Date: Jun 26, 2019 11:20 am Title: Chapter 3- Reunion
Love it
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2017 4:28 pm Title: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
Yes I think you need to look into continuing this story!! Have always loved your stories.
The way you had the boys meet and keep coming back was refreshing, the playfulness was great with no expectations.
Would like to see how they do mixing their familys together with new found interests!!
Author's Response:
Mcm:
First, let me offer my sincer apologies for not responding earlier since I haven't figured out why I'm not getting noficiations of comments. Since this was a gift request, I can't take full credit for the idea but the carrying out of the idea was mine. I'm so glad you enjoyed the playful interaction between Justin and Brian. I'm so used to writing angst, that humor and play are somewhat unusual to write. I finally have some time and will probably be writing more on this story and possibly the other story I wrote at that same time. Thank you again for your comments, and I apologize for taking so long to acknowledge them.
[Report This]Date: Feb 22, 2017 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 3- Reunion
Nice story It' cool when it's only part with B and J in a different meet I like it !
Author's Response:
Marie-france
I apoligize profusely, but for some reason I'm not getting notifications that folks respond. So several months after you read and commented I am responding. This was a first for me- AU with different way they meet. I write a lot of post 513 so can make my own canon but this was a request for a gift exchange present and what the reader wanted. It was fun to write and I may continue the story - especially now that I have a little more time.
[Report This]Date: Feb 05, 2017 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 3- Reunion
LOVED <3
Author's Response:
Thank you- I appreciate all your comments
[Report This]Date: Feb 05, 2017 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 2- I Bet I Can Make You Scream
I laughed so hard at Brian's... ""Well speaking of lying on top of each other..." < that line was so perfectly him.
Can't wait to find out what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thanks- It is always interesting to see what lines my readers like. It is a great challenge to come up with dialogue that stays in character.
[Report This]Date: Feb 05, 2017 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
I love when these two meet in an AU :) Brian si so honest LOL!
Author's Response:
I usually don't write AU, so glad this worked for you.
Date: Feb 04, 2017 5:01 pm Title: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
I loved it,and I think this could work for them if they are trying to bring the relationship into a serious one..Atleast. they started as a player turns into something as time goes by..
I just wished you're making a sequel for them to know each other more and Jutin moving to Pitts to be with Brian..
Thanks for sharing,it's beautiful story and well written..😙
Author's Response:
Thnak you. I may make a sequel after I finish my current story.
Date: Feb 03, 2017 8:32 pm Title: Chapter 3- Reunion
I loved this. And I would really like to know how they will make it work.
Author's Response:
I am the angst queen so if I wrote more, it would be a little rocky- I'm sure
Date: Feb 03, 2017 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 2- I Bet I Can Make You Scream
I know they will see each other again. I can't wait to see how you will make that happen.
Author's Response:
A little tricky but poetic license is always useful
Date: Feb 03, 2017 6:25 pm Title: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
Great start. Now I need to read the rest to find out whether or not he will actually make him scream.
Author's Response:
thought it an interesting challenge
Date: Feb 03, 2017 7:39 am Title: Chapter 3- Reunion
I would definitely root for a sequel.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it and thanks for letting me know you would like to read more
Date: Feb 02, 2017 7:47 pm Title: Chapter 3- Reunion
Hey Sandy!! Really REALLY enjoyed this! I would definitely love to read another installment of this version of Brian and Justin!! Please continue this series!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Nichelle:
Thank you for your kind words. I think I sequel is in order- just have to find time. I can't take credit for the idea but I can take credit for the development of the story.
Date: Feb 02, 2017 5:05 pm Title: Chapter 3- Reunion
more please... definitely more!!!!
Author's Response:
:-) I will consider a sequel- just ahve to figure out what would happen
Date: Feb 02, 2017 4:53 pm Title: Chapter 2- I Bet I Can Make You Scream
even as strangers, they are just so hot together... such chemistry!
Author's Response:
Glad you found the chemistry believable. I always wonder if I write the characters believable.
Date: Feb 02, 2017 4:42 pm Title: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
I've read this before... enjoyed it the first time, and still enjoying it the second time...
personally I would LOVE the story continued!!!!!
Author's Response:
thanks. I problably will continue- just in a bit when I finish Fatherhood
Date: Feb 02, 2017 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 3- Reunion
I really like this story and hope you make a sequale
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know. a Sequel is a possibility
Date: Feb 01, 2017 5:37 am Title: Chapter 2- I Bet I Can Make You Scream
A little bittersweet. It was great to watch them step out of their norm and just have a great time. I'm looking forward to what happens next!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Since this was a gift story and not a long tale ( like my normal ones) I had to move things along quickly. Thanks for writing
[Report This]Date: Feb 01, 2017 2:26 am Title: Chapter 2- I Bet I Can Make You Scream
A wonderful holiday was had by them both. But holiday's end and Brian is disappointed. But there is always the same time next year.
Author's Response:
Thank YumYUm. YOu are always such a great support
[Report This]Date: Feb 01, 2017 2:17 am Title: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
Love this story and their meeting in San Francisco. It's nice to read such interesting AUs.
Author's Response:
thanks
Date: Jan 31, 2017 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
Loved this story. And loved having them meet in SF. Just made me want to go back there again. Thanks for writing. TAG
Author's Response:
WE went to San Francisco in 2009 and visited alot of the places- ( well not the gay bars- Don't think hubby would like that) but loved it there.
Date: Jan 31, 2017 2:49 am Title: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
Excellent beginning! I'm all for reading stories where Brian and Justin meet differently and are of the same mindset before it evolves.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Thanks- Since this was gift request, I got to write what the reader wanted but I think it turned out okay.