're liking it. I can't wait for this to be done, I have loved to hear what people say about it in reviews. I'm just so glad that people are liking it and not saying it's stupid and to never write again.