Date: Apr 11, 2017 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Conjunction.
These last two chapters were lovely with their plotty goodness!! I really loved the way Jesse laid it all out for Brian. It gave a whole new meaning to the term "Out of the mouths of Babes." That young man shows more knowledge, wisdom and understanding than the supposed adults in Brian's life. I'm also glad he talked Brian into donating for the baby.
The hotel scene and every scene thereafter with only B&J was HOT!! YAY! They finally did the dirty! So worth the wait. If only they could have stayed there and blocked out the rest of the world for awhile longer...
I am so damn TIRED of Michael, Ted and Emmett! Even if Mel doesn't know any better and is acting predominantly out of spite and jealousy, the guys should know Brian better than that. Out of all of them, HE is the most successful, the most self-assured and the most respected. Yet when it comes to the three of them, they concentrate solely on Brian's perceived faults. My GOD! How I wish Justin had succeeded in kicking the legs of that whiny, judgmental, jealous, obsequious, vicarious-living little bastard's chair from underneath him!!!! That mangy mutt Michael really needs to be punched in the throat. Please get Brian away from all of them but especially from HIM and his toxic influence! *throwing tantrum NOW*
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: Apr 11, 2017 2:25 am Title: Chapter 28 - Conjunction.
I just love your long chapters! I noticed all the serious plot scattered here & there....the sex was hot hot hot! Go Sunshine!
Fucking Michael needs a slap upside the head! I don’t blame Justin. I vote for more ghost shenanigans!
Author's Response:
Good thing you looked past all the sex and didn't miss the plot. Lol. I'll go write more sexy ghost fun for you now. TAG
Date: Apr 10, 2017 8:37 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Conjunction.
If only Justin could communicate with Vic, maybe he would step up and stop the "friends" from pushing Brian's buttons.
The initiation was memorable in so many ways. I loved "no glove, no love"!
I understand why Brian is going crazy trying to rationalize what is happening. As much as enjoyable it is, he can't help it: it can't be real, but it feels SOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!
Author's Response:
Exactly! It's got to be weird having sex with your imaginary friend who's, at best, a ghost and at worst . . . well, who knows. LOL. I actually had a hard time writing that part because it just felt so odd to me. I was right there with Brian being freaked out. TAG