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Reviewer: sandid Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2018 8:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Laughs....if only life could be that simple.  

I liked it, though.  You tied it all up quickly in a nice little bow and it all made perfect sense.

 

Good job

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2017 6:03 am Title: Chapter 1

I can't believe Jen would do that to Brian - what a mean thing to say/do. But thankfully they found each other again. And all because Brian's son had just as pretentious tastes as his father. Way to go, Gus! Great little one shot. Thanks for writing. TAG



Author's Response:

Thank you. I would think that Gus would have expensive tastes. LOL.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 03, 2017 6:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really like this story. I wish it would have been longer though so I could have enjoyed it even more. 



Author's Response:

I'm working on a sequel because people wanted a little more, and maybe see them surprising the gang again.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2017 4:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

Loved this... would love it if you maybe added more chapters to it... go more in depth with them becoming a family again??? maybe????



Author's Response:

I could do that. I'll see what I can come up with after I finish a chapter of my latest story.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2017 11:36 am Title: Chapter 1

Amazing....thank u for posting...i loved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: Kinneysbitch Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2017 7:25 am Title: Chapter 1

Ah that's lovely.... B nice to have a follow up story!!! 🙏🏻🙏🏻



Author's Response:

I decided to do one. It'll be Dinner Rush. So you'll know when you see it.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2017 5:20 am Title: Chapter 1

Very different take, I liked it alot.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2017 3:04 am Title: Chapter 1

Hi there!So finally you got the first fic followed quickly and for that Thank you a bunch😘

Well you almost got me there on the summary about Justin is out with the man in his life:( if only i know it was the adorable little Gussy😇
Even it was a short fic,you manage to explain or put everything right on places,like about Jen,i really don't like her during and after the bashing when she blame Brian but ended up asking him to take care or her son..so no surprise that you chose to make her a horrible mother in this one..And Lindsay,yeah she would always chose Brian over Melanie and I loved how she trusted Justin enough to take care of Gus when she's not around anymore..She's wise not to leave Gus with the Novotny,who knows what would Gus be like growing up in a household like that,Gus could be a second version of Michael..
Now about Brian, he just took face value of what Jen told him without finding what really happen to Justin maybe bcoz he feels guilty and blame himself too of what happen.But i think i agree with him cutting all ties from the gang after all they just gonna add the blame on him maybe Lindsay not so much but not to check on Gus is kind of weird of him..Anyway it's all good,but Justin let him off so easily hah,but atleast they would be together now that all that matters anyway..

Thanks for sharing,i loved it..So please get us more..You're great as usual and brilliant..😍😍😍

Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. I went with how I thought Brian would be, after season one finale he was so broken. With not contacting Lindsay about Gus, I had him still pretty much stopped in time in his head. If he saw any of them he would have to admit Justin was truly gone. And lastly, Justin always forgave Brian easy. This was just 4 years less of heartache.

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