[Report This]Date: Feb 05, 2017 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 2- I Bet I Can Make You Scream
I laughed so hard at Brian's... ""Well speaking of lying on top of each other..." < that line was so perfectly him.
Can't wait to find out what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thanks- It is always interesting to see what lines my readers like. It is a great challenge to come up with dialogue that stays in character.
Date: Feb 03, 2017 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 2- I Bet I Can Make You Scream
I know they will see each other again. I can't wait to see how you will make that happen.
Author's Response:
A little tricky but poetic license is always useful
Date: Feb 02, 2017 4:53 pm Title: Chapter 2- I Bet I Can Make You Scream
even as strangers, they are just so hot together... such chemistry!
Author's Response:
Glad you found the chemistry believable. I always wonder if I write the characters believable.
Date: Feb 01, 2017 5:37 am Title: Chapter 2- I Bet I Can Make You Scream
A little bittersweet. It was great to watch them step out of their norm and just have a great time. I'm looking forward to what happens next!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Since this was a gift story and not a long tale ( like my normal ones) I had to move things along quickly. Thanks for writing
[Report This]Date: Feb 01, 2017 2:26 am Title: Chapter 2- I Bet I Can Make You Scream
A wonderful holiday was had by them both. But holiday's end and Brian is disappointed. But there is always the same time next year.
Author's Response:
Thank YumYUm. YOu are always such a great support