[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2019 11:54 am Title: Chapter 10-Share My Life
I figured I better leave my comment. It was so great to read this again, as there was so very much I didn't remember. I wonder how many thousands of stories I've read since I read this one. And yes, I believe it's a thousand.
I'll start with the lesser of evils... well, not lesser, because it was pretty awful. Sean Sapperstein... what a scumbag. No better than his uncle. The apple sure didn't fall far from the tree. Let's just hope that we have seen the last of the two of them. It's too bad so many years have passed. Justin should have really turned Sap in. I was just happy to see that Justin finally broke down and asked for Brian's help.
MICHAEL!!! God... I just can't express how very much I hate him. Talk delusional. Killing off JT and Dr. Ken... in order to give Rage and Zepher a chance, just as it should be in real life. Should I laugh or cry? Gosh, I really hope Ben reads that garbage... soon!!! The only problem is, with Justin giving everything to Michael, Michael can well afford to live on his own. Somehow, he has to be knocked down a few pegs. I was ticked off when Michael decided to take in the meeting with Connor and Brett, but all's well that ends well, in that case. So glad Michael FINALLY learned Justin is a wealthy man. You can't believe everything you read on the internet. God, I laughed!
The women in Toronto... I am NOT happy with Mel... (I want to write something nasty regarding her.) Is the next story going to change, or has your writing changed over the years? Is Lindsay really a good person, and Mel is evil? I really don't understand Justin giving Lindsay $11k... especially when he's aware of the new loan Brian has arranged for them. I'm VERY interested to know what that is about, too. I have started the other story, but have pretty much just reread the seven chapters that were a rewrite of this ending. I hadn't read that before I started it, so I was a little confused. I don't get to read too much outside all my WIP's that I read... but I will get through it. It's fun reading and reviewing on current stories, but it's also reading completed ones too. Just not as much fun commenting as often.
Well, for a first story, you did an awesome job.
HUGS ~Cathy â¤ï¸
Date: Jan 18, 2019 8:43 am Title: Chapter 10-Share My Life
Love it
Date: Dec 03, 2017 3:22 pm Title: Chapter 10-Share My Life
I really hope this works out. Can't wait to read the sequel.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 8:13 pm Title: Chapter 10-Share My Life
I love Brian's inner thoughts; always a great pleasure to read what happens in his head.
Justin is so determined to end his pain, only it will never really end. I hope he will change his mind during those 90 days. Knowing how you worship Britin, I think he will, but how will it happen is a whole new story that I will jump right in.
Date: Nov 18, 2017 2:25 am Title: Chapter 10-Share My Life
Squeals! I need more, I need my happy ending, with a few smack downs along the way...
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2017 7:28 am Title: Chapter 10-Share My Life
Can't wait to read 2nd part loved this
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2016 1:09 am Title: Chapter 10-Share My Life
Ahhhhh. Read it again. Just as enthralling the second (or third time) through. By why it took them 10 yrs . . . Smh at these two for being so silly. Now, off the read how you're going to make it right. TAG